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Reviews for Afterglow

By : MuirninMorrigan
  • From ANON - Nique on April 28, 2005
    Awe! That'soo cute.
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  • From ANON - Bambu on April 13, 2005
    A story doesn't have to include smut to be worth reading... or adult. I liked the self-sacrificing nature of Hermione's need to help Harry no matter what. I enjoyed this. You did a good job of capturing the reactions of warriors who are -- not matter how much practice the DA can have -- still untried.
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  • From ANON - Puff_the_magic_midget on April 12, 2005
    I enjoyed the story. Keep writing!
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  • From ANON - Mena on April 12, 2005
    The images of the battle were the best I've ever read, and I really don't like final battle sequences. Yours had so much action but it seemed realistic and according to the books. It was really great and felt like the story should be a long one with such a great beginning! The only thing I didn't like about it was that Hermione and Harry started making out so ferociously. It seemed kind of weird. I could imagine they might kiss, but the legs wrapping around him and all and Ron and Ginny seeing them just felt weird after all that came before it. I guess that's because it's the end of the story and I was expecting another chapter. It felt rushed at the end, like you had to put something smutty in there. Don't take that the wrong way -- I really think you could make a most excellent story out of this beginning if you wanted to. I mean I actually read the whole thing and it kept my attention and I actually even got a little chill down my spine while reading about the battle. I think you do the characters justice. Great work here and great writing.
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 12, 2005
    i loved the intensity of this story... and i didn't mind the lack of smut... i actually enjoy stories without them more. you should consider posting this story on portkey (if its not already there) its a website dedicated to hermione/harry, and people are really good with reviewing. www.portkey.org
    i hope you will continue writing!

    nnt
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