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By : TCardan
  • From ANON - bob on May 20, 2005
    WOW!! yes you soooo know what your doing!
    HOLY FUCK!!! I have black on my thumb!....oops! sorry, I'm random and I just noticed that there was ink on me thumb......hehe
    yeah...awesome fantasmic chapter...but I was all confused when you said Dumbledor was putting Harry into the life he did so he wouldn't turn evil...in case you didn't notice...harry grew up in the house from hell! he wasn't treated well at all!...or were you refering to the friends that he made?.....'cause that would make a little more sence.......yeah
    keep up the awesome writing!
    -bob
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  • From ANON - sunflower on May 20, 2005
    Awesome fic! I love it love it love it. I just read it all in one sitting, and what a trip! My fave chappie was #13, with the Dursley's, lol. Sexy and funny.. Do continue!
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  • From on May 18, 2005
    Harry's fate made sense to me. A 'hard' Draco is a good Draco. Keep up the great work
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  • From ANON - shadowfax21 on May 18, 2005
    I've never really read erotic literature until a friend recommended it to me recently....Another friend recommended this site to me the other day....I have to say that I am really enjoying this story and think that it is very well written! :-) I am looking forward to the next installment! :-)

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  • From ANON - Elliott on May 17, 2005
    I think your story is amazing.please write more chapters.
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  • From ANON - Alexia on May 17, 2005
    Verrrrrrrrry nice. Although I'm more a femmeslash fan than I am a het fan... let alone a triple het fan lol. I really like the boy on boy action. ALthough I think, in the beginning, you could have made Harry more conflicted, jealous and angry. He never struck me as someone who could join a menage trois so easily. *shrug* But even without that, very yummy. Keep the pace where it is, not too fast and not too slow.
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  • From robin777 on May 17, 2005
    Great chapter. I loved how dominant Harry was. I loved how Harry got Draco to support him.
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  • From ANON - BlackLustz01 on May 17, 2005
    'I no longer have the desire to go against you Potter. It
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  • From ANON - Robbie Byrd on May 16, 2005
    I liked how you had Harry make Draco submissive.
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  • From ANON - Dreamweaver on May 16, 2005
    Loved it. What a twist. It does have a rather Star Wars type feel about it but that works for me. I did enjoy your explanation of the Dark Lords and that there can 'only be one' kind of thing - kind of like the Highlander which I also loved. Having Harry show a dominant side is great, I hope Hermione gets a good turn at being dominant too. Another great chapter. :)
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  • From Twinkle on May 16, 2005
    A Brilliant much waited for chapter. I've been checking every day for you to update. L(

    I loved this change in Harry, and I can see him becoming this powerful, as he grows with his magical power. I can see Draco having difficulty on deciding where to pledge his allegance to. Well done. :D
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  • From MidnightLilly on May 16, 2005
    Man this story is so hot, I love it=) I think even Lucius would be jelious of his son. I wonder what will happen after they leave Hogwarts, they should just bond with one another. Wizarding worlds first threesome marriage.
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  • From ANON - smurf on May 16, 2005
    yes!! I LOVED your twist!! I ALSO loved your fucking scene...I always knew Draco would like it rough ;)
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  • From ANON - Narcissa Black on May 16, 2005
    Your take on Dark Lords Through the Ages is so good, if JK doesn't use it in canon, I'll be terribly disappointed. Dominant Harry...so hot. This was a great chapter. Not PWP, by any stretch of the imagination.
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  • From ANON - Catpower on May 16, 2005
    Fantastic. Fantastic. The sexiest story EVER. There's just something about your sex scenes that really hits the spot - maybe its the HG/HP/DM thing. The Dursley's chapter was utterly hilarious and totally erotic - poor Petunia. And Vernon would be sorry to know that he'd been obliviated, cos I'm sure he enjoyed it really. How hilarious that Dumbledore knows about their threesome and plans to exploit it - like he always does. Enjoyed the DA chapter also and spotted the deliberate spelling mistake: "parcel tongue". Nice one.
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