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By : lojenn
  • From ANON - manx on May 12, 2005
    I don't know why everyone has a problem with Harry/Snape. I think Snape would be much better for Harry , in this story anyway. He's more experienced and would be a better dominant than Draco is.
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  • From ANON - jollywhizzbee on May 12, 2005
    Hi! I've just discovered your story! It's a tresure! Thank you!
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  • From ANON - ura on May 12, 2005
    Yes, give Harry a loophole. Draco still has to learn his lesson!
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  • From DanishGirl on May 12, 2005
    Awesome chapter, like always.
    More soon?
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  • From ANON - Savannah on May 12, 2005
    A friend pointed me in the direction of your story, knowing I have a hard time finding well-written D/s male/male(/male!) slash, and I have to say, this is the best fanfic along those lines I've read since an excellent Spike/Xander series by a writer named Estepheia, a few years ago. I think you've done an exceptionally good job maintaining JKR's style, characterizations and tone while writing about things that... um... do not happen in canon. Most slash along these lines just uses the characters and setting as an excuse not to come up with their own background, but you've really done your homework and I'm impressed with the amount of Hogwartsish stuff you've kept in while also writing some really scary, beautiful and emotionally engaging smut. Kudos and do please keep writing! I'm especially interested in how the Snape situation is going to resolve itself... it's quite a situation he's been put in.

    One minor thing that's been irking me: when you are describing males by their hair color, it's "blond" not "blonde," and "brunet" not "brunette." The extra E on the end means it's a girl, which has confused me at some points wondering what a blonde was suddenly doing in Draco's bed, along with the blond and the brunet! ;-)
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  • From ANON - Alexa on May 12, 2005
    Each chapter is wonderful! Love the story!
    I admire you fot taking the time to develop the relationship.
    Take as much time as you need to write, we'll be waiting.
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  • From ANON - Eowynselixure on May 12, 2005
    I think Harry should have had a go at Ron for that remark! I also think Hermione's way to uppity and I think they both should learn that Harry can't help the fact that he wants sex all the time!

    Anyway LOVED it as usual and I really love the way Harry was portreyed in this!

    *Eowynselixure
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 12, 2005
    Wonderful story, great techincal skill, a joy to read. I'm finding this an interesting study of sub-culture and culture shock behavior. I liked Snape's reaction to bedding Harry. It reflects the kind of self-hatred that many experience when they find themselves with a characteristic the shoves them, unwillingly, into a not-quite-acceptable-by-the-norm subculture. I look forward to the continuation of your story. Thank you for sharing it.
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  • From ANON - kkpixie on May 12, 2005
    *laugh* *snort* Morning. What a strange way to wake up. I'm off to my lit final. *grin**wiggles eyebrows*

    Good chapter. Yay thoughts and future stuff and Plot. You are a terrible woman and I love you. *sends chocolate*
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  • From ANON - elecktra on May 12, 2005
    That was great!! I loved it. Your doing a great job! I soo can't wait to find out what happens next! So please update soon!!
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  • From ANON - Laura on May 12, 2005
    ....
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  • From ANON - Yana on May 12, 2005
    and i think Draco should grow up
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  • From ANON - lilith on May 12, 2005
    This was a really good chapter plot-wise. It cleared up all my minor problems. So, Draco has an identity-crisis because Severus made him submit? Serves him right. :-) I liked your allegory of pregnant woman. I myself have no kids but some of my friends had that feeling too. Keep on writing!
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  • From ANON - LPhoenix on May 12, 2005
    you scratch that itch harry!!!! keep up the good work! i love this one!
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  • From ANON - viira on May 12, 2005
    I love your story so much!! and more because you updated real fast!! Thanks so much for not keeping us readers in suspense =D Wish you a nice day!
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