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Reviews for Indago

By : lojenn
  • From ANON - chantalmalfoy on April 22, 2005
    Poor Harry. He always seems to take the hard way... and he never has very good luck... I just want to smack Snape.
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  • From ANON - chrissy on April 22, 2005
    this is soooo good. I want to know what happens next. update soon. please!!!
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  • From ANON - Priss368 on April 22, 2005
    Well, it sounds like Harry has earned himself a trip to the infirmary. In the meantime, I hope Draco gets a hold of himself. He seems to feel insecure in his relationship w/Harry. Doesn't he realize that treating Harry the way he did just makes HIM look bad & for everyone to feel sad for Harry? I hope that Draco realizes soon that what he's doing isn't working very well-neither one of them are happy with the way things are. A little softness & taking care of your mate's needs can go a long way!

    I also read the other reviews that are out there & I agree with Closet Skeleton about more to Draco's story. Dom had many relevant points as well. Particularly about Draco should want Harry to come since it would enhance his scent. Maybe Draco doesn't know this yet (he is only a kid & doesn't know everything).

    I really appreciate that you've got so much of this fic done & that you're posting so frequently! Please keep it up! Priss
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  • From ANON - slash_fiend on April 22, 2005
    This story is truly amazing. Its really hard to find stories that include both Harry and Draco being creatures, Draco being dominant, AND having Harry have feelings of submission. You have hit all of my plot favorites!! (Not to mention a few kinks. XD)

    Brilliant story! Keep up the good work!! ^___^


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  • From ANON - look at my ding-a-ling-ling on April 22, 2005
    OMG!! No offense...but what is wrong with you!!??? I mean I have no problem with Dom Draco, but this is just ridiculous! I love the plot tho...but I was cringing when I read the part where Draco was forcing Harry to give him a...favor...in front of the school...I hope the vein of this story changes soon...I like it a lot...but i feel sooooo bad for Harry...please please please change it soon!...i cannot stand to see Harry abused like this...
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  • From ANON - Ryu on April 22, 2005
    WELL FINALLY! Hope its not going to take another 10 chapters before heres any more action...is Draco going to be a bit nicer next time? Or are u first going to let Sevy have a go at Harry?
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  • From ANON - Dominic Shade on April 22, 2005
    This fict. is really original and very well written. I'm glad to see you have some sense about animal behaviors. But I'm wanting to see Harry pregnant and in full 'wolf mother' mode. Like not letting anything with a penis get within fifteen feet of him. And while Harry's pupped, I think Draco should be more...afraid of him and what his mood swings might do, but still unable to stop being around him. Kind of like a bitch going into heat. Which I hope is what Lustrum is. With Harry going into heat and snapping at anyone who gets near him until the heat comes full on and he finally lets Snape and Draco near him.

    I do love the dominant thing, don't get me wrong. But all species of animals don't have the male dominant all the time. I also really like how you're portraying Snape as this noble guy, tryin' to go against his insticts. But the heat/Lustrum thing should put him over the edge right?

    Is Harry going to get some pleasure from this mating thing? It seems that Draco would want Harry to come, like that would make his smell even more alluring.


    Good times and rock on,

    -Dom
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  • From FairyPoet on April 22, 2005
    wow i so love this story!! This is getting really good!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Anita on April 22, 2005
    Hehe...I am also still here. I was glad for the warning you gave in chapter 12, it just prepared me for what was to come...my, that does sound dramatic, doesn't it! *bg*

    Anyway, thank you for 2 chapters in one update! Although I do think Harry is not very smart by running away like that (ch 15) and angering Draco even more...curious how that is going to turn out!

    Keep writing.
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  • From ANON - Sparkleh on April 22, 2005
    *SIGH* Harry you effin moron... Idiots, the lot of them! Saw it coming from a mile away-- but Draco's such a fun little bastard, isn't he!? XD I guess Harry gets sympathy points for landing himself in the infirmary though? So that maybe he won't be beaten to a pulp...? Nyaah. You make me wanna write! XD Perhaps I'll update this weekend.

    Need a beta!?! *is available...* Kudos for LdDurham~! Update soon? For me?

    -:- Sparkly Spark -:-
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  • From ANON - lacquer on April 22, 2005
    This gets really exciting!!!!!!
    *groan* a cliffie.....

    Your story really makes me wait with anticipation at the next chapter/scene. Can I ask for more?????? It could have been a little bit longer though two chapters makes it reasonable I guess. I really am just used to reading long chapters.....

    Continue the good work!!!
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  • From ANON - greer on April 22, 2005
    Wall meet Harry. Harry, wall. This guy just can't get a break...lol.
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  • From ANON - Yana on April 22, 2005
    NOOOO!! please will someone help harry, he doesn't deserve it
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  • From DanishGirl on April 22, 2005
    Oh no, Draco will get him. *damn that wall for being there*.
    Please, don't let Draco be too harsh on the poor little golden boy =(
    More soon?
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  • From ANON - RiddleStar on April 22, 2005
    yay! two chapters!^o^
    im really glad that Harry finally kind of stood up for himself. i think the smartest thing to do was to run. why didnt he do that earlier?
    wow, draco's possesive, but he doesnt mind sharing him with other indagos? im confused. neway, keep writing, next time i was three chapters.
    btw, i love dom draco and sub harry!
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