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By : lojenn
  • From ANON - Mashell on May 30, 2005
    AAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    This sucks! I have to go out of town tomorrow and won't be able to get on the internet till late Friday if I'm lucky! Not only did you just post one of the most evil cliff hangers but I have to wait for the next chapter all week. I don't know if I'll survive I tell you! I might just go mad before the end of the week! I'll check for the next chapter very early tomorrow in hopes you posted but then I have to leave. I hope you update soon but I have to go pack now. As for the rest of your fic I love it and hope you are having as much fun writing it as I am reading it. Toodles -Mashell
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  • From ANON - Kristine on May 30, 2005
    What an evil cliffie! Bravo!!!!

    I just found your story this weekend (I'm relatively new to the Potter slash arena), and I must compliment you. What a great story. I love all the plot twists and turns, and I totally believe your portrayals of the characters, as well as your dialogue.

    Couple questions ...

    1) What are your plans for Lydia and Logan? Are they simply in the story as a plot device or will more be revealed? I ask because right now they feel out of place, like they don't really belong in the story.

    2) Bravo on your foreshadowing of the werewolf confrontation. I saw you working up to it, and was pleased it didn't become a forgotten "plot bunny."

    3) This may have been pointed out to you already, but watch your their/there/they're usage.
    Their=the possessive form of they. Their home. Their child.
    There=adverb indicating the position of an object. The forest is over there.
    They're=conjunction of they+are. They're talking about werewolves again.
    One big sentence altogether=They're looking at their house over there.

    CANNOT wait for the next chapter!!!

    :)
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  • From ANON - sethian on May 30, 2005
    ...And how the hell Am i suppose to go to bed after reading this chapter. Very good, I'm wondering if Harry is gonna survive. If he dies I believe it would be a sad but nice ending....anyway, I'm wondering what you have in mind about the faith of our harry...lol I leave it into your hands for it's your story ^.^
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  • From ANON - jenny on May 30, 2005
    OMG..... If anything you sure know how to leave someone in suspense at the last sentences of a chapter. I actually shed a few tears. I guess im scared that you really might let harry die. Any way you go with this story it has truly been so wonderful to read. Everymorning before I go to work I check for an update. Im looking forward to the next update. In the mean time I'll be crossing my fingers that harry and that baby are okay.


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  • From ANON - Harle on May 30, 2005
    You know I hate you right now. I'm...I'm crying. That is so damn sad!

    I like how Harry sees the interaction between Draco and his dad and understands he is just trying to protect Draco. I can understand a bit of Harry's position because I know what it is like to be the one in the hospital bed that everyone is worried about dying. It is the worse experience in the world. Especially because people try to find clever ways to say good-bye without you knowing...but you know. How could you not?

    I cry for Harry and Draco. I hope that everything might turn out alright by some miracle, but if not I will understand. You have show just how stubbern both boys are and we knew that Harry would pick this way, but the emotion that you played through this chapter. Just brilliant.

    So I cry for Harry and Draco. I cry for love. And more than anything I cry for life.
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  • From ANON - anonymous on May 30, 2005
    that's no the end is it?... you can't just kill Harry off!.. ugh!!.. I've been following this story from the beginning.. and I actually like it.. so please don't be killing Harry off.. that would be horrible
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  • From ANON - digi-girl on May 30, 2005
    *twitches* i read 57 chapters and then i get a cliff hanger! *sobs* the in-humanity! *sniffels* but at least i know i'll keep reading. gods, i think this is the second longest story i've ever read, and its not even finished, well the other story isn't either though. 99 chapters and still going that one is. But, man, all thoughs plot twists and stuff. It kept me reading. I haven't done that in a while. It just shows that the story is really good, so just had to keep trecking. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - fire0ice on May 30, 2005
    i'm not going to whimper, bitch and morn, because i know you are not going to let our lil' darling die. you see you've left little clues all over and tell me that as a canie(sp?) based that share the same ancestor with the wearwolves i don't have to worry since all this would do is force a very painful amigus(sp??) transformation, ensuring both mom and pup/cub survival.

    P.S.
    it's harry motto: "Your abnormalities are my normality, and your normalities my abnormlity."
    Like??? I made it up.
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  • From ANON - Fefs on May 30, 2005
    ohhh, i knew i slouldn't read this chapter... I started reading and saw that you were going to end like this hideous chifflies...
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  • From ANON - Ls=isn on May 30, 2005
    WHAT YOU STOPPED THERE AT THAT CRUCIAL MOMENT!!! OH YOU ARE SOOOO EVIL YOU BITCH!!!! OMG!! WILL HE DIE WILL HE LIVE!! YOU CAN NOT STOP THERE!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Diana on May 30, 2005
    OK. i'M NOT GOING TO YELL BECASUE I HAVE FAITH IN YOU! lol j/p. i loved how you made snape poke fun at harry's eating...he made him eat without looking like he cared too much...good job! adn i thought it was adorable how when lucius threathened draco he was like "he wont touch you" i can imagine him reaching over and rubbing harry's arms to soother him....soo cute! whatever decision you make i will accept...it would be better if they lived....i hope were not nearing to the end of the story...i love this story...adn couldnt live without it...all my love

    Diana
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  • From ANON - muse of monotony on May 30, 2005
    pleeeaaaase tell me that's just some abortion potion Snape put in the biscuit working... *cries*
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  • From ANON - Japhia on May 30, 2005
    OH NO!! I HOPE HARRY WILL BE ALRIGHT!!! I know he will.... he has to be!!! *Whimpers*
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  • From ANON - alex on May 30, 2005
    This is a really good story! I love it sooo much please don't let harry die!!! And who IS the father of Harry's baby? Draco? Severus? Both? if thats possible??
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  • From ANON - Sophie on May 30, 2005
    UPDATE... UPDATE... UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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