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Reviews for Indago

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  • From ANON - tessa3 on May 27, 2005
    DAMN HARRY!!! DAMN WOLVES!!! *shakes fist* ergh!!! *flops into chair waiting for next chapter*
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  • From ANON - twisteds_mini on May 27, 2005
    *cries* oh my god! poor harry! and indago and a werewolf?! poor thing!! but at least draco and snape saved him before those bastards cut into him! please update soon- i can't wait for the next chappie- it's better and cheaper than drugs but still so addicting!


    ~Twisted's
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  • From ANON - nualaanne on May 27, 2005
    I've been reading this story from the beginning. While it has always been quite a bit AU, I don't mind that as long as the story is believable, logical and interesting as it has been up to now. But your latest plot twist is just too much. First of all, werewolf bites can infect only when done in wolf form and only to humans. Second, Harry is half human and half Indago and partially related to werewolves; according to your story, logically he should be immune even if he was bitten during the full moon. Third, while Harry is an Indago sub, he is still Harry--the Boy who lived, the leader of Dumbledore's Army, the Boy who killed Voldemort in your story. He might be afraid of the werewolves, but he wouldn't back down from them. He's a good enough wizard that he could get his wand back with a simple Accio and if I've read your last chapter correctly he's the only wizard in that clearing; he should be more than able to defend himself. For that matter, when Draco and Snape show up, they too could easily use their magic to defeat these were wolves. I'd really llike to continue reading this story, it showed a lot of promise. I suggest you consider withdrawing the chapter and rewriteing it as you did an earlier one. It's still a good story, you just need to rethink the direction in which you are going
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  • From on May 27, 2005
    Splendid chapters!!! I loved all of them I hope Harry and the baby are okay...I know Draco must have been so worried! Damn those werewolves couldn't they just leave Harry alone, well I've been wondering why isn't Harry creating a new den? Well anyway update soon, this story is the best!!!!
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  • From ANON - Kida on May 27, 2005
    Omg, oh please dont let him turn into a werewolf! that would be too awful. But I am so glad that Draco came to his rescue. I hope they work everything out
    And that draco can finally leave that horrible snape. that just wasnt meant to be. But definitely keep up the good work. Its awesome
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  • From ANON - Dominic Shade on May 27, 2005
    ...one would think that the Indago species would be immune to the werewolf bite...I mean...their ancestors were rivals...wouldn't they have thought to do such a thing long ago? It would only make sense to believe that they can withstand each others most brutal attacks, otherwise one race would have surely died out to the other. I expect Harry won't be leaving his Superios...or even his room for a long while after this. That has to be a traumatic thing to go through. And it sucks that the law doesn't prevent this...I mean, if Indago are protected...shouldn't werewolves be? And now I'm really wondering on who Snape is bedding...though I started out liking Logan...*thinks...lightbulb forms over head*...Logan is another word for wolf...am I on the proper track here? Hm...though Snape certainly would have smelled the bastard out...maybe one of the pack promised the bite to Logan in return for his spying on Harry? After this has passed, I really want Harry to become incredibly dependent on his Superios, becoming fearful of even the smallest noises, not being able to be around anything but his own species, having to be held at all times and waking up screaming from nightmares...those sorts of things. Will you be reintroducing Dumbledore yet? I miss the old guy. I understand Hermione's guilt and her need to protect Harry, and I'm also glad to see how much Ron thinks for himself. I still await the purring though...but that should probably come *much* later now, certainly after Harry is over this event...that should take a long while.


    Good times and rock on,

    Dom
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  • From ANON - Bright One on May 27, 2005
    I love your story so far! I can't wait for the next update though because I really don't want Harry to be a werewolf. Maybe his Indago blood will prevent it? I'm not sure, but we will see what you pull out of your hat tonight. Looking forward to it. Thank you for a wonderful story.
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  • From ANON - chantalmalfoy on May 27, 2005
    Wow... poor Harry. Is he a werewolf now? Is the baby okay?

    I do hope that you'll update again soon.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 27, 2005
    not a were-wolf please don't turn him into a were-wolf, doesn't it have to be a wolf that enables the change it can't happen when their in human form?... oh and please say he lost the baby.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 27, 2005
    Don't let Harry Change into a werewolf. Please don't do that.
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  • From ANON - fred on May 27, 2005
    noooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!! Don't make harry a ware-wolf too! this is a great story don't ruin it by doing that to him!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Eowynselixure on May 27, 2005
    Ahhhh! Harry's a werewolf? NONONONONONO Love how Draco rescued him though! I knew he would! Please don't let Harry be a werewolf now, it would be far too complicated!

    *Eowyns elixure
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  • From ANON - Yana on May 27, 2005
    OMG how could they kill a baby
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  • From Menecarkawan on May 27, 2005
    Exciting, but I have one thing to point out. A werewolf can't turn someone else into a werewolf unless they're a wolf. Their human bite doesn't do more damage than the bite itself. Aside from that, very exciting. I'd also like to say that Harry is an idiot.
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  • From ANON - Wildfire on May 27, 2005
    Ok I have never not liked a chapter before but I don't like Harry becomeing a werewolf it's to much. Plus if Indego's and were wolves have always fought you'd think Indego's would be immune to the bite or they'd all be one as when they fight I'm sure they get bit a lot. And further more if Harry is a werewolf he can't breed so that doesn't work either. really I don't think an Indego should be able to be a werewolf it doesn't seem to work.

    WIldfire
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