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By : lojenn
  • From ANON - dido on May 21, 2005
    I agree with Dominic Shade as well. You did imply that Harry would have some sort of power or free will against the Superios and I would like to see it. Right now he still seems pretty powerless. Also Snape is very judgemental with Harry (ok fits with canon but). Harry has only known a few months what he is and he is the weaker physically and seemingly psychologically. Yet Snape, who has known of his own condition all his life, could not resist having sex with Harry, even though Harry was obviously there under duress. So Snape has some nerve to accuse Harry of acting like a child!
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  • From ANON - look at my ding-a-ling-ling on May 21, 2005
    I totally agree with dominic shade! Please do all those things: especially the tummy rubbing/purring part...I think that adorable!!!
    Eagerly waiting for the next chappie!!
    UPDATE SOON! LUVS TO ALL!
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  • From ANON - look at my ding-a-ling-ling on May 21, 2005
    OMG! YOU HAVE OVER 1200 REVIEWS!! CONGRATULATIONS!!!SEE HOW POPULAR YOU ARE? WOW! no wonder, your story is great!!! not only is it good plot wise but it also has great grammar and syntax. keep up the excellent job! Most other authors have 1200 hits! you have 1200 REVIEWS AND WHO KNOWS HOW MANY HITS!!!
    CONGRATULATIONS AND UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - MOI on May 21, 2005
    Yes! Draco's feeling remorseful! Encore!
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  • From ANON - Dominic Shade on May 21, 2005
    ...okay hon, in previous chapters, you had Hermione tell Harry that the Superios would be practically fawning over him when he was pupped...this seems to be the exact opposite of what's going on. I find it strange that Draco didn't smell that Harry was pupped, the only way I can figure it is that Draco simply didn't know what he was smelling. I am looking forward to Harry and Snape having a closer relationship, not one of mates of course, but merely of...oh, I guess the only way to relate it would be looking at elephants, nearly all of the herd are female and they have the oldest female lead them and act as the matriarch, pretty much keeping the dangerous males away from the herd and protecting the young. And yes, I do want to see some Snape and Harry cuddling. No matter what the species, when pregnant, there is a need for touch, whether it's of the same sex or otherwise.
    Actually, I like the idea of Snape buying Harry expensive cloths and lining Harry's room when it so that it really is like a nest. But I suppose any actions like that will be after Snape is off of the potion. I can almost see Snape as becoming a surrogate father of sorts. That would be an excellent path to explore, because he already seems like he's 'watching over' the boys, and coming at the last moment to protect Hermione and Harry made me see him as a guardian type. I don't think at all that he's interested in Harry, it sounds more like he's just tired of his instincts, of what he is, he had to deal with it since he was born, with no potion to help him until he was an adult, I'm sure the boys couldn't imagine what that was like since they've always had someone to look out for them.
    I'm really looking forward to you developing Snape's insticts clashing with his shame and conscience, maybe Harry could even help him. I just feel so bad for Snape. And I do like that you had Draco challenge his father in order to protect Harry. I want to see some serious moping on Draco's part, maybe even to the point of following Harry (at a distance) and sending him soft gifts, maybe detaching himself from his friends while going into a sort of depression.
    I'm also still waiting for Harry to make some purring sound unconsciously when he's comfortable that drives the Superios nuts. And I am fully expecting Snape to massage Harry's abdomen, because that is the best feeling in the world. That's when Harry should purr. Snape should just smile lightly at this, being too old and experienced for the sound to affect him too much. Another thing would be to make Harry whimper when he wants something Snape has, like a snack or something, so that Snape grudgingly gives it to him without conflict. Harry could also start sneaking into Snape's bed at night so that he can have his stomach rubbed.
    And again I ask, are you basing the Indago species on ferrets?


    Good times and rock on,

    Dom

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  • From ANON - robyn on May 21, 2005
    Hey Iam so glad to read some new chapters. Iam sorry for Draco as once again he acted without thinking and it looks like he has lost Harry and the baby. But I have this hope that left alone for awhile Harry will want to go back to Draco and they will be able to sort out there feelings. And good for Draco standing up to his dad like that way to go. This sounds kind of mean but for once I just wish that Hermione would just stay out of things. I hope you had a great holiday and enjoyed the rest. I still have a week to go of mine and look forward to reading your updates everyday. Take care.
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  • From ANON - rebecca on May 21, 2005
    How beautiful! Poor draco though i hope in the end he gets his lover back!
    Snape is just to cold for harry! all well every thing will be great no matter what
    hey maby snape might have a change in heart and will in the end
    want the babys to be his so he can care for them and nuture them!
    any ways al ways checking for updates1 but dont feal rushed i would rather
    wait for something incredible! God i love every last chapter!
    You are a awsome writer!
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  • From ANON - chantalmalfoy on May 21, 2005
    I'm not sure what to think about Draco in that chapter... And Snape... ugh. I still want to smack him upside his head.
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  • From ANON - Sydney on May 21, 2005
    Please don't it Snape's baby...I don't think I could bear it. I am glad that Snape has decided to not have any kind of relationship with Harry-sexual or otherwise. I know what Draco did was awful, but I still feel bad for him. He and Harry were happy together for a while-if only he had stopped to think. Please say they will be together again. Maybe the baby will have silver grey eyes? Or blond hair green eyes. Or maybe red hair...haha, that would shock everyone! Or maybe, just maybe, Harry will make a firm decision for himself without the influence of anyone including his friends...whatever that decison may be.
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  • From ANON - Neqs on May 21, 2005
    Poor Harry! It's not easy being him, but when has it been. Maybe it's just my optimistic nature (or my faith in you) but I can't help but feel a bit hopeful. Snape will come off the potion and who knows what the hormones will do when he's near a breeding sub? Also, Draco's confrontation of Lucius gives me hope that he's becoming a bit more mature/responsible. Sorry if I keep yammering on about the plot instead of giving fb on your writing style, etc, but you just write so well! The story just sucks me in. I'm hopelessly hooked. I check for updates about 20 times a day, seriously. So I'm very redundant when I say that I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Missi on May 21, 2005
    More please! I so want to like Snape, too! Maybe Draco will stop being such an ass instead?
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  • From ANON - Reader on May 21, 2005
    Interesting! I am wondering what Has Draco in his mind...
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  • From ANON - Eowynselixure on May 21, 2005
    Ok I can definately see this swinging back in the direction of Harry/Draco! Oh Please! Draco was really sweet letting Harry have his own way, he so loves Harry!!!

    Yes I know your the writer and you decide what goes on but its ME now. Bow down and so my bidding!!!

    HaHaHaHaHaHaHa- (Evil laugh)

    Hm moving on PLEASE, PLEASE,PLEASE Carry on what you started, Draco is in love! Harry is in love! GET THEM BACK TOGEATHER!!!

    But not to soon ay ;)

    BUT SOON ENOUGH

    lol I'm leaving now

    *Eowyns elixure
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  • From ANON - Yana on May 21, 2005
    OMG poor Harry
    why is everyone mean to him
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  • From ANON - shelly101 on May 21, 2005
    ahhhh!
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