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By : TCardan
  • From ANON - lilly on August 14, 2005
    Cruelty,that is what it is. Just plain cruelty. I don't know whether to smack you or hug you I mean this in the nicest way, Please take as the compliment it was meant to be. This was another awesome chapter. I loved it. Please continue and update soon. This is one of my favorite stories on AFF.
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  • From ANON - iSoft on August 14, 2005
    What, no sex? lol, how very unbecoming of you... just kidding. Another chapter well done. Very nice and shocking. Keep up!
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  • From dracomalfoysmistress on August 14, 2005
    What!!!! NO you cannot end there uggh this had got to be the worst cliff hanger in the history of horrible cliff hangers. well i guess i will just have to wait on bated breath until the next chapter!
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  • From Gabriella on August 14, 2005
    AAAAAAAARRRRRGGHHHH!!!!! GOD that is a heinously cruel cliff hanger!!!! (Bonks author over the head with a large rubber chicken) Hermione JUST walks into the room & Lucius reacts "You!
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  • From ANON - rubberduck on August 14, 2005
    lots of interesting things happening in this chapter. i like the revelations about harry's father and lucius. that was an ingenious way to explain james' dislike to snape. i also liked the show of power harry had towards snape. the kiss with draco might have been a bit much, but then marlston is affecting them differently. i haven't liked your portrayal of lucius though. all the way to the inn, lucius was meek and not very aristocratic like he has been shown to be. i realize he has been through a bit, but still i don't think he would change so drastically. at least his cunning is still there while he is talking to harry and draco. by the way, i loved his reaction to finding hermione there hehe.
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  • From ANON - thortheorc on August 13, 2005
    great chapter, i'm not sure what to say besides keep them coming as fast as possible.

    thanks.
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  • From ANON - Narcissa Black on August 13, 2005
    Great chapter. I'm sorry I wasn't around today. You know I had my bag stolen, and when I realized that I had a large bruise on my arm, well. The fan definitely needs to be cleaned now. Anyway, the question of fathering the children is the problem with a long term threesome. And we're sure that Hermione's father was Sebastian? Gets sticky if it was Voldemort. Why is Voldemort the deciever? He was the Dark Lord, so was it only that he managed to maintain part of himself to attain immortality?
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  • From on August 13, 2005
    ACK!!! wow wow WOW WOW thats all I can seem to think... WOW James and Lucius WOW...
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  • From ANON - cherie on August 13, 2005
    God I love this story!!!!! It is so funny at times, I am actually crying. Can't wait for the next chappy!
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  • From ANON - Robbie Byrd on August 13, 2005
    I enjoyed reading your story. I liked how you had Draco starting to make peace with his Father. Please update soon
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  • From ANON - Miya Sparrow on August 13, 2005
    I like it as usual! its really cool, exspeical that last part! Your still Bloody Brillent!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 13, 2005
    Oh man, I'm still waiting for Kitty to get more in the picture. I'm also still loving dark Harry and him sticking it to Snape. Woo!
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  • From ANON - Litekreem on August 13, 2005
    omg I was laughing all the way through this chapter. It was great and Lucious finding out that Hermione is the Marlston heir is gonna be priceless
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  • From ANON - Satan on August 13, 2005
    brilliant chapter! cant wait to see what lucius says when he finds out hermiones Lady Marlston. oh by the way, when do the tattoos come in? well anyways cant wait for the next chapter, this plotline is fuckin incredible! its practically better then book 6..great job!
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  • From ANON - Kimi on August 13, 2005
    OH PLEASE LET THAT "MEOW" MEAN THAT THERE IS GOING TO BE MORE KITTY ACTION!! Please? Oh that would be wonderful. If Lucius and Kitty got it on...wow, I am just dying to see some Lucius action! Yummy! I'm just a sucker for the Malfoy's give me either of them...heck give me both of them TOGETHER and you've got me hooked. LOL, anyways...I am really anxious and very intrigued to hear more about the triad and about Merlin, I do hope that they go back down to the hall of portraits to see hermione's family again. Cause that would be great. Please more dark harry action...that would be great!! I love dark harry, he is just wonderful. And i just think it is sooo sexy when draco is turned on by harry taking control, more of that! woot!
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