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Reviews for Indago

By : lojenn
  • From ANON - LPhoenix on April 15, 2005
    thank you for posting so quickly!!! keep them comin!!!
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  • From ANON - icestar on April 15, 2005
    you update fast. ^_^ cool. ^_^

    heh, nice chapters. wonder how snapes doing...

    anyways, post when ya can. ^_^
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  • From ANON - WretchedScar on April 15, 2005
    Still a great story! When are we going to see some more Draco/Harry interactions though?
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  • From ANON - Storm on April 14, 2005
    OHHHH The plot thickens. I can't wait to see how you Bring Snape into the picture and how Draco comes back. I really want to know what they are doing with him and how they can keep him away for so long. Please update soon. Love this story
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  • From ANON - Rachel on April 14, 2005
    Really good, I'm getting a kick out of sub!Harry. Very intense.

    When will they meet again? and how come Snape didn't react? Is this why he put the Grifs in the back of the room and Harry on the back of them all? Hey, it makes sense!

    Please up date.
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  • From ANON - Closet Skeleton on April 14, 2005
    You cannot understand the glee I feel when I see this story updated. I swear my heart just jumps into my throat, and I start practically bouncing where I sit. It's so AMAZING!

    I am absolutely floored by your writing and the plot you are crafting, it's just kind of weaving around us, seriously trapping us readers within your amazing web. I cannot WAIT to see what happens next, though I'm almost anxious about the whole Malfoy thing. I can just see it.... he's denied access to Harry so long, he'll probably go totally psycho next time he sees him. I could only imagine!

    As for how in-character your characters are.... wow. No kidding here. I absolutely love your Ron and Hermione ((And that Dumbledore? BRILLIANT!)) and I adore your Harry. I am so used to reading fandom Harry that I actually found myself reviewing the first book today ((The fact that I have an exam in Children's Literature tommorrow has nothing to do with it, I swear......)) and then read this, and I was impressed with how well you captured *real* Harry, and not fandom Harry. I really appreciate that. I realize, of course, that Draco is acting a bit odd, what with the whole Indago thing, but I love the fact that despite the fact that he's basically gone on a testosterone trip and wants rather badly to claim Harry as his ((Which is so adorable, how confused Harry is!)) he's still *Draco Malfoy*, not some blonde waif that merely looks like my beloved pointy faced prat. Too many fanfic authors turn him into their perfect boyfriend, just with the face of Tom Felton, and Tom Felton is NOT Draco. So that's one of my pet peeves, and you have avoided that so well, instead sticking to CANON DRACO! YAY!

    I realize that this is a really long review, but I AM a University English major. I plan to be an English teacher, and a novelist. I only review stories I really like, and I only give really, really good responses to stories I deem worthy. So.... I deem this one exceedingly worthy! You have captured the characters, you have written an amazing yarn, and I nearly leap of my chair with excitement every time I see it's updated. Keep up the absolutely incredible work!
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  • From Sarryn on April 14, 2005
    How you keep me craving more! I am most eager to wrap myself in your shadows.
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on April 14, 2005
    Oh I can't wait until chapter 6. What are Draco and Snape? What happens next?
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  • From ANON - riddlestar on April 14, 2005
    dont stop! update soon!
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  • From ANON - Lola Slade on April 14, 2005
    I really must say...your story is intriguing...I'm hooked, and you barely have 4 chapters+a prologue in...I'm quite looking forward to Snape's reaction to Harry's...condition...and I am really anxious to see how Draco acts when he next sees Harry. Also...I got to wondering...Draco seems to want Harry for HIS, and *only* his...what about SNAPE? When/IF Snape decides that he too wants Harry, how will greedy little Draco react? Will there be competition? I'm getting that sense, as I don't see EITHER men as ones who are too open to the idea of 'sharing' what they percieve as *theirs*...mmm...please update soon...I want to know what happens next...
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  • From ANON - ura on April 14, 2005
    more more more
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  • From Sarryn on April 13, 2005
    I am most impressed with the celerity of your updates as well as the creativity dwelling quite soundly within your walls of words.
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  • From ANON - Closet Skeleton on April 13, 2005
    Oooh... Snape is just avoiding *Harry*, isn't he?! *glee*

    I'm seriously loving this story.... update quick! I am on tenterhooks! I am seriously blowing off exam studying right now to read this, and I am absolutely loving it! Draco/Harry is amazing - *especially* when Draco is dominant! It makes me delightfully happy. *glee*

    Definently looking forward to the promised longer chapters, though they don't have to be incredibly long so long as they keep coming as fast as they are! ((Or faster, but I'm a greedy little git, aren't I?)) :D

    Loving your work!
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  • From ANON - acr on April 13, 2005
    I was really hoping to see the conversation between Snape and Draco after the incident in the hall.
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  • From ANON - acr on April 13, 2005
    You have a great writing style. Your stories are interesting, the dialogue is good, and you avoid rambling.

    But really, your chapters are TOO SHORT! You are SUCH an EVIL TEASE! :)

    I'm really interested in learning more about this species. I hope Harry doesn't remain such a wimp around Malfoy (and presumably snape) forever.

    Is Voldemort dead?
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