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Reviews for What a Witch Needs

By : TCardan
  • From ANON - ME on August 23, 2005
    YAY
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  • From ANON - Sorceress Black on August 23, 2005
    God I love Harry mouthing off to Snape. After all these years of reading the books and having to see Harry endure Snape's unfair shit, it is nice to see him get a little payback, even though its not "in the books" but hey it works for me all the same. That was a really good chapter, it was nice to get a little more Marlston information, and of course the smut is always welcome, I don't even think I have the proper compliments for Snape getting some Kitty action, no pun intended hehe, I will just say that at least he didn't have to screw any of the house elves haha. And OMG I cannot wait to see what happens with Lucius the peeping tom. Is he going to make some advances? What will Hermione do? and better yet what will our boys do? Even though I know the pairings in this I can't help but be interested in Lucius' erm "activities" as I just love his evil ass lol. Keep up your wonderful writing this truly is one of the absolute best fics ever!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Granolla_Bar on August 22, 2005
    dun dun dun!!! he better not do what i think he's about to do!!!! this is such filled with suspence!!!! will he rape her? will harry and draco beat the crud out of him? please continue!!! i love this!!!
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  • From ANON - Bean on August 22, 2005
    Nice solution about who was Hermione's biological father. It was quite natural...I should have guessed it!
    You've managed to build a very interesting story. Actually, after HBP, I think it's better than the original.
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  • From ANON - Sean on August 22, 2005
    It is amazing to see that this story started out as a challenge response. And now it has evolved into a wonderful story with lots of depth and a surprisingly good plot. Keep it up. I love this story.

    Sean
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  • From ANON - courtney on August 22, 2005
    OH NO HE DIDN'T JUST LOOK AT HERMIONE WHILE SHE WAS GETING DRESSED!!!! IM GONNA KILL HIM!!!!
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  • From ANON - Kimi on August 22, 2005
    WOW, WOW, WOW...I am just sooo freaking excited to find out what this Lucius/Hermione things turns out to be. Hmm...I don't think Draco would be to happy about that now would he? And Harry? Haha...this is getting so good. You know, when I first started reading your story I pretty much just read it for the smut cause it was so hot and wonderful. NOW, the smut is still hot and wonderful...but you also make me so excited for the plot too. You have developed such a beautiful story to go along with some smut and POW you have quite an amazing story. *bows* You are amazing.
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  • From ANON - Satan on August 22, 2005
    whoo that was a brilliant chapter, petal!! lots of sex, lots of plot, just the way it should be. as always, youve left us all eager for the next chapter. keep it up!! :)
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  • From ANON - alicia mmm love on August 22, 2005

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  • From ANON - firewall on August 22, 2005
    Another great chapter. Hermione must be relieved Voldemort is not her father...I would be. Poor Snape...not too pleased that the triad were voyeurs. I thought Harry made a very good point and the poor little house elf would be relieved. hahaha. Thank you for sharing I'm interested to see what the snake in the grass, Lucius, is up to.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 22, 2005
    Morgana and Sebastian are names from The Little Mermaid, are they not? If you did take them from the movie I'm ever so pleased, The Little Mermaid has always been my favorite Disney movie.

    Keep up the good work, I'm loooooving this fanfiction along with your others. This plot is just amazing.

    -A fan.
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  • From ANON - kurtcouper on August 22, 2005
    For some reason, I have a fear of Draco turning them all evil. Now I like evil. Evil is sexy. But I just don't see Harry becoming a Tom Riddle. Maybe I'm just taking too much out of his whole "My Lords" and things. I love this story. I do! So fucking much. I love Dark!Harry. I normally don't like his character, but you write him so eh's favorable. And their threesome relationship is just so yummy! I love the creative tongues you have taken with this whole mansion thing. 'Tis brilliant. You're a genius to think like that. You say that the mannor has powers. Sexual ones...dark ones. Will they be lurred to the dark side? And I hope Lucius does take a go at Hermione so he could get punished. Oh, a punished Lucius would make for something very kinky. Anyway, please continue this fic. It's so gorgeous.
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  • From ANON - ~Sakurashope7~ on August 22, 2005
    Ohhhhhh Lucius is bad (as we already know) but I hope that Those Who Dwell Below will help hermione if he tries to do anything.....
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  • From ANON - Catpower on August 22, 2005
    Oh no! My favourite Snape is now going to be subservient to Harry. Not sure that's a good idea. How easily he caved in just to get a cheap thrill shagging Kitty, who's almost non-sentient. Great stuff, though. Still following the story avidly - along with all the kinky action.
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  • From ANON - yomouda on August 22, 2005
    dumbass...
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