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By : lojenn
  • From ANON - kaji11 on May 10, 2005
    This story is amazing, you are the author of my dreams, daily updates and oh, for the 2 chapters in one day...I love you.
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  • From ANON - kaji11 on May 10, 2005
    This story is amazing, you are the author of my dreams, daily updates and oh, for the 2 chapters in one day...I love you.
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  • From ANON - Alex on May 10, 2005
    This is fucking genius!! Long and well written and makes me squee and shiver in all the right places. MORE!
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  • From ANON - elecktra on May 10, 2005
    That was a great chapter!! I loved it!! I sooo can't wait to find out what happens next! So please update soon!!
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  • From ANON - dido on May 10, 2005
    Wow two chapters! Thanks. So happy Snape was more informed/concerned(?) about the need for Harry to enjoy sex. I was a bit upset about chapter 33; it did seem as if Draco was getting a bit more considerate of Harry in previous chapters. Or at least not just seeing Harry as a his enemy turned new fuck toy. However your explanation at the beginning of chapter 34 made sense, especially since, as you pointed out, your Draco is very true to canon. More than Draco's behavior, I guess what has really disturbed me has been Harry's total lack of free will as a subicio. Every time his instinct to please overtakes his self respect I shutter. And this is what makes the story interesting: will there ever be a time when Harry doesn't have to submit against his will because Draco doesn't force him?
    Thanks for updating so quickly and for the story.
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  • From ANON - RiddleStar on May 10, 2005
    yay! i skipped the last part of the last chapter, so im quite happy. no disturbing pictures in my mind.^^
    i liked Snapes reaction. i wanted him to be angry and i was also happy that Draco got what was coming to him. another great chapter! keep going!
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  • From ANON - Tinkerhell on May 10, 2005
    Hello I'm not sure if I've reviewed for you before or not so I'm going to act like this is the first time I have. I for one love and adore your story. All of it as it is written.Your writing is very captivating and if you were to write a book I'm sure I would enjoy that as well. Now I haven't read any of the other reviews but from your athors notes apparently theres some concern for the direction of your story.I feel you done a great job in setting the story and presenting the characters.Now I love Draco he is my Fav character and there are many stories that portray him as good pretending to be bad are abused and putting up a front to protect himself, I like those I enjoy them.This isn't one of those stories your Draco is very in character as a snarky,cruel spoiled brat, a damn sexy spoiled brat but a spoiled brat all the same and pheremones(SP) are not gooning to change that over night .Some serious damage with his pride and a crash course in the real world not the one his father created for him is the only that I see will change that and you've done a great job of making the character developement as realistic as possible so don't let others put you down because I think your doing a great job.Now going in a completely different direction I'm curous as to who Snape was refering to when he said " He'll turn over in his grave" was it james(Most likely) or Sirius.don't tell me though I'm just stating my thoughts out loud I like to be surprised.On another note maybe the timeline in my head is off but but the first time Draco and Harry "mated" seemed to be cutting close to that 15 hour deadline with contraceptive potion. again there are a lot of other factors like Harry most likely would begine "Ovulating" that earling during the heat though it maybe possible, or I could be wong in the way I remember reading and a whole day had already past and this just redundant. I know this is getting rather long but I want to get everything out not to much more I promise. One of the reasons I first statrted reading this story was that it was a Draco/Harry/Snape you advertised it we've all been warned so if someone gets squicked out they should remember they were warned a head of time that that was part of the story and shouldn't worry you over it. I want for there to be more snape though I know theres a ton of turmoil and bad history that needs to be over come before that can happen. I'm just afraid they might scare you off the idea though you seem to be able to hold up your faith in your story. I know I sound kinda pushy and bitchie but I really like your story and when I read your replies to revies about people having problems with developments in your story that made perfect sense to me I get upset because its your story. There authors out there who ask for input and ideas from reviews but as far as can tell you've pready much have a set idea of whats going down and people should sit back and enjoy your story the way your writing it. I soind like MOJO JOJO repeating myself over and over again I guess I'll stop here for now( I could go on but I have class like 5 minutes ago) so keep up the good work. and if you feel I've gone to far feel free to put me in my place!!!


    P>S> as I don't have time to reread this sorry if things are akward or spelled wrong but its early and really have to leave for class...oh and !!Yay Harry finalyy got to come!! I really did feel bad for the poor little bugger!Bye
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  • From ANON - Yana on May 10, 2005
    OMG Draco is so horrible
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  • From ANON - sbkar on May 10, 2005
    Ah... chapter 36... So, Draco get some comeuppance, did he? Poor Severus... what ever shall our favorite greasy git do??? Will Harry be a bit more assertive or dark? Will Draco learn anything?
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  • From ANON - Laura on May 10, 2005
    GAH! I don't really care who all got twisted about Harry/Snape action... that was HOT. But then again... I like a side order of Snape with my Draco/Harry.
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  • From ANON - sak on May 10, 2005
    Very nicely done butt kicking by Snape. I wonder if Draco will understand?
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  • From ANON - TeeDee on May 10, 2005
    Oh dear. Draco's not a very happy boy right now, which doesn't bode well for poor Harry! As for Snape? Ouch!
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  • From ANON - derkon on May 10, 2005
    I love your story!!! Your writing style is really very exciting. I like that you're giving a good explanation of the characters' motives and attitudes, and are giving a good story while keeping your main characters in character far better than most fanfic stories. My only complaint on your writing is you're using Hermione as a crutch like a lot of HP fanfic writers - she simply becomes the all important source of wisdom for the reader. My recommendation for that would be thinking more about how you can incorporate her into the story without her being the answer to all life's problems. It's very difficult to find a good balance for your "reader's source of information" to keep the character interesting, and your Hermione is getting a bit too perfect. Maybe have something that only Ron can understand, or something that Hermione's books don't have the answer to. Even doing that once in a while will make both the characters and your story much more three-dimensional. That this is the biggest problem I could find is saying quite a lot for your writing ability! Keep up the great work!

    err... on a random sidenote because I notice these things... in that chapter you mention Snape's lively hood. while it is hogwarts... and perhaps he has a rather lively hood that Draco ruined... I think you wanted livelihood.
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  • From ANON - R on May 10, 2005
    I love your story, it's soooo different than other subHarfy domDraco fics. Loved Snape/Draco/Harry action, you write fabulous smut!!! The 35th chapter was perfect I loved Snape kicking Draco all over the place 'cause he's behaving like regular jerk all fic, especially 'bout Harry. The threesome was amazingly writen, finally Harry got some satisfying action, not just Draco buggering him to furniture. Wonder if Harry really took the contraceptive potion? Please make Draco do some groveling? I know it's not IC, but I loved subDraco to Snape, he surely deserves it. The Snape's speech was describing Draco to T!!! Update soon!!
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on May 10, 2005
    Holy moly! I thought Snape was going to kill Draco. Then was sure Draco was going to rape Harry! I'm sooo very glad neither happened. Can't wait for 36! What happens next?
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