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Reviews for What a Witch Needs

By : TCardan
  • From ANON - BlackPepperJack on November 04, 2005
    Wow just ..... WOW.
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  • From ANON - new fan on November 04, 2005
    a friend told me about your novel. i am really enjoying the first chapter. glad to know about the site.
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  • From ANON - debbie on November 04, 2005
    i am truly loving this story. its really great. keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - spanky on November 04, 2005
    i'm glad harry and dudley were able to comfort each other... but i need to know what happens next!! i should only start reading stories when theya re finished otherwise i get too distressed waiting for the next chappie! lol anyway keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - Master Of The Poke World on November 04, 2005
    Either of these sounds good
    1.Leaky Couldron
    2.Hogwarts
    3.Burrow
    4.In a Grave
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  • From ANON - Master Of The Poke World on November 04, 2005
    I love this story more than I love my belongings now (They include a discman,PS2,A p4 computer and a mobile phone) really good story update quick and also update that Sisters Of The Dark Moon Plz
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  • From ANON - Mylo on November 04, 2005
    OH NOOOOOOOOO YOURE SOOO MEAN WHAT A CLIFFY~~~~~~~

    Oh Petalsoft! I've been busy studying for my exams for the last couple of weeks and I neglected this fic.. I was so pleased to come on and see three new chappies! I'm such a fan T_T

    And I'm really impressed at how you can always think of something new and imaginative (not to mention HAWT) for the lemon scenes. I read in an interview that JK hated the Quiddich scenes because she could never tihnk of how to make them intersting.. obviously this lemon business isn't boring, but I believe it would be the same principle.

    Anyway.. Really good chappie, I'm soooo looking foward to the Draco/Hermy action!! And I'm such a huge fan of those tats, I know I've been bugging you for ages to bring them into use! (Also one more thing I haven't forgotten is Lucius' lover!!! I need to know!)

    About Dudley.. Ohhh.. Hmmm... hmmmmmmmmmmmmm...Grimmauld place? That's a bit lame. Umm.. Leaky Cauldron..?OH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! MARLSTON!!!!!!!!!!!!! KITTY!!!!!!!! Yeah its a little gross but give the boy some action! He deserves it after all he's lost. YES and its safe and perfect.. send him there! Yesssss... I'm so excited. More lemon opportunities! I don't know who's going to look after him but since both Harry and Hermy have so much Moulah$$ stored up, they can hire some kind of dominant whore/babysitter/"nanny" to look after him.. Hotstuff!! Oh this is so cool. Lol.. And he must be a virgin! (I mean, come on..)

    Ahhh I'll be eagerly waiting the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - nessa on November 04, 2005
    wow. i love the way u write n i think the story is written as well as JKRowlings... its like, a branch off of it, using elements of her story and twisting it with your own vision of things. i think its awesome. can't wait to read more!!
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  • From ANON - Michelle on November 04, 2005
    can't wait to see hermoine and draco action. lol.
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  • From ANON - Know-it-all on November 04, 2005
    OO! what a cliff hanger! The next chapter should be preeety interesting ^.^
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  • From Gabriella on November 04, 2005
    (Extremely horny squeal) WOOOWWIE!!!! LOVE Hermione wandering the "downstairs room" and then Draco activates his tattoo!!!!!!!! Dear GOD I can picture him lounging casually in the shadows, eyes intense and staring avidly at Hermione, whispering the spell under his breath... NO ORGY!! But a subtle sensual surrender of her to the pleasure she feels... I don't envy you writing that!!! Have fun!!!!! ^.-- I CAN picture a solo number though... Draco coming in to finish her off?
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  • From ANON - lilycat on November 03, 2005
    Harry and Dudley's reunion was (surprisingly) touching. I think it's very notable that you didn't choose the more obvious and over-simplified route of the viewpoint of "Dursley's Just Desserts." Harry simply couldn't be that hardened or callous, and I think that your take on the situation was very true to his character.

    And of course, there's the Hermione that we know and love- sticking up for Pansy and Millicent's right NOT to, erm, suck. Good girl. It was absolutely hilarious when when Pansy explains Millicent's preference and Hermione responds- "Oh... Well, then. Continue." (or something like that) It made me giggle.

    Can't wait to find out what happens in the room....
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  • From ANON - dragon34 on November 03, 2005
    I think Dudley should live in an apartment in Hogemeade. I also think it would cool if Draco was devious enough to make Hermione get off infront of everyone.
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  • From ANON - Abragini on November 03, 2005
    Awesome Work! Awesome Work! I love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Keep it up!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - TreVan Slytherin on November 03, 2005
    Dudley should stay were ever Harry stays. They should get over there past and learn to love one another
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