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Reviews for Indago

By : lojenn
  • From ANON - Diana on May 23, 2005
    GOOD CHAPTER! even though i dont liek the harry/snape thing...i loved the way you wrote this chapter. very convincing and snape like....im glad harry is feeling better...could we see draco in the nest chapter? only a sugestion

    Diana
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  • From ANON - Death in a Pink Boa on May 23, 2005
    Logan is an...interesting attition. Logan/Severus/Harry? *puppy face*
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  • From ANON - MOI on May 23, 2005
    I love your story, and why on earth would I object to its being made better? And hey, maybe Draco'll get his Harry back all the sooner. *squee!*
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  • From ANON - tessa3 on May 23, 2005
    ROCK THE FUCK ON!!!! I LVOE HERMIONE!!! I am not a hermione fan because of her know it all facade... BUT DAMNIT!!! YOU MADE HER FUCKING COOL!!!! LUV IT!!!
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  • From ANON - Rebecca R on May 23, 2005
    Omg on my last post it say feal upset i ment dont feal upset sorrys
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  • From ANON - Rebecca R on May 23, 2005
    Oh sweet heart dont feal rushed! like i said befor i would rather wait for a awsome peice of writing rather than
    Getting the quick and only finding them *ok*. So i cant wait un till tonight!
    But feal upsset or sad ok! just remember that we still love you!

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  • From ANON - twisteds_mini on May 23, 2005
    That was weet. Way to short.... but sweet.
    Please update whenever you can- you know we'll all be anxiously waiting!


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  • From ANON - WretchedScar on May 23, 2005
    Grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr came home last night - no update - woke up at 5:33 AM to see if it was available - grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr -
    no update. WHERE'S THE STORY DARNIT!
    Not right. Not fair. Mean. Very Mean.

    Updated - we all are crying without the latest bit.

    Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah.
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  • From ANON - Instantaneous Gratification on May 23, 2005
    Yo Karen, D/s means that the story will have Dominant/submissive relationships--just like Draco's and Snape's relationship to Harry.
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  • From ANON - Karen on May 23, 2005
    Yeah, me again. Im just a little confused. So Snape and his lady-friend are fuck buddies? Is Draco just sitting alone in his room this whole time? And Harrys misses Draco right? Or did I read it wrong? From how i read it it seems that Harry misses Draco, feels ignored and abandoned, is hurt that Draco gave up so easily and is sad/depressed. Hmmm.. Oh and what is D/s? Always wondered that...
    Let me know when you can!
    --karen
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  • From ANON - shuchan on May 23, 2005
    like it! but i wan' more DM/HP fluff! pweez?
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  • From ANON - Menecarkawan on May 23, 2005
    I must say that when I started reading this, I almost didn't keep on. The way Harry was being treated was simply appalling. I muttled through, ignoring my urge to click off and found that in later chapters it wasn't so bad. That being said, I find the way Snape is treating Harry to be absolutely dreadful. Draco forced Harry to do what he did and Snape in no way has a right to dump all of the blame on the boys. Snape agreed to it. He said he'd do it, then got totally enraged the next day. He prides himself on his control, and when he losses grip of it, he blames someone else. He's a bastard.

    I would also like to know what's going on in Draco's head. Does he miss Harry? Is that why he didn't want them to take apart Harry's little den? Does he feel terribly guilty for throwing Harry down a flight of stairs? I should hope he does. I understand, however, that this story is mostly in Harry's point of view, so I won't ask you to deviate from that set up.

    One last thing and I'll let you go... in cannon, Hagrid generally pronounces his 'h's'. He usually says Harry's name properly, without dropping the 'h', you know? Just thought I'd point that out. Now that I'm thoroughly addicted to your story (I was most upset when I discovered there weren't anymore chapters) I shall patiently wait for you to update again. Please do that soon, though from reading your various author's notes I get the impression that you do so everyday, or close to, so I shouldn't have too terribly long to wait. Until the next, ta!
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  • From ANON - The Gold Factor on May 22, 2005
    I've read your story all under an hour and i must say ITS SUPERB!!!
    You were saying that you thought there was something wrong with your
    last chappie rite? well, I believe its the woman taht's making you feel
    this way. I believe taht in order to make the chappie better, you should
    get rid of her. She contributes nil to the story and I just plain dont like
    her. I've read the reviews to this chappie and I agree with Dominic Shade
    and look-at-my-ding-a-ling-ling. Their suggestions are excellent! I think
    you should heed them. I really hope your fair was good and please update
    soon. I love this story so much!! YOu are garnering more and more reviews everyday!!
    Keep it up!
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  • From ANON - Dominic Shade on May 22, 2005
    I just thought of a way for you to introduce the purring thing on Harry's part. I think it'd be funny if Ron just gave Harry's belly a friendly rub, then Harry starts his purring. You could just make that into a funny situation of Harry making Ron rub his belly again. And this can happen during their potions class, so when he starts to purr, Draco and Snape hear it and instantly wilt at the sound, Draco shouldn't be able to shake off this feeling very much, but Snape should since he's older. And I'm serious about that random lady with Snape, you just don't need her hon, it just feels like extra baggage for the fict. Okay, now I wanna change my guess...are you basing the Indago on Hyenas?


    Good times and rock on,

    Dom

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  • From ANON - reader on May 22, 2005
    Is Haary going to be attacked by werewolves???????
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