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By : TCardan
  • From ANON - Master Of The Poke World on November 11, 2005
    Well I would like to be Harry rather than Hermione.And yeah the Laughing when thinking of plot happens to me too
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  • From ANON - Petalsoft on November 11, 2005
    As for the M on M action, that's here to stay. I have other fics that don't have slash, so people can read those if they are not comfy with it. This story is the first slash I've ever written and, yes, I was a bit nervous and uncomfortable writing boy on boy action at first, but now I'm finding it a big turn on (like Hermione does in the story). I mean, two hot guys appreciating one another is not a hard thing to understand. I equate it to how many men find it a big turn on to see two women together. It can be viewed as a beautiful thing both ways.

    As for future fics, I'm most likely going to write more slash if it fits with the storyline. I am sincerely in love with threesomes right now and I seek out those types of stories to read on this sight. I don't know if it is because I'm female, but I do prefer two guys and one girl. Not because I'm adverse to femslash, because that could be hot too, but because, well, basically, two cocks are better than one when there are alot of holes to fill. LOL Ah... that's a bit crude, but true. With two girls and one guy, one of the girls will not be getting as much action, feels kind of like a third wheel situation.

    Well, agree or disagree, those are just my thoughts for what they're worth. LOL
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  • From ANON - Petalsoft on November 11, 2005
    Actually the chapters have been getting longer. Ask my poor betas. LOL
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  • From ANON - canis major on November 11, 2005
    wow beautiful as always... but i would like to stres this one bit.
    i feel that the chapters are getting shorter... is it me or are you wrighting smaller chapters?

    the dog star
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  • From ANON - ForeverYoung on November 11, 2005
    Okay, clearly that 'truelove' person doesn't like MxM. Now, I know you are an author that likes to keep every reader happy, but erm, wouldn't having no more MxM sex kill the WHOLE H/Hr/D aspect of the story? May I just say that your slash scenes are some of THEE hottest on this site, and it would be a shame if you stopped writting them for one reader! Infact I request MORE from the boys.

    Ha, sorry I got a bit p.o.ed reading that review, as for your actual fiction, it's coming along beautifully. You're so true to the characters, and I simply can't wait to read more of this story, and what does that Mr. Snape have planned exactly? Ooo, and Dark Harry, very very sexy. Lovly job.
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  • From ANON - trurelove on November 10, 2005
    oh and i forgot if u make any more storys please don't have group sex with more thaan 1 guy in a matter of fact do not ever put and guy to guy sex or group sex with more than one guy it should be like a whole bunch of girls or just one with one guy
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  • From ANON - truelove on November 10, 2005
    hello i love your fan fics even though they are a bit perverted. i have read all of them (guess that makes me just a perverted) well all of your stoyrs are excellent its like jk rowling wrote them her self except for the cussing and horny parts but if she did write something like that it would probaly be like that.
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  • From ANON - lilycat on November 10, 2005
    Petalsoft you are amazing! I am so glad that you won't be offing Dumbledore. I can't tell you how much I agree with you- killing off the elderly (especially as adorable as Dumbly) does not sit well with me at all.

    This chapter was great. You strike such a perfect balance between the darker elements and the obvious love that your characters share. Harry is dark, but he is still the Harry that I love. I find him to be totally believable the way you've written. It makes a lot of sense that he would have darker elements to his character.

    And Draco! Oy Vey! He is out of this world. That scene in the dungeons... Whew! (fans self)

    I don't know who left you a flame, or what they could possibly have had to say, but your story is wonderful and I LOVE your writing!
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  • From ANON - firewall on November 10, 2005
    Ahhh, I was so happy to see an update. Another great chapter...glad to see the return of the 'too. Ahh those slippery snakes.

    Bill's reaction was interesting in the episode with Bellatrix. Harry is impressive when he is in the dark mode. I can't quite figure out Snape though...what is he plotting.
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  • From ANON - Nicole on November 10, 2005
    AWESOME CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    I REALLY WANT TO BE HERMIONE!!!!!!
    *Raises hand high, while jumping up and down*

    Good job with the Dudley thing....personally i hate Dudley, so torture him as u wish!

    Keep on Writing

    I'm really excited about the next chapter
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  • From ANON - slyhtherins-MAKE-for-BETTER-lovers on November 10, 2005
    Your reviews make me laugh. A while back someone was upset that there weren't enough Draco/Hermione parrings, and now someone is saying we need more Harry/Hermione, so I mideaswell ask for more Harry/Draco. Rough H/D, loving H/D, it's all good. Your entire story makes me smile, and I'm happy with whatever you have to write for us your readers. It makes me sad to know it has to end though. Who in there right mind would send a writter like you Flames?!
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 10, 2005
    I like ur story very much. I just would like to see more Harry/Hermione sex. I mean when u do have them have sex together its with draco. I would just love to see more sex between Harry/Hermione. Thanks
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  • From on November 10, 2005
    *raises hand* OHHHHH finally a new all Draco Hermione sex sence. Oh i just love you. I want Harry to come back.
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  • From ANON - Kimi on November 10, 2005
    *raises both hands and jumps to get them higher*

    HOLY SHITE!!! I can't even believe how frigging lucky hermione is...it's disgusting. haha, omg that was one of the hottest lemons you have ever written. I LOVED IT!!! Love the tattoos, I absolutely love that room and omg draco and hermione is sweeeeet!! :) I do hope that we get some d-hr-h action soon perhaps? maybe? whatever you think will be good i'm sure, but i feel like all of them haven't been together in a while.

    OMG...harry and his powers make me horny. haha, they do really. harry is so hot. and when you wrote that his eyes turned black and he had a malacious grin, that set me off. hehe...i really can't wait to see more of that.

    And like i said in my previous review...i can't wait to read more about dudley and what is going to happen to him. *is anxious*

    SNAPE!!! What a crazy man, and mygoodness you are soo good. You think up the best stuff. *is jealous*

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  • From ANON - JUJI on November 10, 2005
    I love this story! I wish u would update more often. It's been a while.
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