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By : lojenn

From ANON - sbkar on May 10, 2005
Chapter 37...Soo... Draco was in his rooms, fuming, I'll bet.. and has he learned anything about being a truly "good" dominant???? He's learned some... but, soon he'll have to consider Harry's needs...more fully.... Real doms know that they cannot break their subs, only bend them, because a broken sub is a broke life...
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From ANON - ura on May 10, 2005
Thanks for the update! You are like a clock! Very reliable.

Draco's sudden (may be too sudden) possessiveness indicates that he has had a change of mind. However, the reasons behind it are not very clear. What brought this change on? Snape's reprimanding? Draco
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From ANON - Stasha on May 10, 2005
OH!!! You're bloody brilliant! Thank you so much for including snape! I think that made the story even better, no matter what other people say. Not just because of the smut but due to the fact that snape has been included in this fanfic from the beginning...I dont know why it was a suprise that he would be included in the relationship. Anyway, thanks so much!
Stasha
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From ANON - BlacklilNiteCat on May 10, 2005
God that was a sexy chapter!! I luv how Draco made Harry say his name for ummm *cough* certain things, a real turn-on!! What's going to happen now that Snape is mad at Draco and there are werewolves near by, oh my!!!
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From ANON - wildfire on May 10, 2005
hmmm that got ugly! Poor Draco.. I'm guessing somthing has to happen to get Snape to talk to either of them again. Maybe harry getting hurt again? It would draw them both together and they'd have to talk. Or if Draco wasn' around Harry, Harry's still in mating season it would kill him, he'd have to go to snape. You said Harry didn't ahve to be fucked... he would be ok with just touching them. Poor Draco though he deffently deaserved it..

Wildfire
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From ANON - War-chan on May 10, 2005
O.O Wow......Snpaey's REALLY pissed off huh? Damn. Thou now I'm VERY sorry for Draco....I mean Draco's been a prick and all but he just lost his GODFATHER!!! Even if he really messed everything up, I have a small hope that Snape might forgive in time.......then there's my more evil side that wants Draco to BEG for forgiveness (just think of it a MALFOY begging on hands and knees telling you how stupid & sorry he is! BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *Ahem*.....ANYway, just to let you know I've read and re-read that threesome for about 3 or 5 times!!!! ^_^ I mean come on EVERYone should love Snpaey!!!! And know to say/type everthing you should already know..........I LOVE THE STORY AND WELL BE COUNTING THE SEC.'S TIL' IT IS UPDATED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ja ne
Can'tWaitCan'tWait!
Miss War-chan ^_^
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From ANON - Eowynselixure on May 10, 2005
I've been reading your reveiws and I'd just like to say:

1. You DARE make this a Harry/Severus I kill you! No really! Not that I see the story going that way you have given no indication that it will do.

2. Princess Dracona is an idiot for not continuing with this fic!

3.Severus/Draco/Harry would not be my preference but I wouldn't discontinue reading if you did send the story that way. I hope you keep Severus as supreme dominant and occasional fuck after this chapter coz lets face it was HOT!!!

*Eowyns elixure
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From ANON - Anon on May 10, 2005
Back again, soz but I've been reading thru your reveiws and theirs a couple of things I'd like to say,

1. If you DARE make Harry just go out wiv Snape as someone suggested I'll KILL you, no really! Not that you would coz I really dont see the story going that way, but you know for my own peace of mind I had to ask you not to.

2. Princess Dracona is an idiot for not continuing.

3. Although I wouldn't MIND a Snape/Harry/Draco it would not be my preference and I hope you keep Sev as distant as you have been. You know Harry has to obey him as does Draco, occasional shag now and then after this chappie but not like togeather forever. Although again I don't sense the story going the relationship threesome way.

4 plz note that if the above DOES happen I wont be like said person in number 2 and discontinue reading I LOVE this fic!!!

Anyway thanks again

*Eowyns elixure
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From ANON - Eowynselixure on May 10, 2005
O.MY.GOD.!!!! See I actually bothered to fully write thats how enamoured, shocked and totally estatic I am with these chapters!!! Poor Draco!!! Poor Harry, although he got off lightly! Im so glad Draco didn't rape Harry...I really am! God I cant WAIT for the next update!!!

Now Im off to go read them all over again, THANKYOU soooo much!!!!!!!!

*Eowyns elixure
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From ANON - Jolene on May 10, 2005
Finally Harry gets some satisfaction!! I don't know why I feel sorry for Draco! He has been so cruel and selfesh and he deserved Snapes wrath but he is so upset I can't help it. Maybe he will have learned his lesson and then Snape will forgive him. Thanks for two chappies , it was a nice treat I can't wait to see where you'll go from here.
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From ANON - Still Emerald on May 10, 2005
Hi there. I just wanted to leave you a quick review. I found your story today and basically read it in one sitting. Lovely. Really good work here. Excellent writing, tight story line, interesting character development. A true "good read". And I have to say, in my own humble opinion, Harry would be soooo much better off and probably sooooo much happier with Snape. In his subservient position, Snape's maturity, patience and self-control would probably be the difference between a happy life and a life of quiet misery. I'm really looking forward to seeing where this goes! Good job!

PS. I agree with your above reviewers. If someone is unhappy about a pairing that has been clearly outlined since the beginning of the story, that falls into the category of, "not your problem".
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From ANON - The Senjou on May 10, 2005
I get the impression from the author's note a couple of chapters back that some people were being negative about Snape's involvement. Ignore them!
You handled the whole situation brilliantly. The threesome was hot and the repurcussions beautifully handled.
I think I praised your originality on Skyehawke, but I shall do so again here. As an addict of Draco!Veela stories I think this orginal take on the magical being scenario is amazing. You've got me completely hooked and better yet you write quickly enough to keep me interested.
Keep up the great work!
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From ANON - Anita on May 10, 2005
Really, I just have to review now because of your comments at the beginning of chapter 34. I do not understand what the fuss is all about?? People are being put of because of Snape and Harry together? Well excuse me if I say this, but those people should read your warnings better, since right from the first chapter, the summary clearly stated the warning "M/M/M" Heck...it even stated DM/HP/SS in the first chapter!!

So, don't apologize, since the event of those three getting it of together was clear from the beginning.

Keep on writting, since I DO read all the chapters!! *bg*
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From ANON - YH on May 10, 2005
Thanks for that. Draco really has had it coming for some time now... And don't worry, I'm not expecting him to change overnight.
Well, what can I say. Well done indeed. You don't have to apologise to anyone about any of the choices you have made with this fic. This is not an interactive story, where we can command the author, and have the story layed out for us the way we like it. I love the fact you are constantly denying us the fluff we're craving for. There are too many fics out there that get too damn mushy. I really respect the way you are portraying Draco. I have been soooo pissed with him, but at least he's realistic.
I haven't ever really been into HP/SS, but you made it work! It was just so hilarious that when Harry finally got some satisfaction, it wasn't done out of consideration, but because the Superos get a kick out of it. So true...
Usually when I follow certain fics regularly, I often have an opinion about where I would like it to go, but with this one I'm just accepting it as it comes. You can take it where ever you like from here, and it'll be great. Just don't leave us hanging, 'kay?
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From ANON - J on May 10, 2005
I'm really enjoying this fic so far and the fast updates, which I'm sure every other author out there must envy just a little. Anyways, I'd like to say I enjoyed the threesome as Snape seemed to have more knowledge and was able to teach Draco the proper way of 'taking' the sub and its benefits. Would it be too much to hope for another threesome? I think their relationship would work out in more ways than one, such as Snape educating Draco more about their race and it's cultures, shaping him into becoming a more enriched individual. Not to mention the benefit it would have for Harry to 'mature' under his care aswell. And I would hate for Snape to be left out all alone in the cold!
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