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Reviews for What a Witch Needs

By : TCardan
  • From ANON - PhoenixTearsCG on February 10, 2006
    Hey! I absolutely LOVE your story! It's an amazing addiction that I can't to get rid of. That said, and I know there are two million more chapters for me to read, I just wanted to mention something about this chapter. I love this story so PLEASE don't get me wrong. *smiles uncertainly* But JKR did mention in the books that the Leaky Cauldren is invisible to muggles. They pass right by it and can't see it at all. Just thought I'd mention it. And Hogwarts is similar, it's enchanted to look like an old run down building and muggles get a foreboding feeling whenever they look at it and don't enter, probably because of the sign saying "don't enter". lol. Sorry, I'm just a COMPLETE OBSESSED FREAK when it comes to facts in Harry Potter. Otherwise, this story is amazing!!! Keep up with the awesome work and I can't WAIT to continue reading the story. I think my favorite sex scene was the one in front of Marlston Villiage with the statue... lol. OMFG! That was so hot!!! lol. Anyway, I loved the Marlston Manor chapters and can't wait to read more about them! AND, Hermione still needs to be entertained with the tatoos outside of the two's presense. I don't know why I'm suggesting ideas when this story is already finished, I guess it's because I have wanted to the entire time and can't seem to stop now that I've finally started writing about this awesome story! Okay, bad hands! Stop typing! See you later and keep up with your awesome work!
    ~PhoenixTearsCG
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  • From ANON - LilyBella on February 07, 2006
    This story is absolutely wonderful. I love the relationship between the triad. I will admit to being a bit wary of the story at first. Most threesome stories are awful and end up leaving one of the characters feeling left out and I hate that, especially when it
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  • From ANON - axelia rose on February 07, 2006
    me again I meant really really long Hair and startaling eyes... my bad sorry... thats what i get at 4:34 in the morning... on a school night. well anywho can't wait for more. Did I hear right 60 chapters? you'll need a few more than that , & just to be safe we'll need a sequal. ... ... PLEASE!!! with the sexy triad on top!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1111111111
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  • From ANON - axelia rose on February 07, 2006
    love your story. I love the triad thing even though I'm not a fan of slash you writ it beautifully. I love the little twist with merope/meri-thing... did she kill Hermione's parents? And the black night... It would be so cool if its a woman. A woman with really, REALLY long and startaling eyes... Yes I could see it now, She'd be mystirious and twisted and would love to fuck with peoples heads... Well being as an immortal like Merlin got to get your jollys somehow right? lol Anywho love the story and I can't for the next chapter.
    -Axelia Rose
    ...and sorry for my horrible typing, its really late or early depends on how you look at it. ;)
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  • From ANON - ehu on February 07, 2006
    ah, what a twist! meri is voldemort's mom. can't wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - Sofiya on February 06, 2006
    Your story is the most amazing story I have ever read. Please continue! But seriously, this is like my favorite out of all i've ever read and i've read a LOT!!! lol You rock. Keep writing. =)
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  • From ANON - sodapop0006 on February 06, 2006
    You have a beautiful way with setting the scene and the plot. It all seems to move together and you do really well with the timeframes as well (I've always had trouble with that bit myself). I'm rather stuck with a story myself that seems to be dragging out more chapters rather than just ending it, but I'm so glad that you're sticking through it. The way you build the characters really draws me in and I was pleasantly surprised that you had Meri be Voldemort's mother. It seems entirely possible now that I think about it, but it would never have occurred to me before. Many people are saying that Dumbledore or Snape killed Hermione's parents and one reviewer even suggested that they killed themselves. All very good ideas, but I'm very intrigued that they might have killed themselves. If I'm understanding most of the story, they could very well have committed suicide to protect and hide Hermione. Anyways, I can't wait to read what else you come out with. And I'll be checking in plenty, so don't feel rushed. I'd be very happy to wait and see how the next part of the masterpiece turns out. :)
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  • From ANON - ShadowLily on February 05, 2006
    Oh please please more....I'm not ever going to be happy until this story is complete...I love it sooo much. I love how you fiddled with Voldie's mother. Her part in the story....etc...
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  • From ANON - annie on February 04, 2006
    I loved this story so much and i cant wait for you to continue. Most of my friends think i am insane for likeing this story, but i loved it!
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  • From ANON - Nicole on February 04, 2006
    WOW!!!!!!!!!

    Did Dumbledore kill off the other two parts of Voldy's triad????? That would give Voldy another reason to hate him even more.

    Keep goning!!
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  • From ANON - austin on February 04, 2006
    i hate you so much for leaving it short, but on the other hand i lvoe u to death for riting it.
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  • From ANON - austin on February 04, 2006
    i hate you so much for leaving it short, but on the other hand i lvoe u to death for riting it.
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  • From ANON - Chavela on February 04, 2006
    Very good chapter. OOHH! I can't wait to see what happens next.
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  • From ANON - Chavela on February 04, 2006
    Very good chapter. OOHH! I can't wait to see what happens next.
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  • From ANON - Chavela on February 04, 2006
    Very good chapter. OOHH! I can't wait to see what happens next.
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