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By : TCardan
  • From ANON - anjelic on April 14, 2005
    I'd like to see Harry squirm for a little bit and when he does release him, that Harry can't help but join in. Be descriptive, sometimes people build up the sexual tension and then have it resolved in a paragraph. I like where it's going!
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 13, 2005
    continue!!
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  • From ANON - Phoenixangel7 on April 13, 2005
    love it! can hardly wait for the rest!
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  • From ANON - lovethelab on April 13, 2005
    Jusat found this story and I wanted to let you know I think it is great - I enjoyed reading it and I hope you keep this story going. I think there are so many possibilities especially with the thrdd main characters!!
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  • From ANON - Tinkerhell on April 13, 2005
    I really like your story so far and I can't wait till you get all three togther so update soon!!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 13, 2005
    omg i totally want more! and i hate you for leaving it there!!!!

    its a great story idea, and i cant wait for your udate!
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  • From ANON - Ms. Hilton on April 13, 2005
    That's Hot. More please
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  • From ANON - Dreamweaver on April 13, 2005
    Love it. How typical of Draco to turn something like this around to his advantage. Evil cliffy by the way. I can't wait for more. I loved when Hermione and Harry were spying too, I was so sure they were going to get away with it and I suppose Harry did, really. Keep going please. :)
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  • From ANON - john the heavy on April 13, 2005
    ahhhhhh hermione in a belly dancing outfit! bliss! very good material to work on i like it so much! *update please!*
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  • From ANON - anjelic on April 13, 2005
    nice turn of event....I'm intrigued. Keep writing! :O)
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  • From ANON - jchaser on April 13, 2005
    Great story...very well written. Cannot wait to see where you go with this...thanks for such an enjoyable read.
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 13, 2005
    it was so cruel for you to stop there! i want harry to find hermione and take that blasted charm off... even though her costume sounds sexy as hell... i hope you have her trying to fight off the charm, even just a little bit.
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  • From ANON - serenity on April 13, 2005
    hell yeah you have to continue. poor hermione. she aint never gonna get any play. im interested to know if your going to put hermione, harry, and draco together or will she be sleeping with them behind the others back? and will ron know about it? hook it up, girl.
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  • From ANON - anjelic on April 12, 2005
    Please continue...it's really good so far.
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 12, 2005
    Oh my, this was quite...hmm. First off, you need to know that the clitoris itself does not have folds, it is an organ. It is covered by the clitoral hood. It does not have walls and is not found inside the vagina. The vagina is also not a "hole". It is a potential space. The walls of the vagina touch, so it is not a "hole" gaping open. You really need to consult an anatomy book. The fic makes it sound like you are VERY young and have not had sex or just don't know anything about the female body. If you DO have sex, you probably don'thave much fun since you don't know where the clitoris is! The writing itself isn't bad, but the dialogue is a bit strange. The characterization is off. And the "Um...Draco" just sounds silly and not erotic at all. I don't think ANY character should ever say "Um."
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