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Reviews for What a Witch Needs

By : TCardan
  • From ANON - Litekreem on August 15, 2005
    Im glad for all the answers to the questions.and I hope for fun that it was Sirius that Lucius was with.It would explain why he was so hell bent on hating Snape he was his cover(wink wink)
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  • From on August 15, 2005
    I was so damn happy when i saw this thinking it was a new chapter but its not and i was pissed but now that i've read it i"m cool. where'd you get the challge from though? cause i'd want to read the other entrys for that challge too. ^^ i'd hope there all as good as this one.
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  • From ANON - tubbles14 on August 15, 2005
    I love your story!! You could do one thing to make it better though.......Hermione in BONDAGE!! LOL I think that it would fit in with Marlston don't you?

    Just a suggestion that I really, really, REALLY hope you use.
    Meaghan
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  • From ANON - fern on August 15, 2005
    omg hremione walked in quick quick write faster i want to see what happeneds now dont make me pee in anticpation
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  • From ANON - jessica on August 15, 2005
    I really like your story the way you ended chapter 36 it will make people come back for even though i agree with what you did as an author it was still kind of upsetting to me to think that im going have to wait to find out how lucius reacts when he finds out that hermione is the marlston heiress please update soon the way your incorporated merlin was brilliant though it did upset me when you altered the original story of arthur being mordred's father it takes some of the unusuallness that has made the story so popular over the years away from it but its your story and that was an interesting twist i cant wait to see what happens with Kitty for the last week they are all at the manner i wondered how dumbledore's going to react when he finds out all that has happened and when are you going to put hemrione's tattoos to the test, the snake scene with paulo was creepy but i guess i must have a warped sense of humour to because i probably would have found it funny if i was terribly afraid of snakes

    FAREWELL AND I CANT WAIT TO BE PULLED BACK INTO YOUR VERSION OF THE HARRY POTTER MEGAVERSE
    p.s it pulls me in just like j.k rowlings versions do so keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - yomouda on August 14, 2005
    YAY! Update some more!!!
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  • From imari on August 14, 2005
    This story is so fuckin good (oops lost mind mind there) anyways i just like to say this story is the best story ive ever read (next to mine of course) but mine isnt neary as good as urs maybe u could give me a few writing tips. :)
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  • From ANON - firewall on August 14, 2005
    Hmmm, Narcissa brought up a couple of really good points....why is Voldemort considered the Deceiver? And perhaps more importantly, is he Hermione's father? And the fathering issue is going to be a very big one for the triad. Hmmmmmm. Really interesting.
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  • From ANON - mya on August 14, 2005
    And the plot thickens and secrets are revealed... Harry needs a little reminder of the light side though... things are getting a bit dark... hmmm can't wait to see where u take it...
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  • From ANON - Adrienna on August 14, 2005
    I love your story! It is so well written and so wonderfully full of smut ;) I can't wait to read the next chapter, please put it up soon!
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  • From ANON - random person 32 on August 14, 2005
    very very very good.

    i hope the next chaptor is finished soon
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  • From ANON - TaichiKoi on August 14, 2005
    Whoa, that was a loaded chapter, so much is going on, so many twists I did NOT see coming at all! Lucius and...Whoa!(won't say, just in case).
    I don't mind that there wasn't a lot of sex in this, the other things were nice to read about too. ::squeals:: I can not wait for more. Well, I'm going to have to, but you get my drift, right? Lol. Anywayz, keep up the fabulous work, I'll keep my eyes open for the next installment.
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  • From ANON - Sevvikins on August 14, 2005
    Hi there I realise I haven't reviewed this story before and thought it was about time I did...
    I love this story I realise that it is completely fiction but your imagination amuses me greatly.

    I was wondering how much longer this story was going to be and how regularly you would update as I have little paitience for a great story.

    Keep up the awesome work as you must realise by now it is well appreciated.

    Sevvikins
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  • From ANON - Sorceress Black on August 14, 2005
    Yes, finally the dynamic duo arrive. I just couldnt help but laugh at Lucius being knocked about and chucked into the dungeons, even though I love him hahaha. Oh and I loved how They're all just sitting around all relaxed like nothing whilst kitty is entertaining herself with the magical toys lol, that was great. So from what Hermione is saying Severus may finally get some action eh? lol Go Severus you get you some! Anyhow I am just itching to find out more, I can't wait to see Lucius' reaction when he realizes that Hermione is Lady Marlson, and I am very anxious to see more about the history of the marlsons, the manor and merlin of course, I have always loved Arthurian Legends and I think it is so cool that you are throwing that in this fic. AWESOME as always keep up the fabulous work I can't wait to read more!!!!!! Shannon
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  • From Spikiesluv4life on August 14, 2005
    Great chapter, I can't wait to see what happens next. Your story is very addicting, I find myself checking AFF all the time to see if a new chapter is up.
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