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Reviews for What a Witch Needs

By : TCardan
  • From ANON - Twinkle on July 08, 2005
    Ooh Draco is becoming even more manipulative then ever in this chapter. It's nice to see some of his canon characteristics come into play. I'm interested to see whether there is anything to the bodily fluids thing, or is that a red herring? Great chapter, as always. :)
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  • From ANON - Colin on July 08, 2005
    You expressed concern about some of you grammatical mistakes and whatnot.
    I have a little tip for you. Read your work backwards, each word at a time.
    Sine you wrote the story your brain fills in the blanks or corrects mistakes
    without you being aware of it. By reading it backwards you will be more likely
    to catch misspelled or misused words and other mistakes. Hope this helps out.
    I am enjoying your story so far and looking forward to the next installment.

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  • From ANON - Arabrant on July 08, 2005
    This is a nice little plot you've woven into a story that started as a smut piece. Wasn't Harry looking for a private place that he could meet his two lovers in private? But I guess he's been a little distracted recently. Keep up the good work.
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  • From dracomalfoysmistress on July 06, 2005
    10 days till book 6 YAY! AS always i loved it. he plot keeps getting more and more intense.when i started reading this story the plot was kinda weak (sorry) but now its completly amazing one of the best ive read in a long time. i love seeing a more compationate draco and an extremly pissed off harry. Great job cant wait for an update
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  • From ANON - Catpower on July 06, 2005
    Fabulous! Fabulous! Loved the bathroom scene and the whole dark Harry thing - it really gets across the old adage, "power corrupts". I also really enjoy the way that, in your version of the wizarding world, sex is so much closer to the surface of daily life - and therefore more forgiveable, or at least understandable, to everyone. If only I thought I could get away with saying to my partner something like, "sorry but I accidentally let a colleague of yours go down on me by mistake - you don't mind, do you?"
    "No, Catpower, not at all. You obviously weren't feeling yourself at the time."

    It's lucky we've got fanfics like this to help us dream.
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  • From ANON - Lu Ling Qi on July 06, 2005
    i feel this is one of the best stories i have read ina long long time. I love the power and th story line and how oyu ae taking it. I am finding myself a fan of the hermonie hary draco stories and this one is fantastic. Please continue to write and update this as i will looking for updates in the future. Not to sound arrogant but i rarely review anything as most of it is dribble so feel good and feel special that you had someoen that does not usually reveiw reveiw your story. As always update soon!
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  • From Britomartis on July 05, 2005
    Well, I like it. It's great, novella length even. I could go on a technical rant here, but there's really no point. You're talented, and a good Beta could fix your spelling/grammar issues. Everyone makes them, even me, and I'm rather psycho about the whole thing. All in all, so far a great read, and I'll be looking forward to your next update.

    ~Bri
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  • From ANON - Narcissa Black on July 05, 2005
    Still loving the story. In Chapter 25, I like to think that you mean traitor, not trader. Traders need love too, you know.
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  • From ANON - Miya Sparrow on July 05, 2005
    wonderful!...thats all I have to say! :-D
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  • From ANON - VI on July 05, 2005
    I love this story. Your great with detail and switching characters. And love how your always coming up with new situations and positions. And Harry pissed off and powerful
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  • From ANON - Elayne on July 05, 2005
    I'm so glad you update this so often! I've been with you since pretty much the beginning. I'm impressed how you have turned a PWP into a very ingrossing story with an intriging plot. Keep it coming!
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  • From ANON - Sorceress14 on July 05, 2005
    That was horrible what Lucius did to his own son! And then Hagrid trying to help and him not even giving a damn! He's so evil, I hope he get what he deserves in the end. Anyway, brilliant writing! I love how caring Draco and Hermione are even though Harry did something wrong. This story has definitely blossomed into more than Hermione losing her virginity, this is a great piece. The plot seems so well thought out and I love every twist. By the way, when will the girl/girl thing be brought back into the story? Just wondering. Update soon, please!
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  • From ANON - yomouda on July 05, 2005
    DON'T STOP!!! oh honey child you are bloody amazing, please continue, but about Harry and Draco in animal G-strings, give me 5 minutes in the bathroom with Hermione to tell her off because that was humiliating, but hot at the same time
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  • From on July 05, 2005
    I really do like dark Harry, he's a lot more funner then the mild Harry.
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  • From ANON - Petalsoft on July 05, 2005
    Don't worry, plenty of sex is coming. It's just been plot heavy lately because events just had to happen for me to move this plot forward. There's been a lot to try to fit in lately. But there will definately be lots of sex coming up!
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