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Reviews for Who Would Have Thought

By : JustJacie
  • From ANON - bananagirl on October 02, 2005
    Oh, no! Draco had a miscarriage, didn't he :( Please don't pay any atention to the people rushing you, this story is beautifully paced.
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  • From ANON - sak on October 02, 2005
    Oh my goodness! The dream and the consequences of the injury--it is obvious this chapter was important not only to the story but to you as well. It was well-paced and the sadness that Draco could not trace the reason for--I felt it as well. Excellent work and I wonder what will happen next.
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  • From ANON - Anons an ass on August 12, 2005
    If you had taken the time to read the beginning of the story and learned the goodness of Ian you might not feel so biased. that is the one thing that makes this story so unique is that you love Ian as if he were a regular character in the book and not an OC, as most OCs give you the feeling of Mary Sue. Also there are many ways that Ian and Draco can end it without him having to die the most common being cheating. I mean Ians a cuter rocker so he must have tons of guys and girls throwing themselves at him and Draco is not around. I imagine that the fame and such might go to his head and a large amount slutty obsessed fans will seem more alluring than a pregnant Draco. Also one little fact you might have missed while you were scimming through the story instead of reading it is that Ian is no longer in school. I also think this story is doing a better job of progressing Harry and Draco's relationship than most stories do with their 'I've secretly always been in love with you' theme. So ignore them and update soon becuase it is still H/D no matter how you start it off.
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  • From ANON - :0) :0( on August 12, 2005
    I am happy for the update but I am sad because I will have to wait for another. Draco didnt lose the baby I hope? I can't remember how far along he is. Oo update soon or Ill hunt you down I just got my gun license. *Gives threatening look.* Grrrrrrrr.
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  • From ANON - T.P. on July 22, 2005
    Goodness! This is one of the best HP fanfictions I have EVER read. I love Ian, thus, if you make him a bad guy, I will....er..... do something horrible. I usually HATE OC's, but I am in love with Ian!


    Heart Ian!

    Draco is such a doll in this ficcy. Ron is a bastard as usual. Pfft
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on July 17, 2005
    Uh oh! Is the baby okay? Draco? Harry? Oh I need chapter 16!
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  • From takkycat on July 16, 2005
    Oh no! Please let the baby be alright!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 16, 2005
    Um ...
    I can see you're getting annoyed by everyone remarking that this isn't H/D ... why not move it out of this category until you've written the H/D portion? I only came to this story today, (and to be honest I didn't read most of the first chapters - being fairly uninterested about Ian). The reasons being (a) you've put this in the H/D category and I want to read H/D, and (b) Ian isn't even at Hogwarts (and Durmstrang students can travel overseas on weekends? Makes Hogwarts look a bit daft for limiting its students to Hogsmeade!) so the relationship is pretty blah (this is the trouble with OCs ... they rarely inspire interest when paired with main characters). I can't see how you're going to break up Ian and Draco. Unless he dies. It seems rather odd to me that Draco would find two people who he loves en desperere one after the other. Especially his old rival ... I mean, are we supposed to assume that Draco's years of hatred and sniping at Harry are just wiped away because he grew up ...? I suppose you'll have him lose Ian's baby ... which is good. Incidentally it's slightly better now we have Harry taking an interest in Draco.
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  • From zentiis on July 16, 2005
    @_@ OUCH! that was an excellent "action" scene ^_^ this sounds odd but most of the time when fic writers describe "actiony" (good vocabulary^_^;;) scenes i'm usually yawning and scrolling down, but i rather enjoyed yours. bravo, i hope you update soon
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on July 12, 2005
    Harry could have let the other two see him. But he protected Draco. He's defending him as well. Hmm. Can't wait for chapter 15!
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  • From ANON - Narcissa Black on July 02, 2005
    I'm usually not terribly fond of OCs, but I'm not sure which one I want to attack more, Ian or Draco. Pansy was in over her head, but letting everyone think the baby was Draco's was just weak and wrong. What if he really wanted the child and took it away from her? Pretty hard for gay men to produce an heir, and she had said that the baby was his, after all. Anyway, I can't wait for you to update.
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  • From ANON - meirta on July 02, 2005
    As always brilliant. I really enjoy your OC's which is saying something because I almost never give stories with OC's a chance. I like Ian and Ben so much though, I know this ends up becoming a H/D story, which I'm a big fan of, but I don't want anything bad to happen to Ian. Please update quickly, the new chapters always make my day.
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  • From zentiis on July 02, 2005
    that was deliciousssss.......i really like this fic. but-but harry! draco! sexing! (go away ian)
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  • From ANON - ice on July 02, 2005
    hahah! I love it!
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