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By : lojenn
  • From ANON - Aunt Bijou on April 26, 2005
    Ohhh, a break, thank Bast! Enjoying it, but sometimes, reading it, and getting so involved, I actually get stressed FOR Harry! You know, heart pounding, hard to breathe, etc. I like the way you are showing the developing relationship between Harry and Draco, and how Draco is growing slowly more willing to listen to Harry, and how he "gets" Harry, understands things that Harry hasn't really vocalized. Pretty astute, though you should have thrown in Harry's "Dursley" defense....nah, never mind, don't think it would have worked. Anyhow, can't wait for the next installment! Soon, oh sooooooon!!!
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  • From ANON - Closet Skeleton on April 26, 2005
    Oh... wow.

    First off, thank you so much for the extra long chapter, I was in utter glee when I saw that. Secondly.... wow. Draco is... still Draco, but a delightfully *different* Draco. The buying of clothes and candy and everything else... I love how it's hidden behind "Because I won't be seen with you dressed like that", but it's really caring. Credit for Ron because he protected Harry, fudge because Harry looked like he wanted it, inkwell because Harry was admiring it - it's not completely about the whole "because I can" thing, it's more "because I want to", and that makes me so HAPPY! Draco isn't being an utter JERK anymore, he's starting to honestly be *nice* to Harry! And I love the fact that Harry standing up to him doesn't result in violence anymore, it results in Draco actually listing to him. WHEE! AM SO HAPPY!

    Glee. Just had to express how incredibly happy you make me with this story. YAY!
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  • From ANON - Kalisin on April 26, 2005
    Hey, i really like your story! i keep wondering, is harry's resistance to Draco something particular to harry or is it something that most subs develop as they become more acustomed to the dominant?
    please update soon!
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  • From FairyPoet on April 26, 2005
    Absolutely fukin brilliant as always! *sigh* YOu are awesome.


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  • From ANON - ura on April 26, 2005
    One more thing. Thansk a lot for updating every day. You rock! I am checking for your updates like 15 times a day, butr now I figure out the patern. You update at night. Thanks again!


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  • From ANON - ura on April 26, 2005
    Great chapter. I am so glad to see this nicer Draco. Will it only last through Lustrum? Will they ever fall for each other? Also, I just realised that Draco never even kissed Harry. I want them kiss!

    Credit line for Ron established by Dracow as a complete surprise! I also like that Draco pampers Harry, no matter how he call it.

    Again, I want Draco kiss Harry and soon. Pleeeease!
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  • From ANON - LPhoenix on April 26, 2005
    *hugs author* yay you are the best!!! *dances around you* keep up the good work!!!
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  • From ANON - Storm on April 26, 2005
    Uh-oh seems as if Harry did a little back-pedalling with his speaking-out. Hope he makes up for it enough that draco doesn't make him get pregnant in the first mating season. While I would love to see Harry get pregnant, I wish he and Draco would have a little more time to get to know each other and for Draco to calm down in his endeavor to humiliate and hurt harry. Can't wait to read the next chappie
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  • From ANON - Fefs on April 26, 2005
    Back to hating Draco.. Very good chapter though.. Please update soon? Yesterday i came here to see the chapter 16 times! I suffer!! Hugs!!
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  • From DanishGirl on April 26, 2005
    Kids?! I hadn't really thought about that... *thinking about it now* =)
    More soon? Like... now? *smiles*
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  • From ANON - chantalmalfoy on April 26, 2005
    I loved Dumbledore in that chapter! :D

    Poor Harry... although I have to say that I love envisioning a knocked up Harry Potter. Yumm. lol
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  • From ANON - Kaye on April 26, 2005
    Is Harry going to act and stay wimpy throughout the rest of the story? Because its getting little old. I really liked this story at the beginning and I believe that it has an interesting concept. However, I have to admit that at this point I am only continuing to read because I keep hoping Harry will stand up to Draco and grow a backbone or that their relationship will sort of even out. But Im starting to lose hope of that ever happening. I don't mind a dominant Draco but the extent of Harry's submissivemness is just not right. It's not that interesting anymore or romantic if the only reason Harry and Draco get together is due to some pheromones that neither could control. I really, really hope something changes in the next chapters so that the relationship between the two will be more of two equals.

    Also, i have a question, how come Harry was never affected before when Snape and Draco were around. From what I understand, the potion they used to drink only inhibits an Indago's instincts. It does not affect nor can it stop an Indago's pheromones. If that's the case since Harry never drank the potion before (can the potion inhibit Harry's instinct as well?) he should still have been affected by the Supero Indagos since they do still continue releasing their pheromones.
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 26, 2005
    Hmmmm... With dominance comes responsibility. Draco learning responsibility, how interesting.
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  • From ANON - Canis Lupus on April 26, 2005
    Oh my, you're incredible... Are you actually updating daily? How ever du you manage that?? Not that I'm complaining... *grin*
    Well, I just wanted to tell you that you are GREAT! Good story, little to no spelling errors and daily updating... *unable to believe it...*
    I actually haven't read the latest chapter yet, but the other twenty were great, so I thought I'd let you know that, *^^* I can really feel with Harry... I normally don't like him THAT submissive, so I hope he'll get a bit more control in the future and be more himself around Draco. I really like the way you characterize him when he's not around Draco, though. Not all that innocent "I don't have a clue about anything, am denser than a brick wall and haven't heard the word homosexuality in all my live"-kind of Harry-characterization so many FF-writers seem so fond of... Can't understand why, he's so much cooler sarcastic, disillusioned and fatalistic, *grin* And it fit's him better, with the kind of live he had...
    As for Draco... *muahahahaha* he's starting to get protective! *evil snicker* before he knows it, he'll adore everyone's favourite little Gryffindor-Slytherin-crossbreed... I'm really looking forward to the sweet stuff you've been promising! (Chapter 22, you said? Well that won't be a long time away... hurray for you! *^^*) I really love it if Draco is possessive and over-protective, *^^* Though I hope he'll cut out a bit on the domination-part... But, well it's your story, and I like it the way you write it!
    You actually made me feel so sorry for Harry and angry with Lucius (*growls at Lucius*) that I had to go and think up an alternative scene somewhere round Chapter 10 when Lucius showed up and kept everyone from helping Harry...
    Just one question. If this law forbids everyone to interfere with this Magical Creatures-nature-thing, doesn't Harry have a say in it, being a Magical Creature? If Draco gets his will legally, why isn't Harry allowed the same right? (So your story will work, I know, *^^* Was just a guess of mine...) Isn't Harry allowed to decide in his sane state of mind (i.e. far away from Draco) that he wants nothing to do with him? If no one is to interfere, could he do the "Come near me and I'll kill you"-act? He doesn't have to be close to Draco to perform Avada on him... And in my opin
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  • From ANON - SilverPhoenix on April 26, 2005
    evil Dracos, grrrs, poor Harrys head *kisses it better then runs for dear life from Draco*...thanks for updating so soon. it stinks that Dumbledor has to just watch Harry when Draco wants to punish him...oh wells it'll prob get a lil like Hermione said... Mateing season hehe, cant wait for that..welll i must go, please please update soon *hugs*
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