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By : lojenn
  • From ANON - Me on April 25, 2005
    I HAVE ONLY ONE THING TO SAY: YOU ARE FUCKIN AWESOME!!!!
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  • From ANON - carpedraconis on April 25, 2005
    YOUR A GOSH DAMN GENIUS
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  • From ANON - icestar on April 25, 2005
    good, i thought he was gonna go all soft...

    anyways, lovely lemon, waterplay is just cool...

    again, lovely story. ^_^ and you update so quick....

    :two thumbs up:
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  • From ANON - Yana on April 25, 2005
    cool chapter
    i love it
    i really hate Draco
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  • From ANON - Storm on April 25, 2005
    Happy Belated Birthday to your kids and hope you all had a great day. That was great. I was hoping that Draco would not get too violent with Harry. It had just the right amount of dominance and gentleness to it but Draco made sure to let us know who was in charge. Great job. And I loved that last line. It was perfect and I laughed out loud at it. Great work. Can't wait to read the next update. Still wondering if Snape is going to have a hand in anything though. And I love how you have Hermione saying that she will try to teach all the others the error of their stupid ways. I usually love Seamus and I hate it when he is such a prick. Although you know if you want to have Oliver Wood come back to give Harry a little support, accompanied by his great and wonderful girlfriend who he is completely enamored by and dotes on and adores called Storm I wouldn't be adverse to it either. Might help the story and all that you know. 'wink-wink' Kidding. But hey who am I to argue with artistic genius. Can't wait to read the next update, I check back often each day for the updates. keep up the wonderful work.
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  • From ANON - Fefs on April 25, 2005
    Pfffewww... For a moment i actually thought you would to that to us.. I came here looking for this chapter all day! Perfect chapter.. thank God Draco is stopping being an ass.. I love this fic,... Now i don't hate it anymore.. is really good.. please update tomorrow? Hugs!!
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  • From ANON - BlacklilNiteCat on April 25, 2005
    now that was good sexy chapter!!!!!! I can't wait to see what's gonna happen now bwt Harry and Draco. And did u notice Draco called Harry his name instead of Potter?? Ohhhh the plot thickens!!! UPDATEEEEEEEEE
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  • From ANON - Closet Skeleton on April 25, 2005
    First off... wow. *fans self*

    Second, I would like to adress "anon". I'm not trying to sound arrogant or anything like that, and I am horrified that I have come across as such. I was merely trying to say that I have read many HXD fics ((or DXG, or whatever, just whatever has Draco in it)) and not necessarily on this site, just anywhere, where Draco is so very very far from Canon Draco that he's just not the same character anymore. That is something I have discovered myself, and I was just trying to stress how impressed I was that LDurham has kept Draco very true to the books, is all. I'm sorry I sounded arrogant.

    Now, back to the review! Whoot! We see the whole thing with Harry's emotions becoming *very* important! I was interested to see that Draco *can't* really rape Harry anymore. His fear just makes him unable to, and I think that is most interesting. And I think I can see that making Harry sleep on the floor is just Draco's way of saying "I'm still in charge here", just in case Harry was thinking any differently. Not that Harry was, of course, but this *is* Draco Malfoy we're talking about. :D Though I can definently see Harry curling up ((possibly naked?)) on the floor, shivering for awhile, then Draco abruptly announcing that he's sick of his whimpering, and "Get up here." Not that that's what you're doing or anything, but I could see him doing that. :D

    I am so very impressed with this. Keep up the amazing work!
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  • From ANON - anon on April 24, 2005
    Very good, if disturbing, and a bit heavy on the violence... while it's necessary to move the story along, it's hard to read, which I assume is the point. It shouldn't be easy to read and if it is, I would worry about the reader. Non of it is gratutious (sp?), it all serves the plot and the story and isn't just stuck in there for cheap thrills. On a side note, though, I have to say I don't agree with Closet Skeleton's rather arrogant remark that the other authors on this board can't write H/D and that we just make Draco a written version of Felton. As JKR hasn't fully fleshed the character out, it is impossible to say how Draco would end up, or what he might be like removed from his parents influence.

    All said, a good story and I'll keep up with it.
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  • From ANON - disturbedbunny on April 24, 2005
    This is really good! I can't wait to read another chapter!
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  • From ANON - ura on April 24, 2005
    It also looks that Draco cannot force himself on harry anymore. Right? When Harry is afraid Draco goes soft. May be if Harry feels too bad about sleeping on the floor Draco will lose his own sleep and let Harry into the bed. Please?
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  • From ANON - ura on April 24, 2005
    Nice long chapter. I am so gald that Draco is treating Harry a bit better now.
    I hope that Harry's sleeping on the floor will stop soon as well. Also it looks like Harry never comes during sex. Why is that?


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  • From FairyPoet on April 24, 2005
    Awesome!! Im so glad to see that he is becoming nice. *sigh* Hes gots to take care of my Harry.
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  • From ANON - PrincessDracona on April 24, 2005
    Ok very pleased with the change in Draco but one thing I would like to know is shouldn't Harry be wondering if Draco will ever truly love him. Sure maybe he'll be more gentle but honestly I think they both deserve more, especially Harry. I guess I'm still just looking for Draco to go through ALOT of guilt for his actions and as much as I like a stronger Harry maybe he needs to be more emotional to get through to Draco. Sorry I'm just thinking out loud here I know its your plot, I just definatly could have seen Harry crying at the end of the last chapter after being told to sleep on the floor, you know hopes shattered and all. Well I'll be glued for the next one so please make it soon!
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  • From Krazy on April 24, 2005
    Awesome. I'm loving it! *giggles* Very very well written. I stand by that this is the best and most well written one there is. ^-^

    *~* Krazy *~*
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