Reviews for IndagoBy : lojenn |
This fic has been my guilty pleasure for the last couple of weeks - one of the reason for which being that I didn't feedback, *slaps own hand*.
Generally I really love what you're doing with the plot and the characters - most of the time you have me grinning with delight :o) !
Two things I'll say, though:
The fic could really use a good beta to catch all the little errors here and there. They are annoying and unnecessarily marr the story. (If you decide to look for one: make sure they know what they're doing - asking for references is legit! - don't just pick anyone who sees it as a chance to get the chapters before everyone else!!)
You don't owe your readers anything - we're getting all this for free!! Please don't fret about being late or not updating every freaking day - there's no way you're going to be able to keep it up, anyways, and we'd all rather you eventually finish the story than write yourself into a corner/be come fed-up with it, leaving it unfinished. In case you didn't hear me: YOU DON'T OWE ANYONE ANYTHING IN REGARDS TO THIS FIC - TAKE YOUR TIME :o)
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