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Reviews for What a Witch Needs

By : TCardan
  • From ANON - Sarah on July 29, 2005
    Just so you can understand how much i enjoyed this fic i should start by saying that i HATE reading long fics!

    I started yours not realising how many chapters it had until i pressed 'next chapter' and realised that there are 30... and more coming! lol

    I made a decision to carry on reading and stop when i got bored or felt the sex scenes weren't as good as they should be (hehe) ;-)

    After six hours and at roughly 4am i realised that not only had i enjoyed the fic but it was one of the best i'd ever read. Yes, there are a few spelling and grammar mistakes (which usually makes me close the window straight away on a fic) but the use of language and description kept me reading.

    My only critisism at the moment is that it's all a little too 'rosy' for the trio. In reality we all know three's a crowd - maybe you could inject some conflict there? I dunno, i'm sure you know where you're going with the fic and you've done well enough without my help so far lol so i should really keep my mouth shut! haha just an idea though.

    Keep up the great work and i can't wait to read more!

    Sarah xox
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  • From ANON - Sorceress Black on July 29, 2005
    I have been meaning to review for awhile and I am now finally getting to it. You have a fabulous naughtly little fic here, very entertaining indeed. I like that you have all this backstory going on, I especially LOVE the whole Marlston thing. The boys are turning into evil little freaks hahaha, I love it, I can't wait to see what these two do in the next chapter. Oh and I have to say even though it was wayyyy back that I absoultely LOVED when they were all intoxicated by the potion and in heat and went to the Dursleys that was so hilarious!! ANyhow arent they supposed to be writing to Dumbledore everyday? Looks like they are a bit preoccupied hehe. And I wonder if those snakes said anything to Harry even though they didnt hear him say anything to them hmmm. Will they ever get there crap together and find this "weapon" maybe the weapon for Harry is simply being there and bringing out the Dark Lord within him hmmm something to ponder on till I find out I guess. Keep up the great writing!!!!
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  • From ANON - Lyndie578 on July 29, 2005
    Quite an interesting "turn to the Dark Side". I one plays at something long enough it becomes real. Good plot develpment, sexy as it is! Thank you for continuing to post to this intriguing story!
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  • From ANON - Marianne on July 29, 2005
    you have a great imagination! Im looking forward to read about that tatooist..
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  • From on July 29, 2005
    Ohh! update soon! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Twinkle on July 29, 2005
    Woa, that was steamy. :D Great chapter, I love the turn to the darker side. I can't wait to read more of this. You have done brilliantly so far. Great as always, well done.
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  • From on July 29, 2005
    Argh! Chpater 32 is too short, damn you!
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  • From ANON - Dreamweaver on July 29, 2005
    Oh this is getting interesting. Is it the House that's overtaking them or the beings that dwell beneath, I wonder. There's obviously a lot of old magic in the place. I find it interesting that Harry was the one to notice there was something wrong with the library and not Hermione since she is their heiress. Can't wait to find out more about that one. And Draco seems quite willing to get into all sorts of mischief too LOL I wonder who he was practising on to get that lipstick on Hermione. Looking forward to more, as always. :)
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  • From ANON - kitten on July 29, 2005
    ohh ohh PLEASE UPDATE SOON i'm sooo ready for some kink it's this a dark harry/draco/hermione but not evil fic or an evil h/d/h I DO LOVE EVIL FICS and when's hermione going to tap into her darker side like harry she still too goodey goodey you'd think all that sex would relax her a bit more and bring out her naughty side i mean come on she doing two very hot guys who know how to please!
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  • From ANON - NeNe Harumi on July 28, 2005
    I love your story and work but..come oooooon!
    Update some more! x.x;
    It's drivin me NUTS waiting for your updates..I feel like you used to add more chappies before but maybe thats just cuz I was behind from just starting the story lol
    Anyhow..UPDATE MORE!
    My only complaint T.T
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  • From ANON - Boo on July 28, 2005
    AWSOME JUST POSTIVELY AWSOME!!
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  • From ANON - Sorceress14 on July 28, 2005
    I'm sorry to be a critic but I've been sticking with this fic for a while now because the first 10 or so chapters were REALLY REALLY good and I couldn't get enough. I kept reviewing even though I felt you were going a little downhill from where you started because I was hoping that it would get better. By no means is this a bad fic, I actually really like it but it's just not showing some of the originality or sexiness it did in the beginning, the plot's sort of taken over leaving no more room for the stuff that made this story what it is. There are only so many ways Draco, Hermione, and Harry can have sex and it seems almost like reading the exact same thing each time and it doesn't excite me anymore. I LOOOOVE your plot, it's great and original, but please try to find time to get back your originality when it comes to the more sensual details of the story. Sorry, I love you I really do, don't be mad at me! *gives puppy dog eyes* PLEASE!
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  • From ANON - AppleLady on July 28, 2005
    Hey Petalsoft!

    I just started reading this story and so far so good! Keep up the good work!

    AppleLady

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  • From ANON - nufsinna on July 28, 2005
    Wow, your story is so much fun. I had read it before when it was just through the first Room of Requirement scene. I guess that was back in April. I was looking for it again last night, remembering how hot it was and wanting to spend some private time reading with my vibrator. And here I find you have pulled this neat little plot out of your lovely PWP. (And when I say 'neat little plot' I of course mean 'complex, thoughtful, and highly entertaining plot'.) And omg it is still so flipping hot! I love darklord!Harry...or I should say I bow down and worship at the feet of darklord!Harry. I'm happy to see Hermione come into some power of her own. She will need it with those two delicious men in her bed. And then you have my beautiful Draco submitting and dominating with equal passion and helping Harry embrace his inner darkness. You have kept me up all night and I think I love you.
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  • From on July 28, 2005
    This story is wild but good and I usually do not read anything with slash. The part about the peaches was brilliant, stroke of genius. Draco is still a bad boy with a weakness for power, Harry has interesting anger issues and Hermione is still the logical, unifying force between two boys. Please keep going!
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