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Reviews for What a Witch Needs

By : TCardan
  • From ANON - Woot on December 07, 2005
    Interesting chapter, I can't wait till the next one, I'm rather curious about what Snape'll do and what Dumbledore has already done.

    One thing you might wanna watch out for is in the very beginning where you look at how Narcissa is handling living there, you keep starting all your sentences with 'She' as in "She felt... She didn't.... She did"

    And this quote: "Hermione knew she wouldn
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  • From ANON - Janet on December 07, 2005
    Yeah!!!!!!!! Go narsicca, shut that tub of lard up! I would imagine that eventully dudley would get used to the Malfroys sng enjoy the comfort of being spoiled rotten, A person could get used to that. after all dudley was already spoiled rotten by his own parents, why not somebody elses? please update soon I love this story.
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  • From ANON - Cara on December 07, 2005
    Soooo Did Voldie do something to Minerva?! lol Awesome Chappie!!
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  • From on December 06, 2005
    Narcissa is just what Dudely needs. She'll wipe him into the prim polite boy Draco sometimes is.
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  • From ANON - VI on December 06, 2005
    Bloody Brilliant!!!!
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  • From ANON - mylo on December 06, 2005
    hey petalsoft! i saw you were online so i just wanted to send you a HELLO.. im just about to read chappie 51 then ill post a real review :P

    looking foward to iT!
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  • From ANON - angel on December 06, 2005
    man that is snape going to do .... what is the headmaster going to say and i how dudley can get a long with lucius and narcissa... please update soon ....keep up the awesome awesome work ....later for now

    angel
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  • From on December 06, 2005
    My review is gone for that chapter too! I just looked! So is everyone's! Sorry for double posting...
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  • From on December 06, 2005
    What happened to chapter 51? I came back to reread and it was gone! It was here yesterday! One of my last chapters on All She Wants got deleted too but that wasn't until after my entire account got deleted, I redid everything, my new one dissapeared and the old one came back. Wow, that's confusing. Do you know what happened?
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  • From kayladie on November 29, 2005
    Oh, I forgot to add: I doubt that your story was hacked. What probably happened was that someone took advantage of the fact that you have "Allow Additions" enabled on this story. To get rid of that, thereby keeping anyone from messing with your story without your permission:

    Go to Author Panel
    Edit Story
    Edit Details
    Where it says "Allow Additions" select NO
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  • From kayladie on November 29, 2005
    Well, I feel completely out of place here, let me tell you!

    Perhaps I should explain...

    I'm a Star Wars fan, not a Harry Potter fan. I live, breathe, eat, and drink SW fanfiction, especially Luke/Mara. But I've read just about everything there is to read in that fandom 'ship (or at least it seems that way) and my interest in HP (which had kinda waned) was revived when I went to see the fourth movie. I still haven't even read "Order of the Phoenix" yet! But I digress...

    I wandered into the HP section of Aff.net, looking for something interesting to read. I decided that I liked Harry/Hermione, but I couldn't find all that many good stories with those two. Draco intrigued me in the movies, and I utterly adore threesomes (having written a couple of them myself) so I decided to give this one a shot. I didn't realize at the time that it had 50 freakin' chapters! But I was totally blown away!

    You have just completely drawn me in to this story! I like Dark!Harry, but I do hope that he's not going to stay dark. (I have the same feelings about Dark!Luke because he's my favorite character.) I'm a little confused on some of the details, not having read past "Goblet of Fire", but overall I've found it fairly easy to keep up, which is the mark of a pretty good writer, IMO.

    The dynamic between Harry/Hermione/Draco is just wonderful, and I hope we get to see a lot more of not only the smut (which is awesome!) but also the tender, playful moment because those are awesome, too.

    I can't wait to see how this is all going to turn out!

    Keep up the good work!!
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  • From ANON - ForeverYoung on November 28, 2005
    AHHH! I requested more Harry/Draco, and MAN did you give it to me! You are such an awesome writter, I can't wait for more. I thought you should know, I'm compleatly addicted to this story.

    I also think you should consider a purly slash fiction. I know you've mentioned that you like threesomes right now, but your M/M scenes are just so damn hott!
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  • From ANON - Sorceress14 on November 28, 2005
    I just reread your story for the umpteenth time, Petalsoft, and I swear it gets better the more I do. I just cannot get over the 6th, 7th, and 8th chapters, they are the hottest damn thing I've ever read in my life, fanfiction or otherwise. I think the thing that makes it the best would have to be the denial that Harry has about wanting to be with Draco and then accepting it, it's just totally phenominal. I think that you are totally the one who got me hooked on slash! Anyway, please keep up th brilliant writing, I can't wait to get even more hot scenes like those!
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  • From ANON - Alleycat on November 28, 2005
    OMG!!! I can't believe you used my idea!!! thanks so much!!! I knew you'd love the idea of dudley living with the Malfoys. THough I would have liked to be mentioned, I am still honored that you used my idea. update soon. ^_^
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  • From ANON - darkfantasywriter on November 28, 2005
    OMFG!!! I LOVE THIS FF ITS AWESOME!!! DON'T STOP!!!
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