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By : TCardan
  • From ANON - mylo on February 04, 2006
    haha very clever entwining of mer/merope.. did you write about meri before or after the 6th book came out? I had the feeling it was a really lucky coincidence. Anyway, still looking forward to further chapters.. and the tub tag curse!!!!
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  • From ANON - Firewall on February 03, 2006
    Ch 58 - Ah, you know how to spin a yarn. Your build up is impeccable. I can hardly wait for the next chapter. Superb job.
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  • From ANON - spanky_mcwhackwhack on February 03, 2006
    Oooooh this was really good! I did't think draco would be having doubts about his ability to kill snape, how very un-dracoish. heehee did you get the idea for the black knight from Monty Python and the Holy Grail? If you haven't seen the movie I think you should watch it particularly that scene its a crack up.

    I can't wait to see what happens next... keep writing!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 03, 2006
    I swear I came reading this. =)
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  • From ANON - Michelle on February 03, 2006
    Oh, you twisty thing you! I'm still loving it... sorry I wasn't there to help beta, but Narcissa did a bang up job of it! (of course, it's easy when you have something great to start with!)

    Hugs, Michelle
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  • From ANON - Miya Sparrow on February 03, 2006
    no no no no! don't stop! anything but that! omg I think I felt those same chills as Bill felt! omg!....its so.......*breaths deeply* oh you wanna bet the real things gonna suck! ahahahahaha
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  • From on February 03, 2006
    Oh no, Dumbledore killed Voldemort's triad, didn't he?
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  • From ANON - Litekreem on February 03, 2006
    WOOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWW!Does this mean that Meri killed them?I have a head full of questions and I cant wait for you to answer them
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  • From ANON - aphroditiewicca on February 03, 2006
    I only have one word for this story, Wonderfull.
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  • From ANON - Dreamweaver on February 03, 2006
    Oohhhhhhhh, that little piece of news regarding Tom Riddle's triad was certainly a surprise. Can't wait to hear the details on that one. As for Draco, he has a hard task ahead of him if he has to face off with his godfather. Wonderful work once again, Petalsoft. :)
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  • From ANON - Sorceress14 on February 03, 2006
    Yay! Quick update!

    A little dissapointed with the lack of triad interaction in this one but as always, it was a very compelling read. So that battle is finally raging and people are dying. You really set the mood for the battle really well for this one. The smell of blood in the air really helped make it believable. I remember I once read a fic where the final battle consisted of Harry saying 'Avada Kedavra' and Voldy dying and then it was over. You really made this feel real. It's as if I'm reading the actual book which makes it all the more interesting.

    So, I'm really glad that we finally found out who Meri was. I was thinking that it was a possibility it was Merope but I could have sworn that you had written Meri in before we even knew Merope but that was my mistake. I love the back story you did for her, it does seem very believable.

    Something i thought was really funny in this chapter was the fact that the last one left us suspended with Snape in the room of snakes, wondering if he would make it past them and then this one started out with him saying something like "Snakes. Bah!" and then just walking past them all, I laughed out loud!

    Well, it was really nice to get another look at Those Who Dwell Below but I did kind of change my perception of them. I used to be quite terrified of the fact that they could dispense of anyone Hermione did not like at any given time and change into anyone without you knowing it. I thought that perhaps they weren't capable of making mistakes like they did but that ust goes to show (like w/ Dumbly in book 6) that everyone makes mistakes.

    I'm really looking forward to Snape's battle with the Black Knight. I'm hoping he gets hacked but I'm betting there's gonna be the standard race for time and just as Snape is about to set Merlin free, Draco and hermione come bounding in but who knows? Speaking of Merlin, I know that his reawakening will be the end of the world, but it would be really interesting to see how he would be. Maybe they could awaken him and then put him back to rest or something.... just a thought.

    I also found it fascinating that Voldemort did not kill Morgana and Sebastian. Are they possibly still alive? And if so, where are they? Trapped aling with Merlin perhaps? Will that be a big plot device, Hermione has to make the descision whether she has to free Merlin in order to free her parents? Okay, that's just oblique and unlikely rambling but hey, it could happen. I hate it when you say something is obvious (like Meri's identitiy and who killed 'Mione's parents) because I can never get it and I feel stupid, lol.

    Well, I'm very much looking forward to the next chapter and i can't wait to see what happens! Happy writing! :D

    P.S.
    Just wondering how many chapters are left. i know i say this in almost every review but i just don't want this fic to end :( *tear*
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  • From ANON - JJ on February 03, 2006
    What I think is that was such a tease!!!! It's time to start the battle: Both of them. I can't wait to see what's done to Snape. I'm glad you have a plan to save the rest of the villagers. And you're right. I'm dying to know who killed the Marlston's. I hope it wasn't Dumbledore. If so, Harry has put his two love's directly in harms way.
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  • From ANON - lovemesomehp on February 03, 2006
    wow i am obsessed i read this story all at once and now im waiting on edge for the next chapter i cant wait for the next chapter this is much more realistic than any other story on here ive read its amazing your a great writer which i know ive said before but its still true!!
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  • From ANON - angel on February 03, 2006
    was is severus or albus .. please update soon .. in till next time later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - Woot on February 03, 2006
    Really good chapter, got goosebumps imagining everything. My only problem is the fact that Harry deflected the killing curse. I mean, even Voldemort never could do that, hell no one can. The only reason why it got deflected the first time was because of a fluke, an ancient magic by Lily Potter.
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