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Reviews for What a Witch Needs

By : TCardan
  • From ANON - Kimi on July 22, 2005
    Wow! Excellent chapter indeed!! Those "Things-That-Dwell-Below" or something like that was a VERY good touch, I wasn't really expecting that. And I also really liked when Harry started to take charge of the situation, even though it didn't get him anywhere. Hehe...I would like more of that please! More of Harry being dominant and kind of dark. I don't know why but for some reason I am drawn to him when he is dark. I like it. I am very excited to see what is in store for the 3 for the remainder of the Marlston Chapters, I'm sure they will all be fabulous! :) Update soon!
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  • From ANON - deshijessi on July 22, 2005
    I totally LOVE this story!! I check it like twice a day to see if you have updated!!! I can't wait to see what happens in Marlston Manor! I hope it's nothing too harsh!
    Would it be possible for you to email me when you update? My email is jessiduke05@yahoo.com. If you can't, that's fine! I will still check religiously!
    ~deshijessi
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  • From ANON - Lyndie578 on July 22, 2005
    Good plot movement. I'm glad they were up to inspection standards. It's good that they are all together; I think they will need eachother in the end. Thanks for the update! I'm looking forward to reading about the Manor!
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  • From ANON - Priss368 on July 22, 2005
    Excellent chapter! I loved how clearly you depicted Belinda & Meri. The aura of mystery that you've created is very gripping! I can't wait to read more! Please update soon! Priss
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  • From ANON - Melagic on July 22, 2005
    I am soooo sorry I haven't reviewed before. These stories are my guilty, sneaky pleasure at work so i don't usually have time. But your story made me stop and review. I love it, it's so hot! It has an excellent story line, but you don't forget to frequently add the oh so delicious smut. I'm greatly looking forward to the Marleston chapters ahead. Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - greenevans on July 22, 2005
    i started to read this harry/hermione/ginny story and found it moronic, but this one i'm drawn to. maybe because being with two guys at once is some what of a secret fantasy of mine. but don't tell anyone! lol.

    anyway, this story is hott. HOTT and it's getting interestig with the plot developement. I was wondering when you were going to through in that sex position that was in the sexual rituals stone circle thing. yeah, hope that made sense...

    i take it that the Marlston women tend to have two male lovers?

    good chap, update soon, please. I want to find out what's going to happen in the Marlston Manor ;)
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  • From ANON - Melodee on July 20, 2005
    Loved the Ron groaning
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  • From Melodee on July 20, 2005
    lol ..."your about to get my "thick" fist in your mouth".. Seriously..I don't know if you did it on accident or it was planned but that was funny...Or maybe I'm just wierd(that's probably it), but other thick things came popping up in my mind when I read that. His thick fist...Anyways. All in all, great chapter.
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  • From Melodee on July 20, 2005
    Neat....very neat. For real, that was soooooo funny! And smuty, of course.
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  • From ANON - yomouda on July 19, 2005
    um, what's with you man? that was absolutely hilarious, and that mr. edwards "wanking off", get voldemort in here so he can join the sex party, saying he's sober..
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  • From flamekeeper on July 18, 2005
    Perfectly written...I happen to read almost nothing but Sci-Fi and Fantasy with Fantasy being the major role, and you have me hooked. I finished the last chapter and was broken to discover that there were no more chapters. Please finsh Book 6 (which is really good, but only took me about five or six hours) and put more chapters up.
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  • From ANON - Stash on July 18, 2005
    all I have to say this story is how do you call it ........ interesting..... never read a story like this. Update soon. And also this chapter was umm....wierd

    Stash xx
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  • From ANON - Kyo on July 17, 2005
    WHAT THE FUCK IS A HILLOCK? I was reading this chapter to my friend while on the phone with her, and we were both like WTF when that word came up. then we replaced the words penis, vagina, anus, and boobs with celieng, wall, door, and floor. That was a bucket of fun........
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  • From ANON - Admiring Author on July 17, 2005
    dude ive been reading the new potter. on page three hundred. So far you've actually missed alot but that can't be that suprising. You were close on the ron+lavender (or did u have it as pavarti). Anyways i'll update my reviews after i finish potter and see if you really are jk rowlings editor or something. YOU KNOW TOO MUCH.
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  • From ANON - thegrandfour on July 16, 2005
    Wow... Cool, please continue! The story is amazing, there is actually a plot and I just got to say you are a brill writer.
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