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By : TCardan
  • From ANON - Twinkle on June 05, 2005
    Good chapter, it was nice to have some light-hearted fun between the Gryffindor boys. By the way... Is Snape still watching the show? :D I look forward to reading your update, and I'm glad Ron has something to keep him occupied. ;)
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  • From ANON - Marie on June 05, 2005
    I thought that this chapter was absolutely hilarious I never thought that you could imagine those lot licking and sucking on peaches. my sides are sore from gigglingwell done update soon
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  • From BlackLustz01 on June 05, 2005
    Um, its like 10:00 pm where I am, and well....I just got screamed at because I was laughing to loudly. lol.

    Peaches...*snorts*...hahaha. Reminds me of the year 10 sex ed class I fortunately didn't attend. I was told that like very other year, the teacher handed out a banana to each student and the said student had to place a condom on the banana...boy or girl it didn't matter they HAD to do it. I seriously doubt I would have been able to control my self if I was in that class. Don
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  • From ANON - rubberduck on June 05, 2005
    harry took to being a teacher very quickly didn't he? well, we all know he's a good one. much better than that greasy git. that was a very funny scene, especially when mcgonagall came in. i'm glad ron is very happy now, but that lavender sure moves fast. some girls have a policy not to kiss on the first date. she certainly doesn't mind doing other things. wish i knew someone like that when i was in school hehe.
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  • From ANON - fanficnut on June 05, 2005
    LOVED the peach chapter so so much!!!! Keep writing, I love reading your story!
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  • From ANON - pucca on June 05, 2005
    oh jesus... ^.^ good job on this chappie. keep up the good work! after seventeen chapters, it still has me hooked. ::thumbs up:: update soon!
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  • From ANON - Dreamweaver on June 05, 2005
    LMAO - that was hilarious. I love the idea of them all sitting around asking for advice and technique (pity a few more guys didn't do that but I suppose that's half the fun of practising). Excellent chapter.

    And I loved this part too. ;)
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  • From ANON - lilly on June 05, 2005
    Very cute and funny. I can not wait for the next chapter.
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  • From robin777 on June 05, 2005
    Great chapter. You had smut and laughter. I loved Harry's lessons.
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  • From ANON - Narcissa Black on June 05, 2005
    Now that's what every school needs. Proper lessons in eating pussy. Should be a NEWT level course.
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  • From ANON - canis major on June 04, 2005
    oh they are so busted!!!

    Canis major

    good work!!!
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  • From ANON - morgan le fay on June 02, 2005
    I cant beleive you made Snape into such a perv...ack. Still love the story though.
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  • From ANON - Ryu on June 02, 2005
    lol.Snapes such a perve! Hey, would you like some more ideas for sex potions? I'm so lazy, I'm never going to get round to writing a story but u can have my ideas if you want...First theres this one * holds up small glass with golden liquid* This one all three can take and when one of them cums the others will too, so even if say Harry is pleasuring 'mione, he'll still cum when she does(and so will Draco even though he's just watching).Then theres this one * holds up flask with light blue liquid* I call it Ghost touch. If I were to write it, I'd say Hermione would use it first. After she's drank it she can get into Harrys or Dracos mind for an hour. And whatever she says they feel as if she were really doing it. Very useful when theres a boring potions class.Imagine if you will, Draco is quietly sitting in potion making...er...a potion(--.--;)..ans suddenly he hears hermiones voice and she's saying "I love it when your so hard for me...can you feel me stroking you?" and he can feel her hand stroking him but shes way on th other side of the room...with a very smug smile...and so it goes on until she makes him cum right thre in potions under Snapes nose.he-he.Then theres this one * holds up some white liquid in a container.* I call it Double O. I also have Triple O. The effects are pretty simple. Anybody who takes it..their next oragasm will be double( or triple) as long and hard and fantastic as a normal one would be...well there are a couple of my pervy potions.Use 'em, don't use 'em...well thanks for a brilliant story so far anyway...
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  • From ANON - Molly on June 02, 2005
    Ok, this is one of the sexiest, horniest, most erotic stories I've read in a very long time! I cannot wait for the next chapter, you write these characters so well.

    Thanks for the pleasure!

    M
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  • From ANON - bob on June 01, 2005
    lol...I like the way you think...that was sooo sick lol
    I think the house elf should get an award for what it has to do....heheheh
    I really liked this chapter....and I think Ron needs to get laid...reeeeeeeally bad!!! but you shouldn't let him in the happy triangle...he should go after pansy...ooo that would be a little funny! You should SO do that!!! It would be like pansy teaching Ron to get even with everyone but he dips his wick a little too far and can't get enough....that would be awesome!
    oooh I totally can't wait for the next chapter!!!
    -bob
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