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Reviews for What a Witch Needs

By : TCardan
  • From cruttan on October 04, 2005
    Don't apologize for the lack of sex! It's a great chapter. It made me remember why I love Fred and George- I really enjoyed the scene with them and Ron. It's almost enough to make you feel bad for Pansy and Millicent- almost. I thought the convo between Lucius and Sirius was extremely thought-provoking on many levels. Lucius made an interesting point about the Order using Harry and turning their backs on him (well I guess technically YOU made the point- well done).

    I am impressed with how many layers you have worked into this- really enjoying it!
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  • From cruttan on October 04, 2005
    Don't apologize for the lack of sex! It's a great chapter. It made me remember why I love Fred and George- I really enjoyed the scene with them and Ron. It's almost enough to make you feel bad for Pansy and Millicent- almost. I thought the convo between Lucius and Sirius was extremely thought-provoking on many levels. Lucius made an interesting point about the Order using Harry and turning their backs on him (well I guess technically YOU made the point- well done).

    I am impressed with how many layers you have worked into this- really enjoying it!
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 04, 2005
    Man... a sex castle? *drools*
    Okay, onto the chapter! I loved Neville, I'm glad he made that decision! As for the parts with Ron n the twins I never saw them as swearing or like, being mean.... but it had to be said and Harry is lucky to have them on his side!
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  • From ANON - Xaichan on October 04, 2005
    I adored this chapter. Especially the 'Neville and his Grandmother' scene in the begining. I don't mind not hearing about their sex, when it has great plot moments like this chapter had.
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  • From ANON - Pam on October 03, 2005
    I so...love this fic. Please post again soon. Thanks.
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  • From ANON - biz on October 03, 2005
    ive been reading this fic from the begining, and im still engrossed in it!!! keep up the good smut, and good plot! i like the neville scene too. a suggestion though... how about a little domination from hermione for once, there's been a lot of harry/draco domination over her, i think she'd like to be in control next time ;)
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  • From ANON - Kimi on October 02, 2005
    The beginning of this chapter almost made me cry, Neville is so sweet and brave and wonderful!! I love him!!*sigh* That whole part with all the children at St. Mungo's just made me really sad. A very good job on your part I must say. Although i am sad you are straying away from the smut, i am also glad that you are working on developing the plot more, and I must say...this dark harry/draco duo you have here is very intriguing. I absolutely love how draco is sort of the punisher and he makes all those kinds of decisions. It's very hot. The pansy/millicent thing was excellently written and I can't wait to see more of their punishments. I'm anxious for the DA meeting and what will become of ron...excellent chapter!! :)
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  • From on October 02, 2005
    LOL, a whole chapter with no sex. Cool ^^I cant wait for the next chapter. I kinda feel for Pansy and Millecent. I know they were wrong but, actally I only feel bad for Millicent cause really the only thing she did wrong was know what Pansy did. Its not like she knew back then Harry was going to be a Dark Lord.
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  • From ANON - Sorceress14 on October 02, 2005
    Sorry, that last review was from me. I was so caught up in how good the story was that I forgot to add me name, lol!
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 02, 2005
    Wow, that chapter scared me a bit at first with Snape and Voldemort (that poor kitty!). Is this going to be like HBP where Snape is not really who he sais he is or is he just Dumbledore's spy? And since when was Ron skeptical about joining Harry? Anyway, I think that it was really good of you to leave the smut out for a chapter. I'm getting very interested in this plot and I can't wait to see what happens next. When I started reading this fic, it was all about the sex but this story has really come a long way from a smutty fic. It is definitely something that will go down in HP fandom history. I loved this chapter and I can't wait for the next one! Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - ImperfectHermione on October 02, 2005
    I love this story! Instead of being pure smut or sex with a bad plot it has fuckin great sex and an awesome plot! But it feels weird that Harry and Hermione gave up on Dumbldore so easily. I can't wait to find out why! And is Ginny ever going to be mentioned at all? That would be an interesting direction....Lol!
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  • From ANON - LadyRose on October 02, 2005
    Hey, I've been reading this fic for a few days now. It's really great. I was never much for slash before...you've definately converted me. The backstory is interesting too, can't wait to see where it goes.
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  • From ANON - ~Sakurashope7~ on October 02, 2005
    Still doing a GREAT job....keep it up and update soon!
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  • From ANON - koool`` on October 02, 2005
    well gd keep it goin!!! ive stayed wit readin dis story n i usually just start new 1's 1ce i get 2 bout da 10th chapta!!! it rele gd i wannna c summink wit harry n dumbldor bein m8z agen coz it dont sound lyk them ni dnt tink its summink da trio wud do n/o luv da story tho i check evryday 2 c if uve put in anuva chapta!!
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  • From ANON - Mrs Luna Potter on October 02, 2005
    the last two chapters where great i think you are going to have to get hermione more accepting of things to come but i love the whole sucking ourself off thing!! oh it only it was possibily!!!! i like the idea of sexual punishment it is pritty good!! oh and yes i would love there to be a castle of sex!! lol!! and your sex scense are great they really are quiet hot and hevey lol!!! great two chapters
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