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Reviews for What a Witch Needs

By : TCardan

From ANON - bondagegirl88 on January 04, 2006
I started reading this around five this morning.. all i can say is wow. i was utterly captivated, i havent moved from my computer sor a long time, except when i had to spend three hours at work. wow rambling, anyway, your doing really well i cant wait to read the next few chpters.. even without the sex scenes.. which ive started to just skim through to get to the rest.. its really well written. hehe, im done singing your praises now.. although i could go on for a while..
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From ANON - thia on January 04, 2006
hello!
hmmm, i agree dat wasn't much of a 'punishment' o wellz!
u know wat i like about reading this story? u leave out all the bits that really suck about sex, like the taste of cocks n stuff. It makes their relationship seem even more perfect.
Anyways, hurry up with the new chapter!
Bye!
-Thia
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From ANON - jenny on January 04, 2006
wow, i read all 54 amazing chapters in two days. this is the longest but absolutely greatest fanfic i've ever read! you maintain the characters' personas so well throughout the whole thing, even during sex scenes, which is hard to do. and your plot is so well thought out and imaginative, the story you've developed is just ingenious. i particularly liked the "naughty professor" scene with draco and hermione lol. role playing, yay! haha. and when draco said "hermione" instead of "granger" for the first time, it was so sweet. and, of course, sticking dudley- who hates wizards more than anyone(perhaps besides uncle vernon) with the malfoys, who hate muggles more than anyone...absolute genius! haha. every aspect of this story is so creative and engrossing, i absolutely cannot wait for the rest. ah, but then what shall i do with my days?
sorry i haven't left reviews for any other chapters, but i wanted to get through the whole thing before i left comments. i just want you to know you've done an incredible job and are a tremendous writer! oh, and, some people may not understand your sense of humor, but i find you hilarious...i think we have similar personalities, and that's why i enjoy your writing so much :)
keep up the great work! i can't wait to keep reading this dark, sexy, exciting fic!
-jenny
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From ANON - noirVincent/Matt on January 04, 2006
Hello! I just recently refound this fanfic and i sure am glad! I began reading when it was only on chap. 20, and i loved it then and i still love it now. i am currently re reading at and now im on chapter 31. It is by far my favorite just because of the shower. that is so creative. i just love it. please keep up your good writing!

i give it a straight (or bi) 10/10
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From ANON - Abragini on January 03, 2006
OMG! I can't believe he killed him! AWESOME! MORE MORE MORE!!! LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!1111one

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From ANON - HPLover on January 03, 2006
I loved this story. I stayed up most of the night to read it. You are a good author to read. Perhaps I'll read more of your work if they are all as well written as this one.

Shadows Queen
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From ANON - heather on January 03, 2006
I just sat here for the past many many hours and read the complete thing

my review?

I LOVE IT!! I can't handle it! I need MORE!!!!!! Never stop writting! :P

-Heather
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From ANON - Austin on January 02, 2006
omg. so i ahve fallen in love with your story. its better than j.ks. lol. but i am serious. i started rteading it a couple of days ago and couldnt turn away. its like i was addicted, and now i cant wait till u get the next one out. please hurry.
Austin
Ketenbrinkhunter2001@yahoo.com
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From ANON - devoted fan on January 02, 2006
wow... i havnt bin able to get online for a while so ive missed out on many updates... i just got caught up and i hafta say, the execution was just... so... i cant even describe it... moody's words hit hard for me, as i am planning on joining the military.... this is an absolutely incredible fic and i cant wait for the next update
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From ANON - Woot on January 02, 2006
It was a good chapter but Harry was kinda of stupid to kill Wormtail, I mean he would have been able to get sooooooo much information from the rat since Voldy usually keeps the rat around often...
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From ANON - Vixen on January 02, 2006
ooh update again soon!
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From iharthdarth on January 02, 2006
Silence!
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From ANON - Mel on January 01, 2006
wow...you are an effing AMAZING writer! i check this site everyday to see if you have a new chapter up. not to mention that you are by far a GENIUS in writing sex scenes...i think i love you. lol
keep up the good work! and come out with MANY more chapters
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From ANON - Philomel on January 01, 2006
Great update! Harry is going through an important development right now... can he really control this new power? The slave part truly fits better in here. I absolutely loved the scenes with Dudley and Narcissa - how both of them are coping with a world that's totally strange to them. I'd love to read more soon.
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From ANON - Jamy on January 01, 2006
I'm pretty sure yours were the first fanfictions that I actually sat down and read.
You write so well. I've been following this story since the Summer time [05], and unfortunately couldn't keep up with the past few chapters due to horribly packed schedules. I think your story is amazing, I've even turned a few friends on to it, and that's saying a lot. I'm a self-professed prude[only after being called one for many years by everyone] and your story was the first to help me be a little more comfortable.
I love the Marlston plot, it's amazing, I [and some of my friends] even have trouble sometimes distinguishing your plot from the actual plot because yours is so wonderfully plausible! Not to mention, that's some great smut! I Looooove those Room of Requirement lessons Harry and Herms got in the beginning.
And you alone can be credited for my love for Draco Malfoy.
Ahh, and your Blaise Zabini story!! I loooved it. [read that in the summer too, I think it was as you were posting that]
It was so beautiful, and I know he's described differently in the books, but to me he'll always be exactly how you described him :-D
You can imagine how weird reading the books over was while I was trying to ignore any differing descriptions of him.
Your loyal reader... first time reviewer, I think :-D
... IN short, YOU'RE AMAZING!!!!
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