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Reviews for Indago

By : lojenn
  • From ANON - mellebelle on May 28, 2005
    oh thank GOD!!! please let them be happy from now on...please?
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  • From ANON - Sparkleh on May 28, 2005
    *SIGH* This seems so bittersweet considering the circumstances...
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  • From ANON - Sydney on May 28, 2005
    Ah!! My heart aches! Two beautiful end of chapter scenes. First the angsty
    desperate Draco pleading with his father and Snape and then the angry
    desperate chemistry between Harry and Draco...I do love make-up sex :)
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  • From ANON - MOI on May 28, 2005
    Oh, I'm so happy! It's all better... for now... although it would have been even better if Draco had really acted sorry.
    But the cliffhanger's still there! Gosh to goodness, I'm going to go *insane*
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  • From ANON - dragonclaw21974 on May 28, 2005
    This just get's better and better. I can't wait to see what happens with the baby.
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  • From ANON - Rebecca R on May 28, 2005
    OMG HOW FANTASTICO!!
    I LOVE IT ABSOLUTLY ADOR IT!
    U ARE MY HERO AND SAVIOUR I WORSHIP YOU
    AND WILL GRAVEL AT YOUR FEAT FOR ANOTHER CHAPTER
    LOVE YA HUN TODDLES!!
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  • From ANON - Frikin Carefree on May 28, 2005
    Your going to kill harry...*Sniff*... again.
    Draco was so sweet...*sniff*...
    Snape wasn't greasy...*sniff*
    The baby is going to kill it's momma...*Sniff*
    I LOVE THIS STORY!!!
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  • From ANON - Rebecca R on May 28, 2005
    OMG HOW FANTASTICO!!
    I LOVE IT ABSOLUTLY ADOR IT!
    U ARE MY HERO AND SAVIOUR I WORSHIP YOU
    AND WILL GRAVEL AT YOUR FEAT FOR ANOTHER CHAPTER
    LOVE YA HUN TODDLES!!
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  • From ANON - Goddess Of The Void on May 28, 2005
    wahhhhhh! this has got to be the most riveting fanfic from this fandom that I've read in a looonnnggg while! I started reading a few hours ago, and didn't stop once the whole way through... Now that I have finished up to where you have posted... I realize I am in dire need of a drink of water, i haven't moved in so long... and one of my feet has gone numb, possibly from my dodgy seating skills... but nevertheless. utterly, utterly, completely, incredibly, definitely soooo impressed right now. the twists the turns, your characterization. *whistles* simply can't wait for more! i keep refreshing the page in hope of a new chapter... ^^; ehehehe. anyhow. i sincerely hope for a good'n'happy Harry Draco ending. T_T better deliver. lol. whatever LdDurham-sama sees fit will surely suffice. you've gained an avid fan! keep writing!
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  • From ANON - Alexa on May 28, 2005
    Fist of all, I'd like to apologize for the harsh way in which I expressed my opinion in my last review. Perhaps I should have waited for my emotions to cool down a bit before I expressed my opinion. I didn't catch that A/N you're referring too, but I understand that you were hurt by one of our reviews. I'm sorry if it was my review. Even if it wasn't, my apology for the harshness of my words still stands.

    In light of that, I don't know if I should say what I think about the last two chapters. I did take a break and thought about what I want to say and weather I mean it. And you are more than welcome to disragard my opinion, and to erase this review. I don't mean to hurt your feelings, that was never the aim of any of my reviews.

    That said, I truly think that the last chapters were a let down. You were on the way to writing a gradual prossess of change in Draco and Harry's return into the relationship. It was going great, and you wrote it beautifly. I was holding my breath. Then, in stead of keeping it up, you used the oldest trick in the book - putting the 'heroine' in danger, and thus exploding and exposing everyone's feelings. They just scream a bit, show that they are in love, make some promices and then have great, emotion-filled sex. Some fights will still happen, the outside problems will threaten a bit and possibly some grat loss will happen (at which point they can get closed, or, as most novels do, grow distant and hurt, but after some deep pain get back together, and work to rebuild their relationship), and then everything will be resolved. It's what 99.9 % of romance novels do. It's cute, but it is beneath your writing skills. You could have chosen the road less traveled and you cold have made it so good and strong!

    Sorry if my words sting, but I still stand by them. You have the skill and talent to do much better, and be more original. The originality of your writing is what drew so many to your story. I'll wait for your next story, and hope that you'll make braver choices.

    Still a fan,
    Alexa.
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  • From ANON - icestar on May 28, 2005
    ive been slack ne?

    ah well, better late than never.

    firstly, i adore the way you update nearly everyday! its really encouraging.

    second, the interactions between sev, draco, and harry are very nice. as with hermoine and harry...

    good job. ^_^
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  • From DanishGirl on May 28, 2005
    awwww, they made up. how cute. more soon? plz?
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  • From ANON - Yana on May 28, 2005
    Draco is soo sweet
    look after him
    i hope the baby servises
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  • From ANON - Mastin on May 28, 2005
    I hope the last two chapters haven't been fluffy because people have pressured you into it.
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  • From ANON - cve on May 28, 2005
    Awww, what a sweet make up scene. I'm glad they were able to talk things out sort of and have a tender moment. Although it probably won't last. This story is probably one of the best on the whole of AFF.net and I'm not kidding. You deserve every single review and hit this story is getting. Be proud, you rock, woman.



    cve
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