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Reviews for What a Witch Needs

By : TCardan
  • From ANON - Georgina on July 15, 2005
    Absolutely Fantastic!

    Keep it up!
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  • From ANON - Catpower on July 15, 2005
    This fic is definately still going in the right direction for me. I just love the whole Marlston thing, both the underground vault with the blood key and the scary "Marlston comes for you!" witch. It is interesting that you have found a way to give Draco a power that Harry doesn't have in that Draco knows the ways of dark wizards. I am fascinated to see how far Harry and Hermione go with the dark magic thing before saying, "that's immoral and we can't do that." Or maybe they will turn to the dark side. There are lots of possibilities, I guess and I am looking forward to seeing what happens next. Enjoying all the shagging too - that's one thing I'm sure we won't find in the new HP novel :)
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  • From ANON - Admiring Author on July 15, 2005
    sry to review again so quickly but i just finished reading what you have to date. DO NOT STOP WRITING IF JK ROWLING'S BOOK SIX FIGHTS AGAINST YOUR IDEALS. in a way to many of us, i think, this has become the continuation of the series. A more adult/smut version to be sure, but... you should become a proffesional author. Serious. I've read worse books by famous authors that make millions a year. You have the talent even if you don't publish. Anyways. I've run out of things to say but in all likely hood after the next chapter i'll be reviewing again. If you need a beta, just let me know. Keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - Admiring Authour on July 15, 2005
    Dude. Dudette. dont know what you are. you are an amazing author. if i could i would buy the harry potter patent off of jk rowling and ask you to write book seven. of course it would never make it past the censors, but hey.I think that your idea of harry being a dark lord is one with unlimited potential that i only wish jk rowling knew about. You know what though, I think hermoine needs to get harry in her pussy and malfor up her ass. Double stuffed, plain and simple. Keep up the awesome work. I'm only on chapter seventeen, but so far you haven't let me down. Ty for all your hard work

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  • From ANON - Queen mAlice on July 14, 2005
    still v. good

    stillv. interesting
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  • From ANON - yomouda on July 14, 2005
    how uncivilized... keep updating though
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  • From ANON - Talia on July 14, 2005
    I LOVE THIS STORY!
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  • From imari on July 14, 2005
    Wicked story
    Keep on writing
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  • From ANON - Sorceress14 on July 14, 2005
    Sorry, I didn't review for the last chap, I've been really bust but now I have more time and look forward to reading the rest. Anyway, those were two really good chapters. Is the lawyer anybody important in the plot? He seems like he could be. I loved everything about thses past chapters, not a complaint to give. I'm getting a little scared of Draco now. He made about five comments in one chapter alone about power and taking over and then his obsession with the Marlston treasure. Is he using Harry and Hermione for all of this or are his intentions genuine? And what is with that lady in Marlston village, can she read minds or something? I absolutely loved how protective Harry was of Hermione when Mr. Edwards tried to join in, it's so cute. Can't wait for the Marlston chaps, keep them coming!
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  • From ANON - Alice on July 14, 2005
    wAHHH!! i love this story! :D keep writing!!!
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  • From ANON - Dreamweaver on July 14, 2005
    Brilliant job getting to the vaults at Gringotts. I think I was riding the darn thing with them. And damn those stones must be powerful. I'm just imagining all the rituals there must have been there. :) I didn't imagine Harry or Draco for that matter would let anyone else near their lady. Can't wait to see what happens when they get to the house. Wonderful work, once again. :)
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  • From robin777 on July 14, 2005
    I loved it. I thought that the vaults were great especially the dragon guarding them. Draco cutting her hand and cleaning the blood of it and telling her never allow anyone to keep her blood was great. I had a feeling Harry wouldn't react well to Mr. Edwards trying to join in. I love how Draco is encouraging him to be The Dark Lord. I do think he going to have to learn to handle Dark Wizards.
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  • From ANON - Rayanna on July 14, 2005
    Your story is one of the best I read. Can't wait to read more...
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  • From ANON - inu-baby on July 14, 2005
    this story is too fucking good. keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - Kimi on July 14, 2005
    I don't even know what to say...that was without a doubt THE hottest thing I have ever read. Up against those stones, and right in front of Mr. Edwards?! OMG, wow...I don't even know what to say. It is definetly an understatement if I do say that I am dying to know what else Marlston has in store for us all. If it's as hot as that chapter...count me in! Can't wait for the next chapter...hope you have fun reading hbp, cause i know I will!! :)
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