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Reviews for What a Witch Needs

By : TCardan
  • From ANON - rubberduck on May 16, 2005
    while i don't like what you have done with hermione's background, i do like the little twist with harry's background. that's a very cool and unique situation. giving him that kind of edge makes things a bit dangerous and thrilling. i just hope you don't get too extreme with it and make harry evil. i find it funny that it so closely relates to star wars and luke (and anakin's) struggle with the dark side of the force. hopefully harry will follow luke's example and stay on the side of the light.
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  • From ANON - morgan le fay on May 16, 2005
    Wow!!! I am really enjoying this story. I love seeing Harry so powerful and your plot is turning out wonderfuly!! I cant wait to see what happens next, I hope this is a long fic.
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  • From ANON - Brooke on May 12, 2005
    Hey, just came here to review and say how much i love your story. It's hot, lol. Im loving the draco/harry stuff. tehe, the visuals in my head are amazing when i read it. lol. I feel really bad for ron too, poor guy. Doesn't know how to please a woman. I think Ron should come back into the story, with another girlfriend and more "experienced" with her, I think Herminoe would become really jealous and try to win ron back realizing she might still have feelings for him?, that would be a totalyl different (but good) story plot. lol. ah well, Im sure im boring you, so im going go. I love your story! keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - Alexia on May 11, 2005
    Very well written. The plot also intrigues me. Please write more.
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  • From ANON - ehu on May 11, 2005
    *stunned* that was an awesome chapter! i really like it how the dursleys got it where it hurt! lol how they were treated just like harry was. good for them! lol and that threesome? oh my god! hothothothot! *sizzles* please continue! i'm just in love with this story!
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  • From ANON - NeNe on May 11, 2005
    I love this story. You capture the characters personalities so well, and then you mold them around your story changing bits of them, but keeping to their unique characteristics. Please keep writing it. I look foward to reading the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - smurf on May 11, 2005
    :D:D that was an awesome chapter. I loved it so much, thanks for writing it. I like the relationship Draco and Harry have going now too. Can't wait for your next update!
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  • From on May 10, 2005
    I truly think that was the best way to get the stick out of Vernon's arse. I thought the scene was erotic, a real turn on. I think the last chapter's sex scene was the best by far.
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  • From lysa1 on May 10, 2005
    That was an unexpected turn. That Dumbledore wants to use his favourite Gryffindors to win over Draco..
    This is turning out to be interesting...
    Great story...
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  • From ANON - Narcissa Black on May 10, 2005
    As I was reading your fic (for about the 5th time) I realized that I was smiling the whole time. This is not a common occurrence, and you should be justifiably proud of this story. Going back to the Dursleys was a stroke of pure genius! My land, that was funny. Excellent smut, BTW. I would be so happy if you never ended this fic, just had it continue on, indefinitely.
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  • From robin777 on May 10, 2005
    I think this is my favorite chapter so far. I just loved them doing that to the Dursley's. Snape's reaction to seeing them all naked was hilarious
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  • From ANON - anjelic on May 10, 2005
    another very hot chapter...very well done :O)
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  • From ANON - BlackLustz01 on May 09, 2005
    Another fantastic chapter, I must admit
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  • From ANON - KittyWolf on May 09, 2005
    *laughs hysterically* I loved Chapter 13. There's not many stories that can make me laugh that hard. *smiles* Keep up the awesome work. :)
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  • From Twinkle on May 09, 2005
    Hi, this was a great chapter, and I'm so glad that you weren't offended by my suggestions. :) You did a marvelous job of torturing the Dursleys. It was nice to see Harry in a proactive role this time, instead of Draco. I look forward to your next update. :D
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