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Reviews for Indago

By : lojenn
  • From ANON - torche on May 10, 2005
    i apsolutly love it so far, the way the plot sudenly changed in chapter 35 was fantastic. i never expected Snape or Draco to react that way upon waking up. very good writing.
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  • From ANON - lilith on May 10, 2005
    That was brillant! Oh, I adore you!
    P.S. Thank you for answering my question.
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  • From ANON - LPhoenix on May 10, 2005
    OMG *mouth hangs open* OMG!!! *gasp* OMG!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Mastin on May 10, 2005
    I love this twist, with Snape furious at Draco and Draco in turn furious at Harry. Is he humiliated at being beaten down in front of Harry, or his own inability to take it out on Harry?

    How will Snape react? Does he realize that it was more Draco than Harry who took advantage of him, or does he see Harry as another victim of Draco's manipulations? I'd assume from the line about 'animal instincts' that it's the latter, but it's an interesting issue. Please write more
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  • From ANON - Alicia on May 10, 2005
    This just keeps getting better! I am finding your exploration of the psychology of this situation fascinating. You're keeping Snape in character as well as Draco. I even think that Harry is remaining in character when Draco and Snape are not in the picture, and you have done an excellent job structuring a sociology for the Indago that explains Harry's sub behavior. Too many Veela fics turn either Harry or Draco into poor characterizations of a weepy female without adequate backgroud for the change.

    You just need to keep issuing warnings up front. This afterall is AFN, people should be able to take some very rough behavior if they have been warned.

    Also, I know this is not up for a vote, it's your decision, but I would love to see Harry end up with Snape. He is displaying far more character than Draco. I think he could protect Harry as he deserves to be.
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  • From ANON - kkpixie on May 10, 2005
    Mmmhm! *squee* Another chapter! *does a happy dance of GLEE*

    Ohhh... but it's so sad. Very well written. It pulled at my heart, and now I don't know who I want to console! I love this fic. *sniff sniff*
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  • From ANON - Barbarella on May 10, 2005
    I first found this fic on Skyehawke (reviewed it there too) and just finished rec-ing it on my journal before I discovered all the lovley extra chapters here (man you update fast, I like it)... well... except for that last one. Ouch. I weep for Draco. I should probably look into a social life.
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  • From ANON - Queen mAlice on May 10, 2005
    Harsh!

    I continue to read with the promises of goodness later on, still loving it!
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  • From Sarryn on May 10, 2005
    The tension and tragedy of that chapter makes my heart ache. I have butterflies rioting in my stomach and an insatiable rapacity for more.
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  • From ANON - Kelly on May 10, 2005
    Oh no. As soon as I review, Snape has an attack of conscience. What a shame; the threesome was very hot. This was very well done though. I will check back tomorrow and see if there is more. I am so loving this story...keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Elizabeth Spiegel on May 10, 2005
    WOW

    what else can I really say....

    except................IN THE NAME OF ALL THAT IS HOLY AND UNHOLY....MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - look at my ding-a-ling-ling on May 10, 2005
    oh well...a nice night foiled!!! Why oh why did Snape have to have a conscience?? Oh well.
    I know this is supremely superficial of me but its true! Anyways, I really hope Snape can forgive Draco and Harry of what they've done...I want another threesome! (I know; I'm the spoiled brat at home!) Atleast Snape taught Draco a lesson--dont manipulate Harry and dont be selfish! I gather that the reason Draco threw Harry out is because he was ashamed that his subicio caught him in such weak state right?? hmm...interesting...you have the animal instincts down pat!
    Anyways, UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!! I LOVE THE FACT THAT YOU ALWAYS DO!!!!!!!

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  • From ANON - ura on May 10, 2005
    Two chapters in one day! You are GREAT!!!

    I love Snape in this fic. He totally earned my respect.

    I am glad that Draco got a lesson. The question is whether it was enough.

    Since Snape is so well at controlling his instincts, does it mean that Harry could as well? Could he learn? Harry deserves better than being a Draco's puppet. Draco needs to learn humulity.
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  • From ANON - Storm on May 10, 2005
    yay! another chapter I'm so happy! *does happy naked dance* Well without the naked part of course. Ok so I'm in a weird mood and obviously no more Happy Harry Sandwich. pooey but ok and I was happy that someone was finally drilling it into Draco's head. I was wondering if he would have to get into real trouble before he straightened out. Can't wait to read the next installment
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 10, 2005
    Wonderfully exciting and nicely done!!!
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