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Reviews for What a Witch Needs

By : TCardan
  • From ANON - Sara on June 29, 2005
    Im from England and for easter as well as christmas we get 2 weeks off, hope that helps!
    I love this fic, you're writing so well, keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Percypops on June 29, 2005
    In England schools are off generally 6-7 weeks in the summer. The first term is divided in half (sept - dec) with usually a one week break. Then Xmas holidays are two weeks. After 2nd tem (jan - april) There is a two week break for Easter, then summer term april - july.

    Thats da school system in england at least it was at my primary school and high school. they vary across the country but not dramatically.

    Cool story though!!!
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  • From ANON - Miya Soarrow on June 28, 2005
    well it sounds interesting! And I really love it, it would make such a good book. If only J.K would start writing stuff like this LOL J/k *sigh* oh well. Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Gardengirl on June 28, 2005
    I have really been enjoying this fic! You have managed the all-but-impossible with this threesome. It's believable and compelling. I have seen quite a few spelling and grammatical errors, which detract from the story. It's like stubbing my toe when I "trip" over them. However, it's not enough to keep me from checking back for updates on a daily basis! Keep up the excellent creativity!
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  • From ANON - Slave4Severus on June 28, 2005
    First off, I LOVE THIS STORY!!! I never realized that you were the author!! Great job on this one!!! I am a big fan of the Slave dancer chapter..LOL I know..sounds funny when your name is Slave4Severus. WHERE IS YOUR OTHER STORY?????? I was waiting for an update and then find out that you pulled it. Why??? I was so looking forward to Hermione and Blaise...and of course Sev...please tell me you will not let some stuffy idiots keep you from writing!!! Kudos for standing up for yourself, oh great one!

    vknickens@netzero.com
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  • From robin777 on June 28, 2005
    This just keeps getting better and better. I thought Hermione's fantasy was so hot. I really liked Harry telling the DA about himself and how he and Hermione left.
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  • From ANON - rubberduck on June 28, 2005
    i must say i'm a bit surprised that the guys didn't do more together, but then again, i suppose hermione wanted to have some attention her way too. she's one hot little vixen. i find myself very interested in how snape will be handling the outraged parents as well as the divided house he now oversees. there has to be tension in slytherin house and i wouldn't mind to see some of it spill out into the rest of the school. it's nice that everyone seemed to accept harry and his story, but i'm a bit disappointed. i thought there might be some more tension from some. i mean, seamus had a real problem with harry in year five when harry was thought to be an attention seeking psycho. wouldn't he have a slight problem with harry now declaring he's a dark lord? maybe some of the students will show their true colours later. either way, i'm really enjoying the story and can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - Robbie Byrd on June 28, 2005
    I liked how you had Harry tell everyone about him being a Dark Lord.
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  • From ANON - summer on June 28, 2005
    The kids around here get 6-8 weeks off, it seems like loads! i hope that was some kind of help! Love the story
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  • From ANON - Dreamweaver on June 28, 2005
    I can tell you're excited about the plotline of this story - it shows with everything you do. :) My goodness where to start - that chapter covered so many things. I think I'll invest in a hammock for a start. LOL Very nice work there. *evil grin* I'm pleased Dean and the others kept quiet over their discovery of the trio too - there's a lot of loyalty and respect there for Harry and Hermione and it was good to see they intended on honouring it. Oh and poor Sev, things are going to get rather difficult for him, aren't they? All that trouble and worry and no one (well except maybe Dumbledore) really knows what he has to do to get through the life he is leading. Looking forward to seeing how you handle this as well as Hermione's family dealings too. Oh alright, I can't wait for everything. Bring it on!!!!
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  • From ANON - Angelee on June 28, 2005
    I TOTALLY LOVE THIS STORY! You are an awesome riter! You make it seem so real...i mean, i almost started crying when i red about Draco sticking up for Harry.

    Ure story plot is also really good, as well as the sex!

    Keep it up,
    Angelee
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  • From ANON - MC on June 28, 2005
    hey I just love this fic its so erotic and very nicely written, please due continue, can't wait to see what happens!!!
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  • From ANON - Rebecca on June 27, 2005
    Please, please, please, PLEASE update NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From Idontreallylikeyou on June 26, 2005
    I like your story so far and I have one thing to say to the wanna be sex experts out there. If you don't like it dont read it, honestly people these are teenagers of course there going to call their stuff weird names, don't you people remember what raging hormones felt like. You don't care what it's called as long as your getting some, ya know.LOL. Besides that when you start calling certain parts of your body by their scientific name you lose your readers because they don't wanna read sex ED. They just want to read a hot fic.

    Just so ya know I've been reading the reviews and they kinda made me laugh. l8er.
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  • From ANON - Petalsoft on June 26, 2005
    The first chapter was purposely written to convey a lack of knowledge as both Ron and Hermione had no experience up to that point.
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