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Reviews for What a Witch Needs

By : TCardan
  • From ANON - shade on July 22, 2006
    I love the story so good... now I can't wait to find out who they are going to kill to bring ron back...
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 14, 2006

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  • From ANON - Legend on July 12, 2006
    Just wanted to say I'm really enjoying this fic; however, a few laugh-out-loud typos have escaped your proof-reading. Several times you have a character referred to as a "trader" when you mean "traitor" and according to my dictionary, an "Ungulate" is an animal with hoofs - the word you want is "undulate". You might like to check the difference between "crevasse" and "crevice" as well. And my pet peeve - the constant confusion between "your" and "you're"...
    Please accept this as constructive critisism - I love your take on Draco's character particularly, and Harry-as-Dark-Lord is perfectly believable. I can't wait until I have time to finish the story. Well done!!
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  • From on July 09, 2006
    Woot! Cant wait for 62 =D I love this story, is by far the best I have ever read. Thank you so much for writing it hehe.
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  • From ANON - debbie on July 09, 2006
    whewwww i finally caught up after the long break from AFF...lol anway i love the whole thing. im going to have to go back and reread the first few chapters again as you said you re did them or something. i hope you write something else soon. i love the storie. just wish snape wasnt such an idiot.
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  • From ANON - Dave on July 09, 2006
    Magnificent, you really develop the characters in a way that few can. I just spent five days reading this massive epic, and I must say, it's some of the best I've ever read. I look forward to reading anything else you write.
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  • From ANON - mynoan on July 06, 2006
    Please Please Please review. You stopped at a good part. How meannnnn. Please review ok?
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 05, 2006
    can't wait to see which prisoner he chooses...i would have thought it to be pettigrew...but you already killed him off..
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  • From ANON - Cara/Abragini on July 04, 2006
    When is the last chappie gonna be up!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?! I can't wait. I check like two or three times a day.
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  • From ANON - trav on July 01, 2006
    yeah so just hurry up and finish this story
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  • From ANON - darkness05 on July 01, 2006
    can't be stuffed logining in, but awesome story hope you update soon - i wish there was more of draco and harry and hermione, hint hint, lol, cool story update soon
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  • From ANON - Abragini/Cara on June 30, 2006
    I have to add this point that I just came up with. I am in the same boat with Rey Ayanami, I came in for the sex scenes between Hermione, Harry, and Draco but what really kept me coming back was the awesome plotline. I could have skipped all the other scenes and came just for the plot; it was THAT good. The sex scenes were an awesome added bonus. Words like awesome, great, fantastic don't even come CLOSE to describing this story. It was closer to life-thrilling and miraculous.
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  • From ANON - Abragini/Cara on June 30, 2006
    I never ever lost interest in the story. I was so deeply saddened when I found I could not get to the site anymore. Then I came back to reply and found I couldn't. I had no way of getting in touch with you to tell you that you did still have fans and that I was hoping you hadn't quit and given up on the story because you weren't getting anymore replies. I tried my hardest. I love these last two chapters and I can't wait until the next one. I must admit this is the absolutely best best best story I have ever read. I always belived Cicatrix to be the best war story but I have to tell you this one tops all, especially since it is Adult material. It makes the story much more appealing. I hope you continue to write more stories such as this one. I cannot tell you how much I have enjoyed this story. Please Please Please continue writing. I anxiously await the final chapter. With All My Love, Abragini.
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  • From ANON - ss79 on June 27, 2006
    Ok so I have become addicted to your story and hope that you complete it as well and possibly make a sequel!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Parvati on June 25, 2006
    I love your story the plotline, how you put the characters together, i personally think this is the best fanfiction i have ever read, probally the longest too it was like reading book number seven, but it was worth it, good job can't wait for the :(last chapter...
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