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Reviews for What a Witch Needs

By : TCardan
  • From ANON - ~Sakurashope7~ on November 03, 2005
    haha there was a lack of sex but I know you'll make up for it!

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  • From on November 03, 2005
    gee..... that was worth the wait but stil...
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  • From ANON - Woot on November 03, 2005
    I just love where you're taking Dudley into this, making him more human (something that the actual books don't do... JK makes him out to be such a demon, no grey area). I actually felt a lil teary eyed for him. I wonder what'll happen after he finds out about his family, this could really bring them together as a family or screw them up badly (if Dudley freaks out and blames it all on Harry)

    I have one question tho, the part where Sirius talks of where he went after falling through the veil. You mention that "Unfortunately, there was no door to return back the way I came" and how Sirius ceased to exist? Then you say he does exist but in a spirit world. None of it is very consistent, especially since if Sirius does exist on another plane or doesn't exist at all, or he cannot come back... how can this portrait communicate all this? These things that shouldn't be able to happen?

    BTW I love how you've managed to combine sex with plot in a way that there's a story with sex in it, not just a sex story.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 03, 2005
    havce him work in malfoy mannor! hahahahahahaha
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  • From ANON - Kimi on November 03, 2005
    Well...let me just get this first part over with and say that you left me drooling. Litterally, that room is so intriguing and I CANNOT wait for more of that!! THE TATTOO!! WOO!! That's gunna be good. Hehe.

    Ok, so the dudley/harry part, that was the most emotional and beautiful thing ever, when they hugged. It was like magic, no pun intended. *sigh* it was really good, very well written too. I think it would be cool if dudley lived at hogwarts...or maybe not at hogwarts but in hogsmeade? somewhere protected and safe. maybe even grimmauld place? perhaps? I'm sure that whatever you come up with it will be wonderful. :)
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  • From ANON - Alleycat on November 03, 2005
    Oh I have the perfect idea! Have Dudley stay where draco's mom is hiding! that way he can learn some serious respect for magic folok and maybe get to like them.
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  • From ANON - angel on November 03, 2005
    i really liked it ... so what is harry going to do about dudley ...and will mione find draco.... please update soon and in till then keep up the awesome work and later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - luna luck on November 03, 2005
    OMG I can't believe you left us hanging like that :) Oh, please please please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Teania on November 03, 2005
    wonderful chapter! can't wait for the next one.

    And on my choice of where Dudley should live, i think he should got olive with Herminone's parents, since they are muggles too. ANd if not there, then with Aunt whats-her-name from the third book. the one witht he dogs that harry blew up....
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  • From ANON - Anna on November 03, 2005
    I think he should be sent to the burrow.
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  • From ANON - darkfantasywriter on November 01, 2005
    I love the way the plot is forming in this ff keep it up!
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  • From ANON - InTheShadows on November 01, 2005
    I love this story I have been reading it more and more and it just keeps getting better and better. I can't wait til the next chapter!! Keep up the good work and update soon!!

    -InTheShadows.
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  • From ANON - spanky on November 01, 2005
    aaaaahhhhhhhhh!!! puh-lease continue!! i only finished chapter 47 about 10 seconds ago and already having withdrawls :-S you write so well and the plotline is excellent... can't wait to see how dudley fares at hogwarts!! please keep writing before my brain has an aneurism! best wishes and i hope many exciting ideas come your way!!
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  • From ANON - Kathryn on October 30, 2005
    cool chapter...the dudley bit was intresting...oh and some harry/hermione stuff would be awesome 2...as much as i love how this story is going i love harry and hermione together the most...good chapter
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  • From ANON - Serendipity01 on October 30, 2005
    Wow, I just came across your story a week ago and it took me that long to read all (real life demanded attention too) - you are creating something wonderful here. I absolutely love it! Dark Harry is great fun to read about and the threesome realtionship is absolutely amazing - great combination ;) It's a funny idea to bring Dudley into the story - can't wait to read about his no doubt shocking-to-him-advent into the wizarding world (will he get a taste of Harry's new power?). I'm sure the Hermione-Draco alone-time will be lovely, as are your other making love and else scenes :) Looking forward to reading more!
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