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By : lojenn
  • From ANON - Laurwen on May 27, 2005
    OKAY! I'm sorry I feel soooooooo bad, I didn't mean to make you doubt you skills as a writer, infact if
    anything you should be proud you have me soo wrapped up in this story I dreaded what would happen to your characters!!!
    I love this story and I'm very glad that Harry isn't a werewolf, and I love thisplot twist so much better. Once again
    you have come up with something better than I could have thought as a possibility! I hope Harry survives!
    This is an excellent story and you are an amazing writer don't doubt that!! I can't wait to see what is going
    to happen and I'm said that I have to wait until tomorrow!
    Also I just wanted to mention that this chapter was so with that cannon, I love the exchange in the end with Draco and party,
    and if I was complaining about the cannon in the last chapter is was more because I really didn't want another horrible
    thing to happen to Harry!
    I can't wait to see what is going to happen and I don't know if you read all these reviews but if you do then I'm sorry if
    my last one made you feel like less of a writer because you are such a talented one!
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  • From ANON - Dezra on May 27, 2005
    Thank you Thank you Thank you Thank you Thank you Thank you Thank you Thank you Thank you.

    I loved that chapter. It feels like a turning point...but then I thought I felt other other turning points as well only to have the story turn again. So we'll have to wait and see. Great job.


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  • From ANON - Lisn on May 27, 2005
    Well... ummmmm.. that was really really DEEP!!! OMG!! THAT WAS SO GOOD!!! GIVE ME MORE!! NOW!!! DAMMIT!!!
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  • From ANON - k on May 27, 2005
    I have to say I find the criticism for the last chapter very petty, I mean there are lots of stories where the author interprets things in their own way. Although I am not very knowledgeable about this 'correct' way of infecting someone with lycanthropy, I find your version very plausible and it just...fits. The way they fell on him, perfection, and the fact that almost until the bit, you don't know whether they are 'evil' or just normal people looking for their own way of life. So thumbs up for managing to get an engaging duality for all the actors. This chapter was so exciting!! Not having a clue waht wasa going to happen, and then read about the baby brought tears to my eyes!! (This is very long, sorry!!)
    All in all, I think it is because you have such an arresting story that people demand (their perseaved) perfection, not because your writing has gotten worse! Take heart and keep up the good work!
    lol
    k
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  • From ANON - Kalisin on May 27, 2005
    i adore you and your wonderous story. please update immediately.
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  • From ANON - JJ on May 27, 2005
    The author has the responsibility to put his dream, his vision, on paper. Sometimes, others don't agree. You make a choice, based on your idea, of which is more important--and you did. I thought the last chapter developed a wonderful twist, even if it did make Harry look like an ineffectual fool. Your A/N explained that I was so caught up in the events, I missed many of the underlying reasons for said events. I'm just happy that this chapter see's Harry NOT a warewolf, and your plot has taken another dramatic turn. I was surprised the Draco begged Snape's forgiveness, but not that he loved Harry. What makes it so hard, is that your Indago have their own restrictions and it seems that Snape is Snape, Draco is in an extreme position, and Harry takes his subserviance to the 'nth degree. Mostly, it seems to me you just like to torture Harry. And your readers. *smile*
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  • From Neqs on May 27, 2005
    Another great chapter! Please don't listen to those negative fb people. All writers are entitled to artistic licence and I didn't find the werewolf scene too unlikely at all. I really adore this fic and admire the way you develop your characters. And thank you so much for showing that Draco really loves Harry (even if he goes about it a bit strangely)! Please remember that for every petty person who finds something to complain about there are a thousand or more readers who simply love your story. Keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - Phorcys on May 27, 2005
    I loved last chapter, don't listen to the anyone your logic was sound. It is your universe you could make the sky purple if you wanted. And the peole yellow. Nice save with the outcome of the bites. PLot twists are good. Please keep it up.
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    Phorcys
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  • From ANON - cottoncandy on May 27, 2005
    WEREWOLVES SUCK! *skakes fist at computer screen* YOU WEREWOLF BASTARDS!

    UPDATE SOON!
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  • From ANON - anon on May 27, 2005
    omg omg omg....poor harry....omg....is he going to be a werewolf now!!!!!!!!!???????????//
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  • From ANON - pucca on May 27, 2005
    So is Draco indeed falling love with Harry? I'd love to see it coming! How about Severus? I know he cares for Harry.... What will happen between Harry and him? Love your story! Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Masulbin on May 27, 2005
    This is such a great chapter; ignore the one pissy reviewer. You've written it so well thus far I believe aynthing from here will kick further ass. Looking forward to what's next.
    Besides, after 50 or so chapters, you've certainly earned your creative flexibility iwth the plot. If it involves turning Harry into a werewolf, bring on the fur and the fangs, I say!
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  • From ANON - Rebecca R on May 27, 2005
    OH MY GOODNESS! how can this happen poor harry,
    now draco and snape wont want him anymore!
    Grrs...
    ok if harry becomes a wearwolf then some good better happen
    because I really need something good to happen!
    any ways you true and faithful admirior
    rebecca
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  • From ANON - Laurwen on May 27, 2005
    I just want to say that I LOVE this story and have been loving it since the first chapter, I will admit that I haven't reviewed yet.
    That is just because all of the other reviewers were saying what I wanted to say.
    However this latest chapter has prompted me into action . . .
    One of the things I love so much about the story was the way you manage to stay with the cannon, I will finish reading this story no
    matter what, but I feel like you might lose some readers if Harry becomes a werewolf. It just seems so arug . . .
    I love your story though and I want to see how it ends and I'm glad you didn't kill the baby
    You're an amazing writer and author and you have the power over the story but . . .
    PLEASE DON'T TURN HARRY INTO A WEREWOLF!

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  • From ANON - Aline Potter on May 27, 2005
    Oh-My-God!Your fanfiction is simply... wonderful!I loved it!Keep writing, I'm very curious about what's gonna happen next.
    Hugs!
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