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Reviews for What a Witch Needs

By : TCardan
  • From ANON - anjellic on August 07, 2005
    Very sound chapter...it was great incorporating her parents with voldemort. And having Harry stand up as the new Dark Lord was timed perfectly and with great reason. It's great how you've thought out this story so much. Have you ever considered writing professionally? I know that sounds funny what with this being adult fan fic but you really have a talent for putting story lines together. I love it so far!
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  • From ANON - Angel Eyes on August 07, 2005
    Great new chapter :)
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  • From on August 07, 2005
    Will Snape and Lucius get to play with Kitty? That would be a trip! Will the Slytherins take a blood oath as well? Colin's obsession with Harry is bordering on the scary side. Merlin frozen under the stairs? That's bloody creepy as hell!
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  • From ANON - firewall on August 07, 2005
    I have to admit I always look to see if you have updated and was glad to see you had! Thank you. I was a lttle worried with the arrival of Kitty because I wasn't sure how you were going to work the character in without destroying the triad. Brilliantly done! Can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - Kimi on August 07, 2005
    Wow, so much wonderful information in that chapter. I really loved it.

    Finding out about the triad's at Marlston, I was really very shocked, and I thought it was an excellent idea on your part. Then the part where we find out the Sebastian and Morgana were involved with Tom Riddle!! I was soo shocked, I never saw that coming! Never. I absolutely loved the part where the villagers swore their alligence to Harry, I am completely obsessed with the story when Harry "puts on" his Dark Lord mask and takes control, it is absolutely magnificent.

    *Squee* FemSlash was excellent! hehe...very good. I am just soo excited for more! I check your story like 5 million times a day to see if you have updated, and then when I just went on I just knew that you had updated...AND YOU DID!! YAY!! I LOVE YOU AND YOUR WONDERFUL STORY!! :)
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  • From ANON - Satan (not logged in) on August 07, 2005
    wow, that was a brilliant chapter, you really have thought this plot through! loved the whole "christmas with kitty" thing, that was genius. hope you get a new chapter up soon!
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  • From ANON - Dreamweaver on August 07, 2005
    I was so not expecting Tom Riddle to be in one of those portraits and Merlin being buried beneath them. My jaw hit the floor. Excellent. Did I ever mention I love Autherian legends? Well I do and I was thrilled to be reading it in your story. Can't wait to see where this leads too. I felt sorry for Hermione - talk about information overload. That would have been surreal to see her parents like that. As for Kitty, once again all I can say is MEOW!! LOL Wonderful read!!
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  • From ANON - litekreem on August 07, 2005
    I love this story but how do we know who fathers the children the husband or the Dark Lord.I cant wait for Severus and Lucius to show up
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 06, 2005
    Where have all the updates gone? I am bereft...
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  • From ANON - Sean on August 06, 2005
    I love the fact that each character has many layers to their personalities. I find it refreshing seeing Harry as a dark lord and Malfoy as a softy. But not too soft. This plot is better then the seventh book's plot. It is a break from Harry as the Hero of good. When I read this story it's nice to pretend that it is the real story. Please continue with this.
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  • From Gabriella on August 06, 2005
    HHhhmmmmm... Very interesting the way you portray Harry, Draco and Hermione at Marlston Manor, especially during the tattoo scene. Fucking LOVE IT by the way!!!! (From the point of view of someone who has a tattoo and will get a twining "Draco" one as well.) Hermione is Harry's soft side, his humanity and conscience, Draco is his darkness, his twisting sensuality. I love how you write them as balanced, though it is a threesome there is no power struggle. Yet, they have conflict that is natural as well...


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  • From Gabriella on August 06, 2005
    (Snorts drink out the nose in shock) Ho--ly mother of GOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I have a huge thing for well done threesomes & in the HP universe this fic is FUCKING INCREDIBLE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! In character for all three of them & HE--LLOOOOOOOO Lucky fucking HERMIONE!! *groan* (Sprawled, sated, in the computer chair, legs dangling over the side.) This is like the sodding sexiest fic out there!!! Of its type!!! THANK YOU FOR WRITING THIS!!!!!!!!! (Drooling in a rather large puddle on the floor.) This is on my favorites list... ^.--
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  • From imari on August 05, 2005
    This story: way cool cant wait for the next 5 chapies
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  • From xtakemylife on August 05, 2005
    cant wait to see more of hermione and kitty, you definitely need to develop that!! i would also like to see harry be a little more dominant with hermione. lovin all the kinkiness and can NOT wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - anjellic on August 05, 2005
    Interesting chapter....I enjoyed Kitty. This could cause some problems as well as some fun! Can't wait to see what you do!
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