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Reviews for What a Witch Needs

By : TCardan
  • From shadowfire76 on January 19, 2006
    YES!! LOL I have been checking daily hoping to see and update and today I was rewarded. Is Meri really Meriope? Man I hope Lucius is true to his word and going to be loyal to Harry because if he's not and finds out what Snape is up to then there will be alot of trouble. It's kind of refreshing to see Snape portrayed as the sneaky bastard he is in the books. Many fanfics portray him as tragically misunderstood man. BAH!! As much as I 'd like to believe that, I just can't make myself buy into that theory. Anyway.....Wonderful Chapter and I will go back to patiently waiting for updates on your stories and checking them 5-10 times a day looking for an update. LOL So maybe patiently wasn't the right word.... :D

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  • From ANON - ShadowLily on January 19, 2006
    AM IN LOVE WITH THE NEW CHAPTER!!! MUST HAVE ANOTHER SOON!!!!

    ShadowLily
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  • From ANON - Audrey on January 19, 2006
    Ohhh I love plot! but I'm looking forward to some post war smut!! Do you plan on killing off alot of characters? I mean obviously its war and people are going to die but like any major ones? Can't wait for more!

    Audrey
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  • From ANON - lovemesomehp on January 19, 2006
    wow...awsome ive been waiting sooo long for that hope you dont wait to long to post another chapter!! it was awsome awsome awsome......
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  • From ANON - sonya on January 19, 2006
    What a great chap. I can't believe you are going to leave everyoone hanging that way. YOU HAVE TO UPDATE SOON. Great job, and I can not wait for more...... Dudley W/a whore. HAHAHAHAHAHAH!!!!!
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  • From uglystars on January 19, 2006
    I LOVE your story, you absolutely MUST update more! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE don't kill main characters or their friends! It makes a story seem so weird when it's like, yeah, your brother's dead, but let's go have sex! Plus, who doesn't love Bill and Charlie, or Fred and George?? I demand to see more of this story that has me obsessed!
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  • From ANON - ALICIA mmm LOVE on January 19, 2006
    OH MY GOD! oh my god, oh my god...... how very adrenaline filled that chapter was. The most powerful line i read, i actually had to stop and stare at it to take it in. "Soon he would win or die." It just puts gravity on the situation, most fics will ghost over a battle with 'Harry won!' and you're giving him thought that yes, he actually might die. It being a very huge possibilty. It was just a very powerful line, good job on that! Ive got mixed emotions when i see your updates, i know the end is drawing near ... but every chapter you write it just gets better. And you really think it couldn't get any better .... here comes chapter 56 mind blowing with powerful lines and hidden secrets... im addicted to you and your damn stories.

    I like how you mentioned there wouldn't be sex for awhile merely because they couldnt pause the battle to grab a quick one. That made me laugh ... though im sure it will all be made up after the war .... Im just really very curious as to how your battle will be played out. I have never read a fic where they've actually writen a battle... You wrote in chapter 55, that Hermione would remember what happened to her in Snape's room. How long is it going to take her to remember what happened? At least then they'd know about Snape's evil doing ways...

    UGH! this story.... its just damn addicting!
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  • From ANON - lilycat on January 19, 2006
    Hey Petalsoft- Great chapter! You certainly have created a frenzied drama. I'm quite anxious now.

    Harry and Lucius made me giggle in the scene where Harry walked in on Dudley. I'm quite fond of your Lucius. I hope that he has a big role in the upcoming stuff.

    The chapter was very eerie feeling- perfect for the pre-battle atmosphere.

    Can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - mylo on January 19, 2006
    hi petalsoft ive been overseas and am glad to be back and seeing 5 new chappes!!! im so excited (i havent read them yet, i just wanted to post this...)
    meanwhile i just checked your livejournal page; hjappy birthday!
    ok ill reveie again afterive read. i hope for some more marlston action!
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  • From ANON - l'etje on January 19, 2006
    this was a very very good chapter and the drusly thing was fun
    i also hoop that lucius can stop snape and help harry defaet lord voldemord one and for all.
    keep going and post soon
    bye bye
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  • From ANON - angel on January 19, 2006
    nooooooooo snapy-pooo cant do what i think he is going to do is he .... he will kill more then just the dark lords .... please please stop him .. please please please update soon ... later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - spanky_mcwhackwhack on January 19, 2006
    this chapter was really good! can't wait to see what happens in the final battle. ooh that dastardly snape if i was the author of this fic i would have him killed pronto! but i'm not, so i can't. oh well maybe i will write my own fanfiction... of this fanfiction... lol have you ever thought that if you printed out all the chapters of this fic it would make its own harry potter book!! sorry i'm just rambling i have nothing bad to say about this fic, only good things. so please post soon!!
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  • From ANON - anjellic on January 19, 2006
    OMG....I hate that bastard Snape. You did a good job of defining him. I love the story so far....even though cliffys are necessary most of the time...I hate them...update soon!
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  • From ANON - Master Of The Poke World on January 19, 2006
    Finally some war action....Oh and by the way i was the one who guessed about Meri
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 19, 2006
    You are a very skilled and talented writer. The story has enough mix of both plots the triad and the war to make it a interesting one. Cannot wait for the next installment. And trust me my kids got me hooked on this fan fic stuff. And your is actually one that i wished would not end.. Thanks
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