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By : lojenn

From ANON - look at my ding-a-ling-ling on May 27, 2005
AWWW!!! Draco loves Harry and Hermione finally sees it!!
She is no longer a bitch in my book! That was an emotional
chapter...I was almost to tears in the end.
My finals are over and I have time to relax.
This was the perfect end to my day. Thank you so much for writing this
story and continuing with it.
Despite all that some people have said, I found chapter52 to be one of the best
chapters in the story. Dont listen to those who hurtfully criticize.
By reading that chapter, one can see just how much time and effort
you spend behind your story. We are alll inspired by the way you
write. I dont think I have ever encountered a story like yours...
its so imaginative and lively--keeping us on the edge of our seats
waiting for the next installation. I can tell that you work really hard
on each and every chapter; and the love you feel for the characters
and the plot in general shine through in your writing. Please keep up the
excellent work. You are a brilliant writer and it shows by the hits and
the reviews. Simply amazing. I have never seen anyone garner so much
attention and acknowiedgment from the readers in a month and a half.
Thank you for giving us all something to look forward to. We love your work
and are inspired by it.
Cant wait for the next chapter!!!
Luvs!
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From ANON - anonymous on May 27, 2005
Can't wait to read more!
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From ANON - SilverPhoenix on May 27, 2005
awww...poor Draco...and Harry...and *crys*....that was one of the best chapters ever...and as to your AN, i cant believe people could tell you to re write it cuz 1 its not their story, 2 its your say as to what happens and 3 they have no damn say in what happens enless you ask for it...i think that it was fine, and i loved it, if someone doesnt like what you do in YOUR fic then thats there problem, thats why i never flame storys, cuz its there story and they can put what they want in it...as for this chapter, it wanted to make me cry, and i really cant wait for the next chapter to see if Harry lives or not(PLEASE dont kill him off and the story ends, please??) well *hugs* update soon :)
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From ANON - MOI on May 27, 2005
So, this was me reading this chapter:

A/N: I hope she didn't think I was being mean. I was just so scared for Harry, because being a werewolf
and an Indago would be very bad.
Harry finds out he's not going to be a werewolf: Yes! We are saved! Now things can go happily-ever-after!
I don't have to cry over Harry tonight!
The baby might be a werewolf, and it could kill Harry: What happened to my happily-ever-after? Now I'm
heartbroken. You'd better make that baby an Indago, you hear me, m'ld? Or I shall never forgive you.
The Draco/Severus/Lucius scene: *tears* Oh, so sad, so sweet, my happily ever after is on its way. And
take that, Hermione! Okay, I forgive you, Granger, you don't have to die anymore.
After it's all over: Omigod! Another cliffie! Do you purposefully end each chapter with a cliffhanger, so that
we'll all review in agony? I knew it! Y'know, I'm going to be dead of heartattacks soon from all this.
I loved it!
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From ANON - Evee on May 27, 2005
You're amazing! I believed the warewolf bit. It makes sense to me.

Plus! Your thoughts on the matter do count, no matter if you complain a bit! It's understandable. I thought the chapter was awesome!
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From ANON - FairyChild on May 27, 2005
Okay you just had to make me cry?

As for what people said about the last part.

I know a few were-wolf stories, yes, biteing Harry the way they did could of changed Harry that way. For if any of their fluids get into his blood stream or into him he could change. Thus the reason why Remus might never have sex. (Then agian that would be very bad for us who loved to see him gettin' some.) I shall give you my full reveiw when the story is finsihed.
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From ANON - Dominic Shade on May 27, 2005
I've read the review that must have set you off, and I'd like to point out why that person is an idiot. First off, yes, werewolves can infect with their bite when in human form. We learn this from when Remus Lupin said that he was bitten by his nephew. And though Harry is Indago, his baby might not be, this is where the bite would really come into effect. So it the concern isn't for Harry immediately, it's for the pup he carries. All the nutrients in Harry's blood would go to the pup, but so would the virus of the bite. I can see the reviewers point on one aspect, Harry is still Harry, perhaps he should have been able to think more rationally. But the thing is, to my knowledge, Harry has not been pupped in any of the books, therefore any assumtions derived would have to be re-thought. It's only logical to believe that Harry's new insticts would center around him protecting his pup. So any rational thought probably would have left him. And how could Harry be the only wizard in the clearing? Just because the attackers are werewolves doesn't mean they're not wizards. That was a stupid comment on their part. This person also seemed to overlook the fact that Draco is *not* the dominant Superio, Snape is. That would mean that he is less powerful, this would be the reason for why he didn't overpower the werewolves so easily. Also, Draco would fear hurting Harry, as well as the fact that Draco has spent most his entire life on the potion that quelled his instincts and natural power, he's probably still getting used to using them. In essence...I believe that there is absolutely no reason to reconsider the direction in which you are writing this fantastic fiction. It is incredibly original and very brilliantly written. I'm very astonished and proud of the intense work and heart you've put into this story. You are a great writer and I can't tell you how much of the passion you put into your story effects me. It's obvious that you care about your readers and I hope that you disreguard that naive reviewer and continue on spinning your tale.

Good times and rock on,

Dom
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From ANON - cottoncandy on May 27, 2005
YAY *jumps up and shouts!* Draco LOVES Harry! You've made me happy! I can't wait to see what happens next!
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From ANON - Saniya on May 27, 2005
*sniffelz* awwwwwwww

I liked the last chapter. Left good suspence and it was not unrealistic. The werewolf bite thing i thought was a common myth but maybe not. *excited hop*** I can't wait for the next chapter! x.x I know it wasn't the one typical of the series but so? What bugs me about some is that this is an obvious AU Sure it has some of the original plot but not all so it shouldn't be a perfect match to the book anyway. Its your interpretation of it and its stupid of someone to say like, oh well i didn't like it so write it over....
I think you've done fantastic so far *thumbs up* keep it up! ^^
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From ANON - foxfire on May 27, 2005
"ahhhhhhh!" *tackles* "im sorry! im sorry!! did i hert your fellings too? im sorry!!! i just wanted him to stay an indigo, and i actually thought the whole wolf pack and new breeding thing was cool!! but if i hert your feelings in any way, im sorry!!! an i love your storie!!! i swear!!!!!! i do!!! when i was reading the chapter the only thing that confused me was that, when he went to the boy and he cheacked him over for injuries, he had to tuch him right/, so wouldnt he feel the instinckt to flee? , but then i thought they probably need a minimall of contact like hugging, so ya i was like "oh ok!!" so im so so sorry if i every happened to offeneds you!!!!!!!" *runs of sobbing,....*
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From ANON - Anon on May 27, 2005
*undignified squeal* ^^ yay, i love this story so much, and it's so nice of you to update so much, so i dont' have to die waiting. keep up the good work! ^^
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From ANON - chaos on May 27, 2005
First, I loved the chapter where Harry was attacked. It was written in a way that it was believable ~ yes, it wasn't exactly like cannon but what fan fic is? Second, I love this chapter as well and I am eagerly awaiting the next installment. Your fic is the first I check when I log on and the last I double check before I close down for the night. I like the agnst in this chapter where Draco starts taking responsibilty instead of just being spoiled with a new toy. I also like the fact that the brainiac, Mione has realized that Draco does love Harry ~ now I hope that Harry can discover that same fact!
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From ANON - Nicole on May 27, 2005
I already had a bad day and this made me so sad. i know dracos been an ass but i still gotta love him. i don't like him like that. please more please. if u want ill even beg like a sub hehehe
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From ANON - IrIdEsCeNt on May 27, 2005
OMG.......omg........I dont know what to say, that chappy almost made me cry!!! I dont want harry do die!!!!!!!.......hey, I rhymed.
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From ANON - osem on May 27, 2005
I love the way you did Draco's desperation. Seriously, I'm all teary-eyed now. Also really apprecative of how often this story is updated.
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