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Reviews for What a Witch Needs

By : TCardan
  • From saoyedaoez01 on August 21, 2019

    Ch. 3:  I wonder what’s going to happen. Hope there’s no fight. Hopefully, just developing interest betw the two. Got my fingers crossed. 


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  • From saoyedaoez01 on August 21, 2019

    For Chapter 2: good story so far. Was worried for a minute that H and H would get caught. I’m upset Hermione could control herself and hold her laugh. Now Pansy might find out it was Hermione. Basically, I’m hoping not to read any fights betw Gryffindors and Slytherins. Great chapter. And hot, too!


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  • From Mychelle-fennell on July 04, 2019

    I binge read this in 2 days and made an account just to say WOW!!! And im

    looking forward the the other stories that follow this story 


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  • From TheQueenAnne on August 22, 2018

    This has been such a wonderful alternative storyline for our boy hero. I loved the trio and their relationship, especially the amazingly detailed sex. *fans self* The plot was brilliant, the characters were kept close to canon, which I love, and the angst was maintained at a tense but perfect level. Thanks for this labor of love!


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  • From ANON - Kay king on January 25, 2017

    One of the best. Wish you'd finnish the 2nd part


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  • From ANON - on November 12, 2016

    Hi! I loved this story on Granger enchanted. I am so glad I found it here. have you posted it any where else?


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  • From Alytiger on November 10, 2016

    Draco was gonna stop until Harry howed up. Good going Potter.


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  • From Alytiger on November 10, 2016

    Thankfully the boys are going to try and fix this.


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  • From Alytiger on November 09, 2016

    "This is so exciting!" "I am not aroused" I cry, it's too great.


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  • From ANON - Bethany on August 14, 2016

    I hope that this story was well received by all that read this story 


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  • From Annecia89 on May 10, 2015
    Loved it completely!
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  • From ANON - Aby on November 29, 2014
    Petalsoft,

    I have just spent the last five nights reading your incredible story! I have to say that I am so glad that I found it after it had been completed, because I honestly don't think I could have had the patience to read it chapter by chapter as you wrote it. I think I would have been as desperate as our beloved triad were for each other, to get my hands on it, that I might not have been able to be held responsible for my actions [lol]

    I have been in various fan-fic communities since I was a teenager (I'm now 40) and therefore have read MANY pieces of work, and I have to say that without question this is one of the best stories I have ever read! Not only was it beautifully erotic and downright dirty in places, it was also hugely entertaining by way of high drama, comedy, suspense, horror and not forgetting heartfelt romance. I found myself completely captivated by your world and could not tear myself from it. It is truly one of the best thought out pieces of work I have read in a VERY long time and it can only rival, in my opinion, the work of Helmboy a Star Trek: Voyager author whose Travelling Man series of stories were up to now completely unparalleled for their intricacy, vision, writing and overall storytelling. You, my dear, have matched it in every way and I shall be sure to sing your praises far and wide.

    There really is so much I can say about this story that I don't know where to begin [lol] Okay, let me try...

    I absolutely adored your characterisation. Even when the characters, particularly Hermione, were acting OOC the writing was so well done that you could forgive them for behaving in the manner that they were. When the story settled more into its rhythm and pattern, it was easier to see Harry, Hermione and Draco behaving as they were, especially as the influences on their lives, Harry being a Dark Lord and Hermione the final heir of Marlstone, and being in the places and situations they were, Marlstone Manor being the ultimate catalyst, that their behaviour would change and their darker and more hedonistic sides would be let loose. It was great to see this as it's a pretty big departure from J.K's originals. Yes, there were times throughout the books that there was a slightly darker side to our protagonists, but for the most part she kept it tightly reigned in, whereas you let them play...big time!! [lol]

    I also loved the backstory that you gave each of the characters, those we know well, those we know a little of and also your own original characters, all of whom I loved! Marlstone Manor is an incredible place and the great details you gave about it only served to make the place more alluring and believable. As for the story of Merlin, Mordred, the first Marlstone's and the "triad" relationship, it was a stroke of genius and pulled everything together so perfectly that once you started reading you just HAD to finish so as you could know all the wonderfully and deliciously twisted secrets!!

    I can say there are times in reading this story I have laughed out loud (frightening my poor cats and having them look at me like I'm a mad woman!) been so tense I could feel my jaws clenching, and points where I was so thoroughly turned on that my eyes were crossing!! Seldom can a professional writer manage to pull those feelings from me, so you should be extremely proud that you have written such a high standard piece of work.

    Thank you so much for writing and sharing this wonderful story with us, I have loved and appreciated each and every moment of it and I look forward to reading the rest of your work.

    Aby
    >^..^
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  • From Miss_Nia on September 02, 2013
    So, I've read this story before (twice before, actually lol) but it was a while ago. I recently wanted to read it again, so I've been looking on just about every site I could think of reading snippets of stories that sounded anything like what I could remember from this one in my desperation to find it again. I ever resorted to googling it! Regardless, I FINALLY found it again and I just wanted to say that while this may have started out as a small story, I'm so glad it turned into something much more. This is one of my very favorite fanfics, and one of the best I've ever read as well. I've never actually reviewed a story on aff.net, but I just wanted to convey how much I love this piece of writing.
    Thanks so much!
    Miss_Nia :)
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  • From ANON - Night Owl on August 17, 2013
    Can I just say, thank you for not stopping this at chapter 8?! I know you were done with the challenge, have been fine with this fic forever, and may not even read these anymore, but the peach scene has been stuck in my head for days lol. Wish my past boyfriends had read this!!
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  • From ANON - jordan on March 19, 2013
    As for the teen epolouge id love to know wbho the next marlston gaurdian is and if it was always the women maybe lilly falling madly in love with two blokes and scorps two potential lovers...
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