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  • From ANON - Wildfire on May 22, 2005
    evening.... night... werewolves.. breading sub.... BAD COMBINATION!
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  • From ANON - amethyst on May 22, 2005
    hello i am a bit lost indago are canine? intresting chapter. please write more soon.how long before harry has the child? is harry going to go back to his den or the hospital?
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  • From ANON - Alexa on May 22, 2005
    You're right - something doesn't feel right in this chapter. Somewhere in the first part, I think.
    And - as you wrote yourself - once Harry is pregnant the superos must spoil him, not ignore him...
    About werewolfs, I think you should pick up the pace there - we already know that thee is some connection and more information to find out. There is noo need to arouse curiosity - it's already there. Maybe Remus could show up soon?
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  • From ANON - stephanie on May 22, 2005
    Dude i'm telling you great story i love it a lot!!!!! But when are harry and draco gonna get back together and can hermione butt out already i mean my god like in almost all the stories i read about harry/draco fanfiction she always has to be into the buisness and being in control and junk!!!! Gets me mad!!! Well keep updating please!!!!
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  • From ANON - JJ on May 22, 2005
    There is nothing wrong with this chapter. I read what you write as you write it, and this chapter is fine. Snape wants nothing to do with Harry because he refuses to acknowledge what he is. Plus he has always been mean to Harry. Draco was totally absent - since he's been banished it makes sense. Harry's life has gone down the crapper again. Par for the course. I was always mad that Snape blamed Harry for accepting his lot in life. From his perspective he really had no choice. I think Dumbledore is a poop for what he's allowed to happen to Harry. The rest of the school is worse for abandoning Harry, again, to his fate. That line about Harry's life going full circle was startlling. I'm kind of hoping he makes a run for it and escapes everyone and everything at Hogwartz. His life is just too pathetic for words. Then again, I'm still wondering when the warewolves in the forest are going to have an impact on your story. You set them up for a reason and I'm waiting to see what you do with them. Any chance they will accept Harry and finally give him a home and acceptance that he needs?
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  • From ANON - Missi on May 22, 2005
    It's 1:37am, and I just couldn't go to bed without checking to see if you've updated. Does that make me a sad, pathetic addict? Dare we hope that Draco and Harry reunite? Snape's such an ass.
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  • From ANON - elecktra on May 22, 2005
    I loved it!! It was great!! Poor Harry!!! I can't wait to find out what happens next!! So update soon!!!
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  • From TheDarkBeginning on May 22, 2005

    *pounces and hugs author*

    thank you thank you thank you!!!!!!!!!

    *does happy dance*


    such a good CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!


    MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE...please?


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  • From ANON - WretchedScar on May 22, 2005
    THANK GAWD!!!! You UPDATED!!!! YAY!!!!!!! That was way late. But so good!!!!!!! Can't wait for the next chappie.
    Please say that Draco isn't going to NOT do something to make things right between
    he and Harry?!?! Ugh. I can't stand waiting. Make things right.

    Cheers!
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  • From ANON - Saucywench85 on May 22, 2005
    AHHHHH! OMG! i just read the entire story in like 3 hours (not consecutivly. My dad kicked me off a couple times... who needs food when i have good fiction?). SO GOOD and you're SO EVIL! leaving off like that...

    could draco actually care for harry?

    will snape continue to be a snarky bastard (ok so he is a snarky bastard ALL the time but you know what i mean!)?

    Is harry having a boy or a girl?

    WHEN IS REMY COMING BACK!?!

    Who is the father?


    so many questions.

    Also i'd like to thank you for this story. for three breif shinning hours i forgot about the crap in my life, bravo!

    I must admit the whole lizard thing had me worried...then you said dogs so i was like "ok much better"

    If you can't tell it's 2:00 AM i have had 0 sleep so i'm rambling

    LOVE IT! Write more!

    Lena/Saucy
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  • From ANON - WretchedScar on May 22, 2005
    Heyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy - where's our update!
    Had a terrible day at work but figured it'd be worth it cause I'd get to come home and read a new chapter -
    and, And, AND, ANNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNND THERE'S NO UPDATED CHAPTER!
    waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah.
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  • From ANON - look at my ding-a-ling-ling on May 21, 2005
    Dont get me wrong girl, I love you; but honey, I live in the east coast! I go to sleep 3 hours earlier than you do! so PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!! :(
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  • From ANON - Rebecca on May 21, 2005
    Where's today's update?!
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on May 21, 2005
    Oh what a mess! I can't wait for chapter 47! Draco stood up to Lucius. Is he not Indago? Who's child is it? That's the question. Draco just left it at that. No fighting, no talking. Nothing.
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  • From ANON - Alexa on May 21, 2005
    I just want to say that I agree with Domonic Shade - he has some great points.
    Snape's instincts would have to make him fawn over Harry. And a pregnant person should get affection and contact on a regular basis.
    I really wonder where Harry will set up his next nest and where he will get the material from - he already used all most of what the other students had.
    He could, of course, just mail order some things - he does have his own money.
    OH, and by the way, when Harry thought about picking up knitting, I think it might make sence. I know it was half-joke but he would be able to bissy himself when he is stuck in his room - which Snape said he will be, and he could work the stress out, and as far as instincts go - even human pregnant women "nest", and it goes beyond just making a soft denn. They do stuff for the baby, knit, etc. Harry could start buying things for the child. He would probably want to.
    And that would be a perfect opportunity for Draco to suck up - buy the baby some presents.
    Again, LOVE the story!
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