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Reviews for What a Witch Needs

By : TCardan
  • From ANON - jordan on March 18, 2013
    So much smut and a plot im deathly in love with this and being bisexumal myself that last scene ;)mmmm
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  • From ANON - Sarah on February 08, 2013
    Okay I absolutely loved this fanfic this is amazing and because I have no idea when this was posted I'm not sure you'll get this but if you do this was amazing and the continuations mentioned at the end of the epilogue sound fantastic and if they aren't already posted I can't wait k bye and loved this story sooooo much❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
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  • From ANON - SL on February 06, 2013
    It's a great (and rare) story with both plots and many lemons, many of which fit nicely with the plot.

    One thing that got left unanswered is why Voldermot want to re-enter Marlston's home.

    I was expecting Harry (or Triad) would grow darker and be pulled back. I feel such subplot will add to the characters, if you choose to revise the story.

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  • From Sera21 on September 30, 2012
    Read this ages ago while you were still writing it and loved it. On returning I still enjoy it but there seems to be alot more SMUT then I remember,lol. Maybe its because I was 17 when I first read it i didn't realize that about 30% of this fic is just porn,haha. On teh 2nd time reading it I just skipped most of the sex scenes and it was still a pretty good read. I like that you still made it a readable and enjoyable story with plot even though there was so much porn. I would like to mention 2 points that annoyed me a bit though. the first was the scene with the tattoo artist. I realize that this is fantasy fanfic but when theres a guy with a super sharp needle putting dark magic ink under my skin I would prefer for him not to be distracted by anything. I'm not sure I would want a 1 years olds rendering of a snake for ever on my skin. Plus the time it took him to make a tattoo seemed to be incredibly fast.Did he not do any sort of detail? Normal tattoos with detail can take 2-3 hours!ummm...and my other point was about the painting Hermione talked about making with the big bed to hang in the hall of portraits. I found that incredibly cheap :/ I mean her ancestors are going to visit that painting when they are older! Her children! and they will see all the noble ansestors and when they get to their mothers there will just be a giant bed with moving draperys. eeeew. I mean why don't they get one done for a private room somewhere but not teh hall of portraits...
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  • From ANON - Runebane on August 21, 2012
    This was an AMAZING story! I loved every word!

    And YES PLEASE! Write another story with Lily and Scorpius. It'd be cool if they got together with Hugo and Rose Weasley (Ron and Lavender's kids).
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 10, 2012
    This fic is brilliant. I had misplaced where I read it and had to scour the internet with keywords until I found it again.
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  • From ANON - Kat on October 11, 2011
    What a wonderfully written story. I enjoyed every minute of it. I couldn't wait to find out what happened next and now I'm sorry that there aren't any more chapters left to read. Thank you so much for your efforts and talent. Great job!

    Kat
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  • From ANON - Nitsji on September 23, 2011
    Hi, I just wanted to let you know that I read all the 64 chapters. AND I LOVED IT!!! I really love the Draco/Hermione/Harry relationship as well the Dark!harry and just.., I love the story!!

    Thank you so much for posting this!!

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  • From ANON - reds on September 13, 2011
    Love this story I read it while u were still writing and I can't help but come back to every year or so
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  • From CafeAuLait on September 05, 2011
    Interesting tale. I like Dark Harry.

    I highly enjoyed Dudley and the Malfoy, sounds like a sitcom. I would love to know what Dudley is up to and how is relationship with Harry has changed.

    I wouldn't mind reading a tale about Lily & Scorpius.

    Thanks for sharing.
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  • From ANON - Sara D on July 17, 2011
    Hi,

    I absolutely love this story and its sequels. I have a site called Leather and Libraries which is geared towards Dramione and Dramione threesomes. I would love it if you decided to post this story and its sequels there as well. We just launched today and are excited about the new site. Big threesome stories like "What a Witch Needs" would be a great addition for the site. Please consider posting this story and its sequels there as well. Thank you!

    Sara D

    Leatherandlibraries.com
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  • From Halimede on July 13, 2011
    Hey I just wanted to let you know that someone plagiarized your fic on fanfiction.net. You can find the story here http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6915548/1/A_Witchs_Needs

    It's been reported but I thought you should know.
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  • From ANON - SansaClegane on July 11, 2011
    Oh that could be a really dark fic about them as teens, incest, bondage, sexiness. The Marlston kink all the way.
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  • From ANON - icis182 on July 10, 2011
    i like the idea of the story continuing with the kids, i would like for the triad to be involved still, centering on the whole family. you write the three of them really well and it would be great to see how their lives develop together over the years.
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  • From ANON - Marie on June 16, 2011
    I would love to see a second generation. I love the whole Marlston part of this story, I have read What a Witch Needs several times since it was finished. I'm excited to hear you are considering to continue the story.
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