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Reviews for What a Witch Needs

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  • From ANON - justcrazyobsessed on October 27, 2005
    as always, an amazing chapter. I can't wait for the next one. You're amazing and the plot just keeps getting better.
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  • From ANON - Miya Sparrow on October 27, 2005
    hmmmm? interesting really it was!....that whole Dudley thing was new.......obvsouly! I love new things, and that whole army things is the best idea ever! ahahaha Ginny was great!
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  • From ANON - Darkfantasywriter on October 27, 2005
    OMFG!! I need more!!! this is awesome

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  • From ANON - Anon on October 27, 2005
    oh come on you cant leave it like that. ohhhhh shit this is too funny
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  • From ANON - angel on October 27, 2005
    i hope bill see the boys take him in to the three broomstiks.. man please more i just love it and please update soonadn keep up the awesome awesome work and later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - Kimi on October 27, 2005
    omg...that was so amazing. I imagined that without the smut it wouldn't be as good as it usually is, but you proved me wrong! You are such a fantabulous writer that the smut was totally forgotten about once I got into the plot. It is sad though that harry has no time for draco and hermione anymore. Although i am a HUGE fan of dramione, hehe...it would be nice to see some more h/hr/d action sometime soon. please? I simply cannot wait to see the da's training sessions with harry and moody, that should be good. all the dudly parts were excellent, i was initially surprised that he was in there but i'm assuming that you have a thought in mind for him so i'll just leave you to your writing. :)

    Book four is my favorite too!! And i have tickets to see the movie on the 18th, i'm so pumped!! :)
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  • From ANON - Xaichan on October 25, 2005
    Ooooh... sex-tastic... and... interesting. This story gets better and better. keep it up.
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  • From ANON - Alleycat on October 24, 2005
    oh wow! Loving every chapie! I love the rough sex with the tenderness in the middle. Listen I know you need the plot to move along and you know I love what your doing with it, but I just wish you could give us more fuller lemons, as in from forplay to climax to spooning. just a request if you can manage it. ^_^
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  • From ANON - VI on October 24, 2005
    OMG!!! I'm addicted! please!!! update!!
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  • From ANON - Larkspur on October 24, 2005
    When I first started reading this story, I couldn't pull myself away. You portrayed three distinct, relatable characters that had the most interesting and dynamic relationship. The awkwardness between Harry and Draco, the tenderness between Harry and Hermione, and the exciting intimacy between Draco and Hermione. It was wonderful to read and to see the relationship between these 3 characters develop into a solid bond. The story had humor, compassion and great steamy love scenes!
    However, the last couple chapters I had to force myself to get through. Gone was compassionate and humanitarian Hermione, replaced by a pureblood driven only by her lust and forgetting her own mind. Gone was awkward but brave Harry, who by now should just be called Voldemort. At this moment, Harry Potter and Voldemort have no discernible differences. Harry making Pansy whore herself? Yes, she is guilty, but no woman deserves that. Where is Harry Potter? Only Draco retains a part of his former self, though he has flattened into a shell of his prior characterization. These characters were so intriguing to read in the beginning because they still had many canon aspects, but were weaved into a beautiful,fantastic relationship. Now all I see are 3 horny, power-hungry teenagers, none of who share qualities with their canon counterparts.
    I feel like I've read two different stories. I liked the first one, but I don't think I can read anymore of this second one.

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  • From operaangel on October 24, 2005
    great
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  • From ANON - India on October 22, 2005
    Wowzers...that smut scene was well...SMUTTY! lolz. Damn. And Harry's finally getting an army. Cool beans!
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  • From ANON - Teania on October 22, 2005
    potter's army? the P.A.? haha can't imagen saying that. Good idea though this story is getting better by the minute, please update soon.
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  • From ANON - jessica on October 22, 2005
    cool~ update quicker ^_^
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  • From ANON - lilycat on October 21, 2005
    Awww... I loved the sex scene this time. LOVED. It was so beautifully written. I kept worrying for Hermione, but I didn't need to, because her boys love her and they were SO sweet afterwards. I really like the way you've written the trio dynamics- gorgeous. I am intrigued to read more about Potter's Army.

    A very well-written, sweet, HOT, chapter.
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