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  • From ANON - Debbi on June 21, 2006
    I am so glad you updated!!!! I really like this story can't wait to see what happens next.
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  • From ANON - Riven on June 20, 2006
    i have been waiting for an update to this story for SOOOOOOO long.
    im so glad your back. cant wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - angel on June 20, 2006
    wow ..man i hope they can stop snape .... befor all of the ice is melted .... i hope ron stay out of the way ...please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - Miya Sparrow on June 19, 2006
    hehehe I love this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! hehe I'm glad you updated!!!! its so cool, I thought the part with Crabbe and Terry was cool, exspecially after Terry died and Crabbe was gonna bring him back to the camp, kinda reminded me of Goblt of Fire, with Harry and Cedric. that was really cool, anyway! hope you update again.
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  • From ANON - lilbitbord on June 19, 2006
    Finally a new chapter!!! I am so glad that AFF is finally back up and running. I really liked this story and will stick with it till the end, but I think I am going to have to reread the previous chapters to remember everything. Can't wait till next chapter. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Donavon. on June 19, 2006
    It's still brilliant. You really do not want to know how low I stooped trying to find out what was to happen.
    I even tried to bribe our mutual Beta Narcissa. Sadly she wouldn't tell me a thing. Still you've updated one of
    the best storys on the web. Soon please. Best wishes, Donavon.
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 14, 2006
    I am astounded by this. This is by far one of the best stories i've read here if not the best. I can not convey how good this. Much luck to you in life.
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  • From ANON - aeltiera on March 14, 2006
    Hi Petalsoft!
    Absolutely LOVE the newest chapter! Great to see the story moving along and just seeing it updated again is wonderful! Yay AFF being up again! I've been following your amazing story from Day One...it just gets better and better. Love the black knight being a lost Amazon...oh, man do I hope Snape gets whats coming to him...he's one power thirsty player! Normally Snape is my favorite character (with Hermione) but in this story...well Snape deserves whatever Hermione and her men give him! Thanks.
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  • From ANON - Rhiannon Uerch Llewelyn on March 14, 2006
    Ch 1) Good stuff!! Noticeable improvement & tightening up of style, word usage and phrasing but how 'bout this?

    "The feel of her shapely body, with her pert boobs pressing into him,"

    Change to:

    "The feel of her shapely body, small breasts pressing against his chest, forcing his body to react automatically."

    Pert implies upwards pointage: a pert nose. Tiny pointy & tweakable. Pert nipples yes, but breasts swell, either small or lush. You seem to have a tendancy to use very casual slang in description of sexual acts and the bodily equipment used therein. Refine that and then you REALLY grab the reader by the balls. It's gotta flow like silk over the tongue, breathed feathers over wanton flesh... Language at its finest can be used to inflict brutally cruel torment or the most sensual moment of your life, when done with precision... it can haunt your every waking dream...

    Don't mind me, I'm now gonna drop comments where I feel finess can be be used... Be warned!!!

    I love your fic SOOOOO much!! I almost had a heart attack when AFF was down & I couldn't find it anywhere else!!!!! You were the one who introduced me to the Triad pairing (?) that I love so damn much... Thank you for this sensual creation!!

    *sigh*

    Keep writing!! I SO don't envy your re-writing AAAAALL those chapter!!!

    ^.--
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  • From Peaches79 on March 13, 2006
    This story remains one of my very favorites. I can't believe it is amost over :( It's been like our own personal potterphile soap opera! You rock!
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  • From ANON - ckmo on March 13, 2006
    Very good. I can't wait to read the last couple of chapters. Smut well written and story line while plodding at some times does seem to pick up in the right places. Please post the rest as soon as you can.
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  • From ANON - gabrielle on March 11, 2006
    WEll I start "What a witch needs" at the beginning of this week and I have to say that was very nicely wrote. I'm happy that you kept the characters in their personalities and not alter it too much. But from your plot it seem that you had a very hard time doing so I commend (sp) your writing skills. I hope to be able to write a story that though with out losing my train of thought. :-)
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  • From ANON - tab-sempai on March 11, 2006
    First I'd like to say I love your story. Its great. I've been reading it since the summer. I was supposed to review when I got caught up to you but well you know stuff happens. You story is great. Keep up the good work. And don't make me or the other reviwers wait to long.
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  • From ANON - annabattista on March 11, 2006
    your fic is exceptional.
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  • From ANON - JJ on March 11, 2006
    Of course I'm still reading!!!! I'm also still confused by the new site and hope I figure it out soon. I loved the chapter, all was explained very well. It's too bad that Snape could do wandless magic and so free himself. Merlin was everything we expected. I can't wait for Snape to see what his meddling has wrought! Please tell me he lives long enough to see how much of an a** he is!!! Wouldn't it be funny if Harry, Voldy, and Snape had to join forces to supress Merlin? But it will probably have to be Herm/Harry/Draco since they are the true heirs of the Marlstens. I'm glad you let the villagers get away! I'm so sorry to see this story coming to the end, but it's so exciting that I can't wait for more!!!!
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