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By : lojenn
  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on May 22, 2005
    Oh crap! It's after dark and Harry is heading to the castle alone and there's a pack of werewolves out there! I need chapter 48! How is Draco? What is he doing?
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  • From ANON - LOOK AT MY DING-A-LING-LING on May 22, 2005
    Once again, I must agree with Dominic Shade.
    The lady (Lydia was she?) really didnt work for that chapter.
    I think you should follow DShade's advice and try to make Snape more in character--you know,
    acting paternal but forever denying it. Do stuff like cover Harry up
    with an extra blanket at night, but vehemently deny it later--that's
    soo like Snape to secretly worry about his ward.
    Bringing the lady into the story just brought in much unneeded tension and drama.
    Plus, she really didnt improve the plot.
    Anyways, happy updating and hope you had fun at the fair!
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  • From ANON - Dominic Shade on May 22, 2005
    I know why you don't feel right about this chap....it's the woman. Original characters are fine an' all...but you seriously don't need one here. I'd just expect Snape to be out around the castle more, barkin' at students and such, just tryin' to stay away from Harry. But I really want Snape to take on a more paternal nature. And more grieving and stalking on Draco's part. The Hagrid bit was a very nice touch, so I think you should leave that in.


    Good times and rock on,

    Dom
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  • From on May 22, 2005
    Oh I've read all your chapters in least than a day, and I'm stunned! Poor Harry I hope he and Draco get back together! They belong together and I just think that Hermoine's jealous of Harry and Draco cause she doesn't have something like that! I mean I know Draco hit him but that was only the second time and he felt threatened, I mean and I loved how Draco tried to keep Harry's nest untouched! Draco's sorry I just know he is, and avoiding Harry is just his own little way of dealing with his lost!!! Well update soon, cause I can't wait for the next chapter, this story is getting to good for you not to update! I hope you have Harry and Draco get back together soon!!!!!
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  • From ANON - miku on May 22, 2005
    ROCK ON HAGRID!!!! XXX You go cheerin harry up and all that milarkie!!! xxx
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  • From ANON - Darshu on May 22, 2005
    Mrrr....I don't like your Snape. *pouts* Meanie...
    I like your Hagrid though. He's nice. lol
    I also REALLY like the new chapters. ^_^
    *wriggles around in anticipation of upcoming chapters*
    I also realized that I've been putting the wrong email
    address for the reviews. *sighs* Oh well. I also want
    to thank you for updating so often. :D Not many authors
    update as often or as consistantly as you do. And letting
    us know when you might be late with an update is also
    really appreciated. So, to stop my rambling, I end with a
    THANK YOU and YOU ROCK! lol
    @>-'----
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  • From ANON - skuf on May 22, 2005
    Also: Hermione is great. If it wasn't for her voice of sanity, I don't think I could have stomached it - Harry definitely has a degree of battered!wife syndrome :o/ !
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  • From ANON - rebecca on May 22, 2005
    Oh i hope draco takes him back before there wearwolves get him!
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  • From ANON - Rebecca on May 22, 2005
    So, if todays update was ment for yesterday, then we should get 2 updates today. It's only fair.
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  • From DanishGirl on May 22, 2005
    Awwww, I'm glad that Hagrid could cheer up Harry. Uhhh, and the part with Draco not wanting to destroy Harry's nest, was so cute!! =)

    More soon? Plz?
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  • From ANON - Squall-sama on May 22, 2005
    Wow... where do I begin? I think first off, I should say that I'm rather damned lucky to be able to have so many chapters to read right away. I think I would have nearly killed myself if I hadn't. -_-0 This fic is absolutely amazing--it's totally deserving of it's many reviews and I couldn't think of anything less, you are an amazing and talented author. I love everything about this fic, from the anstiness to the fluffiness to the pairings (I LOVE SS/HP but I also love DM/HP--it's so bleedin' hard to find an even remotely decent DracoxHarry fic out there) to, well... EVERYTHING! The idea is just amazing and the way you write is even more amazing--it really makes the reader feel like part of the story and you want to help them and be a part of whats happening. I just... I really can't describe how beautiful and perfect this fic is and you also have no grammer or spelling problems! That is definitely a plus. And, I'm sure you already have a few people who are helping you our or you have ideas for what's coming up and how to help Harry get back with Draco, or on Snape's good side--or both, but I thought, since you keep bringing the werewolves up they could like.... I dunno, attack Harry or get ahold of him or something and one of Supero's would have to save the day! *laughs* I'm sure you probably have something like that in mind though--or have a nother way to get them back to... er, uh... "normal".>.< Anyway, I cannot WAIT for the next update, but I'll try. *bows*
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  • From ANON - Ravenfrog on May 22, 2005
    I really like where you've been going with this lately, keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Jolene on May 22, 2005
    Poor Harry! Snape is being such a prick as usual. How come Harry's scent doesn't seem to be affecting Snape and visa versa? Harry really has come full circle, back in the cupboard. Sigh. When will he get a break? Soon I hope. Well I'll just sit here and wait for you to get back and post. Waiting.................Waiting,taps fingers..............Waiting
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  • From ANON - IrIdeScEnT on May 22, 2005
    I feel lost without the draco/harry interaction. I do hope they get back together. The baby needs its father......*pouts* WEll anyway, it still a wonderful story!!! and yes IM telling the truth
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  • From ANON - Saucywench85 on May 22, 2005
    MORE MORE MORE! i want harry and draco back together. Why is hermione being such a bitch? oops did i say that outloud? *giggle and grin*

    *gives you a cookie* job well done.

    Lena/Saucy
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