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By : TCardan
  • From ANON - Liz on December 31, 2005
    I LOVE IT!!!!! ur story is soooo awesome, and gets better every chapter!! update sooooon!!
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  • From ANON - Michelle on December 31, 2005
    Love how it turned out! You're the best, you do know that, don't you? SO glad you let me come out and play, too! Happy New Year, Michelle
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  • From ANON - JJ on December 31, 2005
    I stand in awe of your thinking and the choices you make as an author. This story is fantastic. I loved the "desk" scene, and I agree about Snape. I still think you're going to have Snape betray the dark trio to Voldy, so not letting him get too out of character was a great idea. Also showing that Harry is a Dark Lord and what he can do to his soldiers was needed. You really are going about this in a realistic manner. I can't wait for more!!! Happy New Year!
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  • From on December 31, 2005
    54!!! OMG someone needs a life
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  • From ANON - debbie on December 31, 2005
    i love it i love it i love it. keep up the good work. and thanks for reminding me of the story name. in my favs i had it as hp hg dm lol oh well.
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  • From ANON - starlista_fay on December 31, 2005
    i absolutely love this fic, and i have been reading it since you put up the first chapter... very hot i might add. but now that it's progressed passed the initial smut chapters into a full blown story with a plot (not that i'm complaining in the least mind you) every time i look at the title it makes me laugh. It seems more like the story's about harry now and the title always makes me flash back to when they all first got together. keep updateing :)
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  • From ANON - l'etje on December 31, 2005
    this was very very good i liked the hole chapter
    keep going and a happy new year to you to
    bye bye
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  • From ANON - L. on December 31, 2005
    yey... great chappy... dudders isn't going to hurt dicey is he??? cause if he does... KILL HIM *evil grin*
    poor draco... i'll tell ya one thing... that part with hagrid was... EEECCCHHH
    hehe way to go with peter stinkin pettigrew... ;)

    L.
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  • From ANON - yomouda on December 31, 2005
    wll someone was just plain naughty now weren't they?! god, thank god for the end of pettigrew, he had bad hygiene
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  • From ANON - Sorceress14 on December 31, 2005
    Oh god, I LOVE Dark!Harry. That is what sets this fiction apart and above all the rest. Harry's dark powers unify him as your Harry and I never want to lose that character. First of all, his dark magic is dead sexy and second of all, it just makes the whole thing interesting to read. I know fics where they go on for about as many chapters as you have about someone's relationship. You understand the fact (in detail, might I add) that readers need action. I have a very short attention span yet I can read your story (more than once!) and not be able to draw my eyes away! Well, now that Harry has 'punished' his little darlings (Hagrid! you are sick, woman!), I don't feel as bad for Ron. I suppose Draco did desreve what he got, in a way.

    The Pettigrew thing was a bit sad but I guess he deserved that too...

    The thing with the slaves was soooo damn hot! I love the way Harry thinks! Though, Harry did frighten me a bit when he let the panther hurt Hermione (not really, but still). But the darkness is still sexy, baby! I also loved how Draco liked to watch the slaves fuck, this brung up a whole new line of possibilities in my mind!

    On a different note, I'm a bit sadenned that there will be no Dudley/Tonks. Oh well, you can't get everything in life. But, you did say Dudley will get some so I will look forward to that! (wow, I never thought I'd see the day when I'd wana see Dudley have sex!). And I'm happy that Dudley has finally started to trust the house elves. You should do another 'Gaping Snape' and have some house elf fun, lol!

    And, is there really anything going on with Ron's brothers? Was Draco telling the truth? That would sure be the twist of a century.

    Well, please update soon! Hoping for more 'dark sex magic'!!!
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  • From moit on December 31, 2005
    Goodness! I normally don't read anything with Hermione in it.. because I'm a huge Draco/Harry shipper. But this story, for reading it on a whim, has blown me over. Wow. It's one of the hottest things I've ever read. Bravo.
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  • From ANON - Tiffany on December 30, 2005
    I felt Pettigrew's fear, and it drained me. And for the first time *ever*, I felt afraid of Harry. For some reason, and I don't know why, it just felt as if I became Pettigrew and looked death in the face. Harry's for real and this isn't a game. I now realize that, Petalsoft. War is coming, and it's stifling and it takes my breath away.
    And what planet is Dumbledore on?! Get your mind out of the clouds, and your head out of the sand, Headmaster!
    That's why I love Moody! He reminds me so much of myself when I encounter foolishness, from *gasp* foolish people.
    Thank goodness for Moody. The voice of reason and common sense. Gifts from God that are seldom used. *rolls eyes in absolute disgust*
    It brought to mind Draco's comments to Harry about their weaknesses!
    Unbebelievable!
    No wonder Voldemort's still a pain in their ass!
    The archenemy of the wizarding world, and yet, even when they believed him to be dead, (I guess) they wouldn't DARE speak his name, even!
    Not even his NAME! So then, he becomes their archnemesis!
    What weaklings!
    What pussies!
    It's pure incompetence, but cowardice overall!

    They deserve Voldemort! Let Harry move to another dimension and just let Voldie have his way with them!

    It's the exact same way in canon, and that's why you have such a fantastic story, here. They let that tumor fester until it became a raging cancer within their society, which didn't just put the wizarding world at risk! So take a hint and take a guess!
    Life isn't peaceful! The world isn't peaceful! Man, by nature, isn't peaceful!
    Just read a history book!
    We don't live in a peaceful world, dammit!

    Now.... I take a breath....
    Then perhaps I'll come back once again, Petalsoft to tell you how I REALLY feel!

    (The last part of this chapter, to me, overrode everything else. (The Dark! sex magic & Dudley) It was just that powerful.
    Loved the part about the Tranfigured desk/Hagrid, though. Trust me, I did laugh at some point in this chapter.)
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  • From ANON - angel on December 30, 2005
    wow that was great i love it and yeahhhhhhhhh wormtail in dead im soooo happy .... please please more i cant wait in till the next chapter in tillthne keep up the awesome work and later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - Tiffany on December 30, 2005
    Wow. It's been quite a while since I've felt....speechless. I wanted to wait until there was some semblance of composure, on my part, but I just couldn't.
    I felt I had to say *something*, but I just don't know what to say at this time, except that, once again, you've blown me away.
    I'll be back a bit later.

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  • From ANON - firewall on December 30, 2005
    Ch 54 - You have created such a complex and impressive story here. I worry a bit after watching Lucius and Draco egg Harry on with the killing of Pettigrew. They would be easily impressed by the powerful dark magic Harry shows. Perhaps it helped make Lucius realize Harry's power is as strong as Voldemort's and it's not just the Marlston connection that is important. Thanks for another chapter. Happy New Year to you too.
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