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By : lojenn
  • From ANON - Aunt Bijou on May 28, 2005
    Have I told you how much I LOOOOOVE you?? You are phenomenal, and I am just enjoyin' the daylights out of this li'l ol' story! You are taking us on twists and turns that are more fun than a roller coaster! Wheeeee!! Please, keep going, and have I told you how much I appreciate your frequent updates?? Love you, love you, LOVE YOU!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 27, 2005
    go gk chesterton!

    don't listen to them re the forest scene. it's your damn story, and however unbelievable some people thought it was, it was well written. i thought it was entirely plausible, btw. it's called artistic license, you dolts!
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  • From ANON - DarkQueen on May 27, 2005
    I read your note that you wrote on one of the chapters. This is your story and it should go where you want it to go. Not how the reader wants it. I however am not displeased nor do I think I could be by your writing. I've enjoyed your story since the beginning and will stick with it till the end. I liked your version on werewolf bites and just the whole indigo story line. Throughout reading this fic I was hoping that Draco would come to love harry. I'm very happy that is seems to be coming true! Please update soon, I can't wait to read if harry's baby turns out alright.
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  • From ANON - WitchbladeHell on May 27, 2005
    Hey, Durham. Don't worry too much about that last chapter! I thought it was awesome! I really liked the way you executed the struggle between Harry and the weries. Even if some people think you may have put Harry a bit out of character for it, which I don't really think you did, they have to realise that sometimes it needs to be done in order to make a fan fic complete. Anyway, well done on that chapter! I just read chapter 43, man, I almost cried!
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  • From ANON - Name Forger on May 27, 2005
    You, Love, are amazing.

    I honestly was a bit.. deterred mindfully(bet that made no sense, but I haven't any words to describe how I felt) at how the chapter before your current chapter was executed. Yet now, it has seemed to grow on me, and I accept it. It was odd, in a way, but with the current chapter, things are cleared up.

    I read that one reviewer's review on how you should pull back and redo the other chapter, and I felt bad for thinking that you should redo it when I read that. You don't need to redo anything. I see how Harry reacted and how he defended himself with words, rather then brawling with his fists, which would be quite uncharistic. Honestly, I get it now.

    So, I truely hope you keep up your wonderful writing parade(;dies;) and you keep that chapter, and do not have seconds thoughts about that one chapter or your A/N that you made;it was an appropriate A/N. ;3


    Peace love & Plove,
    Ms. N.F.K.
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  • From ANON - Menecarkawan on May 27, 2005
    First off I would like to say that I am truly sorry if my last review offended you in any way. I liked your last chapter. I thought it was written
    up very well. I just didn't like whole werewolf thing, that's all. But it is your story, so you should write it however you like. No need to pull
    anything. Now, this chapter... I'm very glad Harry's not going to turn, but I do hope that his baby survives. I know you'd have some
    purpose if it does not, and it would definitely add to the angst factor, which I love. Angst is what makes a fic worth reading in my opinion.
    And may I just say... DRACO HAS A HEART! YAY! DRACO HAS A HEART! *does a happy dance* Even if the baby dies, maybe now Harry
    and Draco can get together and make an attempt at happiness. That would be so lovely, but it would be even better if the baby didn't
    die. It would be so tragic if the baby died.
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  • From ANON - Softwillow1687 on May 27, 2005
    Great chapter, I hope Harry will live.

    I think you are a great author and don't listen to other people they are just jealous. I loved the last chapter and continue making great chapters.
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  • From ANON - Baka Basu on May 27, 2005
    AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! kawaii so kawaii
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  • From ANON - Sesshysfavhuman on May 27, 2005
    Hello, I just got up and now i have a numb ass from reading your wonderful story. I usually dont read Harry/draco but this one caught my attention and I must say that i will be reading mor e harry/draco stories because of this. It took me 2 hours to read it all the way through and i think you are doing such a great job. Please dont change what you wrote just to please the reviewers your ideal is original and I think that you did an excellant job the chapter befor this one. This is your story and you can write it the way you want to thats why its called fiction. So please dont let the reviews depress you at all. Till next time L.J
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  • From ANON - Diana on May 27, 2005
    aww i wanna cry! good chapter though.....im just hoping for the best in the next one! and dont let us bother you...its your story!

    Diana
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  • From ANON - sak on May 27, 2005
    Please do not doubt your writing skills. The previous chapter was hard to read, but you are not easy on your characters. It all leads up to something more, pivotal decisions that have far-reaching effects. It made this chapter all that more powerful. This is an engaging story and all the reviewers and readers demonstrate that.
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  • From ANON - Bladefire on May 27, 2005
    OH GOD!!! I absolutely love this story. And now i finally have time to review. ^_^;; I'm really impressed with the way you've done the characters and the whole Indago thing. Very well thought out. Keep writing please! this is one of the few story's i keep checking for updates.
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  • From ANON - MOI on May 27, 2005
    And in case you haven't figured it out yet, most of us did love chapter 53. Fifty-two (that confused me a couple of times early
    on- I was so excited that there was another chapter, to only be crushed by there not being another one. Anyways). And to those
    stupid nonbelievers- somewhere in the books (I can't remember where) there is the intimation of werewolves howling in the
    forest, when it *isn't* the full moon. So they're still werewolves, whether they look like humans or not. We don't call Lupin in
    his human form a werehuman, now do we? That would be silly. And whether on not Draco has silver streaks on his cheeks,
    Harry still wants to ___ for him. It made perfect sense.
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  • From ANON - emery on May 27, 2005
    I first found your story at Skyehawke, but decided to check you out here (because everyone whores on aff). I love the story, i have it bookmarked and check it daily.

    As per your AN, however, I know exactly how you feel. Reviewers are kind of like soccer moms. Some can get so testy if the game isn't going in favour of their character. I've received some pretty harsh comments like "i think i'll keep my comments for your next chapter, i'm afraid of what i'll say about this one". It hurts, I curled up into a ball and was dead to the world for like two days and totally ignored fan-fiction. But then I realized it's probably just better to write for yourself first, and if the fancy strikes you, read reviews for their amusing content. (Admit it, us fan girls embarass ourselves constantly with our gushy theatrics over a plot twist). A reviewer should never loose you from your moorings, after all, it's not their story to tell.

    I eagerly anticipate following your story, it is extremely unique and written with intelligence ^_^d
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  • From ANON - Missi on May 27, 2005
    *jumping around and crying and cheering at the top of my lungs like an idiot* YEA! DRACO LOVES HARRY!! I knew it! And Snape wasn't nearly as much of an ass as usual!! And it's your story-your universe, your reality (so to speak) and you should write the way YOU want. Screw everyone else. What the hell do we know-it's not our story. Anyone who's going to tell you to rewrite your story because of some stupid bite needs to get a clue. People rewrite myths and legends all of the time. If they don't like it they shouldn't read it. I like it.
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