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Reviews for What a Witch Needs

By : TCardan

From ANON - Canlo81 on June 26, 2005
I read the first chapter and found that I couldn't go any further. First of all, if you have not sexual experiance you may want to look up on annatomy. The semi-lemon scene was a real testament to your lack of knowledge. Second the situation was pretty ridiculous. Oh well maybe the rest is better.
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From ANON - Veritaserum45 on June 26, 2005
Wow....your story is amazing. I don't believe it at all!! It started off with smut, smut, smut, but then the plot developed and it's even better in chapter 23 than it was in chapter 2!!! (And I've just had a moment of deja vu...) Anyways, you've done a lot of writing in a short amount of time. Actually, I'd really love the story more with less description of sex now that we know exactly how the "Get-down Trio" do it. I like the direction the plot is going in. Great story!
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From ANON - just a fan on June 25, 2005
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and damn you to hell if you don't
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From on June 25, 2005
Your an amazing writer and I cna't wait for the next chapter to come out! This is such an interesting plot! I'm glad they were caught because now that means the whole school is going to know and the schools reactions to their relationship is what is going to be really great.

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From ANON - jdkjf on June 25, 2005
i love this story!
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From ANON - natyslacks on June 24, 2005
^___^ So Smutty! I love this story, it's full of sexy goodness, or as my friends say smexy >.< I like how you've written it so far and I'm glad Harry has some Sytherin support, so far. I also think It'll be good to see how people react to Hemrione's liniage when she claims her fortune etc. Please update soon.
Luv Naty
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From ANON - natyslacks on June 24, 2005
This chapter was the funniest thing ever! I was laughing so much!! Well done *Goes to read the rest of the chapters* ^.^ Luv Naty
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From ANON - clasyact on June 23, 2005
Oh now it wasn't that long of a chapter! But I guess we all get writers cramp after a while. Still enjoying this hot fic of yours. "here here" to Hermione, The gentlemen should make love to eachother. By the way... not that any of them need any more problems than they already have, but has Hermione kept up with those contraceptive spells and do Draco and Harry have any responsibility in this dept? But now I remember your Marlstrom plot idea... I'm sure that will come into play soon enough.

Happy writing and many great ideas to you ;-)
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From ANON - bob on June 23, 2005
hmmh....leopard and zebra...going.at it? hehe kinky!
well I'd have to say that the saying "a way to a girls heart is through her feet" totally true! I just wish that someone else would get that clue.....my poor feet :'(
sooo this chapter was awesome....full of the plot that we love....the slytherins are finally starting to get who's side will win. Your making me happy! :D
ooo tay! Now update the happy jungle scene!
-bob
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From ANON - kat on June 23, 2005
great story
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From ANON - Anon on June 23, 2005
Damned good story, can't wait to see more.
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From ANON - Sorceress on June 23, 2005
Thanks so much for taking my advice on having Harry's roomates find him in bed, it was so hilarious when you eplained the looks on their faces! I would have loved to be Hermione in that fantasy, it's so hott. I'm glad that everyone is finally gonna find out about their secret. This was such a good chapter, I really enjoyed it. I can't wait to see the boys in their g-strings!(lol) You're such a good writer and I can't wait for the next chapter! Hmmmm, suggestion for the next chapter, none becauseb your doing marvolously on your own and i know that you won't dissapoint me! Update soon!
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From ANON - Catpower on June 23, 2005
Amazing. You made the "accept the fact that an orgy between your hero plus his girlfriend plus his enemy took place in your room while you slept" scene look so easy! I wish real life were that simple. Ron's a good sport isn't he? I reckon he deserves a good shag for that. I'm looking forward to DM/HP's soppy love scene. I really do love this fic. Keep up the good work.
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From ANON - Rain on June 23, 2005
Fucking Awesome. I love and i mean LOVE this fic. an't wait for an update.
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From on June 23, 2005
i really enjoy reading this fic. i like the twist that u did re: some slytherin students supporitng harry etc. :) oh and of course i like reading the other "stuff" too ;)
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